Adagio Dazzle, former siren, now homeless, has to find a way to rebuild her life. The hard way.
She never was good at doing things the hard way. It had always been her way.
This is going to take some getting used to.
Character and story tags may change as the story continues.
Rated teen because of language and other things not meant for kiddies.
Crap! It got approved. Time for the hate to start flowing over me.
7655601 R.I.P :)
Hey man. I'm fond of your story. I like that it's a grittier take on the EG 'verse and it makes sense...would you like a proofreader? I can't guarantee I'll be on a ton after the next couple weeks but I will do my best.
7656803 Thanks! And I'd love a proofreader! A second opinion is something I kind of need, preferably before I publish the chapter. I also kinda didn't notice your comment until after I published the new chapter. Whoops.
I'm liking it so far. And the nickname was genius.. Keep it up.
7656989 Thanks!
Okay, so he's as tall as an Armstrong. But does he sparkle?
Are you a butcher?
7658725 Nah. He's not from the Armstrong bloodline.
7659159 Nope! I just did some research on what being a butcher is like.
Omg yay new chapters!
It's amazing! Do continue!
I wonder when applejack and chrysalis'll make an appearance?
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Thanks! And about Chrysalis and Applejack? I ain't spoiling things!
7661672 hope you don't give up on this series. Do you already have a plan, or are you just making it up along the way? I do hope it won't be abandoned halfway through
7664157 I have a vague plan. I basically have already decided on what events happen, just not how they happen and what happens in between, which gives me some freedom. Which is why the story and character tags can still change.
I'm not planning on giving up on this story, do don't worry.
7664260 phew what a relief. And yay new chapter
Spades is adorable
uh-oh
My gosh, you sure did.
I love the theme ur going with!
Updaaaate
Ouch, poor sirens.
Interesting start.
'They were couldn't get anyone' - an unneeded were.
Seems about right for New York in the 80s.
'and more one than once' - unneeded one.
Wow, this was interesting... hope to read more from this...
7682751 Fixed!
Yayayay! After a week!
took off his gloves you mean
7702787 Oh hey whoa how did that get there whoops.
7658725 look at you asking the real questions.
when is this getting an update??
7757177 When I have more time. School asks a lot of time.
Hope you've been enjoying your break. It's great to see the story active again too.
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Let's hope I can keep it active. :P
I'm loving this story so far. Hopefully Adagio tells the truth about her past during one of their next Tit for Tat sessions. I want to see Jack's reaction
Jack is good in my book.
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... Hhhnng
*thud*
Someone call the Punisher
I guess you could say, it was a clean cut...
✌😐🔫 peace