Starlight Glimmer and Trixie have learned much about friendship and each other ever since they met, but their latest challenge proves to be the toughest yet. As Princess Twilight and her close friends visit a faraway town to solve a friendship problem, Starlight is tasked with taking care of the Castle of Friendship and resolving any related problems, and Trixie agrees to help out.
Unfortunately, that's the easiest part of the day, and it doesn't take long for them to regret helping out.
Thanks to -TGM- for editing.
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*Is judging you.*
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I'll write a Granny Smith story one day.
I know this isn't tagged comedy, but by god if I couldn't stop myself from laughing.
Great work Mana!
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Thank you so much for the compliment and for checking out the story. I highly appreciate it!
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No problem, man.
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JUST DO IT, I DARE YOU!
Reminds me of my grandfather. If the guy doesn't have some things done in a specific way nagging happens.
Moral of the story:Sometimes... you fail, and that's fine. Life isn't easy.
Did I get this right?
nice job! fics like this aren't normaly my thing but it got me hooked!
Ouch Cloud Kicker and Sea Swirl need more then just friendship help they need to have an objective pony between them to keep them from getting caught up on the smaller details. I wonder what the park would be like if Applejack, Rarity, and Fluttershy worked together?
Overall this was a nice story and thanks to The Bricklayer for the recommendation!
Nice
not bad
Just thought I'd let you know, (And you might already know this) but at the time of this writing, this fic is on the feature box.
46:3 is featured now?
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It's still better than the usual choppy clop, displaced BS or dumb fixfics.
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I was just commenting
Carapace said this was a good story. I'm going to give it a go.
nice story.