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Troublesome Beast


I don't know, man. Those weasels were on fire when I got here.

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7340205 I'll take that as a compliment? ^^;; :pinkiehappy:

Can you do a sqeuel with Miss PeachBottom joining the fun? Maybe invite her for a private tour and meets the Prince and Princess with Miss Harsh Whinney guding her to them.

7340243 I've got a lot on my plate at the moment, but maybe! At the moment, I'm contemplating looping some stuff in from Twilight's Thrones here, but I have a fan poll fic to write, and a prior request, and so forth, so it'd be low pri, alas.

Wow, Ms. Harshwhinny took Shining's not so little slip-up...

And then, at the end:

All in all, loved every second!

7340397 Hee! Thanks. Yeah, there's just something about Ms. Harshwhinny that screams table flip, don't you think?

I run into your stories at random :pinkiehappy:

No favorite, I'm not comfortable with the swinging, but thumbs up for Harshwhinny!

7340881 Gracias! Yeah, this version of the pair have an open marriage. They always sleep (in the rest sense) together if they're even vaguely in the same vicinity, will only breed together, and prize each others' happiness over all things, but Cadance's spheres are Love, Lust, and Enchantment. She spreads the beauty and heart of affection of all kinds.

And she likes the way Shiny looks with a hot guy. Or gal, in this case. Though Ms. Harshwhinny's special -- to put it another way, Raven, in my 'verse, has been faithfully serving alongside Celestia for so long that not even the noble houses know when she first started working for Celestia. Cadance has made sure (with Twilight's help) that the same blessing will be spent for Shiny, but they've both agreed to add Ms. Harshwhinny to the mix. They'd have done it even if she'd been uninterested in them sexually; both know an expert when they see them and are transfixed with just how badass Ms. Harshwhinny is. They just consider themselves lucky to have a good partner.

In terms of honor in the world-- earth clan maretriarchs and druids or powerful channelers like Mac can last a _long_ time, but only the druids can hand it out (and don't, the few that are left). Otherwise, the best arcane magic has been able to do is add a decade, almost indistinguishable from the advances from normal medical science/magic. Only the alicorns can hand out anything longer, and no one has ever been able to coerce Celestia to add so much as a second. Heroes or hoofmaidens may get decades, but no amount of power or wealth can get you anywhere else.

>.>

That, and I find aggressive ladies to be hot. I'm sure this comes as a great shock.

This was really hot. I especially enjoy the juicy details of the clop. :pinkiehappy:

7341230 Megapone really pushed me to add 'em on-- and added quite a few himself. I've got a lot to learn, but I am proud of how I'm doing!

What are your thoughts on dragon and pony having sex?

7343330 Spike is Barb in this universe; eventually, she will very definitely be having sex with ponies. Otherwise it's rare in Equestria, but frequent enough in Chi'neigh and Neighpon to form entire subspecies of longhma and ki-rin.

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I thought it might be something like that. I'm getting a feel for how your world works.

7344070 ^^;; Nothing without a reason!

Even if occasionally that reason is "Ooh. Boobs."

7344160

Hey! Hey!

Boobs are amazing. They are ALWAYS a valid reason :moustache:

7344176 o7 I salute your superior logic, sir! :eeyup:

This is probably your best work yet.

Keep improving, I'd love to see where you can go.

7345855 Oh, wow. Thank you very much! I will definitely keep trying!

You are honestly quickly becoming one of my favorite clop writers.

Keep it up. :ajsmug:

7346233 ^^;; Thank you so much. RL has hit me with a selection of hammers, so there will be a slowdown, but I still expect to keep putting things out.

Absolutely hot! Harshwhinny can sure take a huge cock! Loved it! :heart:

7391458 Thanks! Yep; having access to someone who meets the Princess of Love's standard on tap is not a bad job perk if you get along with him. :)

I mean... not really my schtick, but Harshwhinny's presence makes anything sexy.:heart:

7398571 She's just awesome that way. Like, _seriously_ awesome.

Not really seeing any references to Shiny's actual size.

7479976 There are two to his height, but unfortunately it looks like all but one of the references to the fact that he's at least as broad in the shoulder as his foot taller wife were truncated during editing, and it doesn't look like there's a good place to put them back in. Especially since I see a few other editing induced typos that need correction.

7480023 awesome story, have you considered doing one about ms peachbottom? You know, the false inspector? In her episode, she's shown to be strong enough, to crash through obstacles and doors without trying, she cramps up, if she has to stay still for too long, and she freaks out in small places, make her hyper, and the chaos should be preprogrammed. (Especially in a setting, where hypers aren't common, or if she's an unusually large one) :raritywink: her being not from equestria, but from mustangia, can lead to culture clash/not being used to smaller ponies induced shenanigans.

10 outta fukken 10

7872271 Thanks!


7871623 She's certainly on the list of interesting characters, but I've got too many projects open at the moment, I'm afraid.

This was a hot read. I liked it.

Unprofessionalism? You are a disgusting individual I don't know how you live with yourself. Making a fan fiction that is not professional that is one of the reasons we will fail as a species. Get yourself together and act like and adult.

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I shan't, and you can't make me, as per the Union of Smut-Makers' Guidelines, Chapter VI, Section IX, Subparagraph 6.9.

Or rather, you can't make SHINING, since even the Princess of Love has not been able to tame the Super-Goof once released from his military service.


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Thank you kindly!

This was pretty good. It took me longer than I’d like to admit to realize Shiny was railing her the whole time, but still quite good.

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