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Pwnego


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This story is a sequel to Flounce!


This story was written for shortskirtsandexplosions as part of Jinglmas 2017. It's probably not so much of a sequel as a spiritual successor to "Flounce!" And you'd likely want to check that one out for context. If, for some reason, you wanted to read this one without reading "Flounce!" (Maybe you don't go in for the smut - I don't know) you can just read that one up to the point where Flash awkwards hard enough to kill a conversation two rooms over. That... Was about where I stopped before writing this one (I don't go in for the smut - Shrug).

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Comments ( 6 )

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Too late, you've said it and now I need a story with this. PLS

Damn. This was pretty good. Nice and serious at the end there... Sorry I can't say any more, I no good words talk.
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Sunset. Allof it.”

Sunset. All of it.” (the space)

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You-Tried-To-Steal

So, this story was actually pretty sweet. Your love of Pinkie Pie is endearing and bleeds through to make this story a treat to read, and I'm glad I stumbled across it.

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Too late, you've said it and now I need a story with this. PLS

Hm? Oh dear.

Damn. This was pretty good. Nice and serious at the end there... Sorry I can't say any more, I no good words talk.

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for the read. Also, your lack of words-talkiness ability didn't stop you from finding some errors. Thank you for that; they've been fixed. :-)

Loved it in Jinglemas, love it now. Pinkie's at her fourth wall breaching, somewhat unsettling, bizarrely thoughtful best, and Sunset shows just how much she's grown. Truly lovely stuff. And I do hope we get to see that ambience gift put to use. :raritywink:

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:pinkiehappy: Thank you very much; I'm glad you enjoyed it so thoroughly.

It's also helpful and encouraging to hear that I got the characterization right.:raritywink:

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