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Troublesome Beast


I don't know, man. Those weasels were on fire when I got here.

Comments ( 21 )

This is wonderfully written, I look forward to seeing what happens next!

8480665
Thank you very much! More is just waiting on editing.

I like this keep up the good work. :twilightsmile:

8480962
Thanks! Part II of the prelude is in editorial hands, and then I have most of Day 1 completed with Day 2 started; this is going to be an odd ride.

Luna was starting toughen up, to reduce the personal and metaphysical gap on the squared millennium of Celestia's thousand years holding Sun and Moon combined.

I read that as Sailor Moon. Did a double take .. "oh Sun AND Moon" Silly me.

8483097
*laughs* That would be an odd crossover.

(To give you an idea of my internet olds, the two biggest fandoms in fanficery when I got on the internet were Ranma 1/2 and Sailor Moon)

Does hyper everything include dicks? I always love futa romance, and the bigger the better.

this is awesome, i hope u will continue it

9386078
I have very little emotional or mental reserves these days, and even typing becomes exhausting/painful quickly, but I want to finish everything I've started, so I'm going to try. I can't promise timeliness, especially once we get past the chapters I already have written, but I am going to try; thank you!

9364783
I appreciate that, thank you! I will be trying.


8610773
This is part of an established continuity for me; none of the above are futa, though they're capable of creating transformations when they choose quite easily. That said, this is mostly lesbian in my head, so such incidences will be secondary. That said, obviously, penetration has its place with things other than tongues, fingers, and fists, so it is something that will be oversized and oversticky when/if I can get it in. Celestia in particular is quite fond of conquering cock when she gets horny, about a balanced mix of dick vs. pussy vs. both enjoyment. So she may very well 'force' Twilight during their games or Twilight may volunteer to shapeshift to provide her beloved with what she wants.

It's something I feel like I should cover, but I get tired very easily-- it would likely be a part of a new chapter, and those will be slow. My apologies.

9408686
Thank you very much! I will try to have more to bring out.

Imprisoned in Princess Cleavage, all while mammary throat-bulged? Yes please.

Apparently I opened this story on the 4th, (day of uploading) with the firm intent to read all the hyper dom/subby goodness these stories are known for, and this story has been hidden away on my multiple open tabs all this time till today.

9419447
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Twilight enjoys the rides, make no mistake. She just feels they're _undignified_. Celestia finds this adorable.

Twilight is glad she loses these arguments.

How in the hell can you say this is "unpolished"? This is incredibly powerful and well written.

9608853
Thank you very much for the kind words. This was written in a time period where my health was better anyway but there are lots of places where the porn could be hotter and the writing tighter. Editors are amazing, I miss mine. But I'll try to get everything I have raw at least complete to be pushed out.

You know I wonder what was Twilight’s first time like as an Alicorn? That might be a good basis for another story.

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