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Troublesome Beast
I don't know, man. Those weasels were on fire when I got here.
Troublesome Beast
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Two things:
1st. Oh my gosh, that was so hot!
2nd. Funny, he doesn't look druish...
When's chapter 2 out???
Yes! Thank you based Troublesome Beast!
thats some good shit right there 100 100
I love you, please have my story-babies!
7420256 Given that there's a non-zero amount of influence from both your work and our conversations... :)
7420152 Meep. ^^;; Thanks!
7419970 Thank you for the starter request!
7419727 ^^;; Thank you! And, well, no horn, no wings; he's not a druish prince, after all. And yes, as per the Q&A, Applejack is considered to be the druish princess, why do you ask? Though she's perfectly proud of her old nose, and has kept it. :)
7419760 I was originally planning for about 1pm pacific time today, but due to RL circumstances, I will probably not be available then. So how about... now?
7420675
There was a not-insignificant amount of resistance against immediately putting this on the 'favorites' shelf, so as not to betray my methodology of categorization. The story is that good. Spoiler alert: as soon as the second chapter goes up, instant Fave and TDF shelves.
...And you caught me on the backfoot, again!
7420728 *pats* ^^;; I just hope you continue to enjoy this chapter where some of my strangeness came out to play, especially with the desk.
Another hot chapter! I'm so glad the Orange couple get the love they need.
Stuff like this is what I meant when I said I want to crawl inside your head for a while. 'Tis simply astounding!
I need to know what, exactly, that note said. I hope you are going to reveal it in the next chapter, else i'm gonna pull a Harshwhinny, and flip a desk!
7420814 "Let us not go to Canterlot, it is a silly place." But more directly, I do have to thank Mega for coming up with a better name than my original "Walk Street" there. As for the sign... so much as there is any plot happening here, and there really isn't, its contents will become known next chapter, aka tomorrowsville. Believe me, while Juicy's earth pony magic may only be "warleader and clan matriarch," she knows some impressive Words of Forbiddance in the corporate world. :)
7420776 ^^;; It gave me a chance to indulge in my sense of the kinky, with two consensual, married, loving partners, and some real strangeness, like what Mosely has planned as a capper, you might say, to the shenanigans in chapter 3.
matrimony? Scandalous. Ugh be reasonable! What if the children saw such horrid sin?
You're fun to read, Beast.
7420965 *sniff* My shame is infinite! There may even be snuggles. Or silliness!
And also thanks. :)
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This so reminds me on "Crystals and Diamonds", when I made that a spoilered tag as well. I think Bronystories made a joke about it. Given that it is sort of rare, it might as well be a fetish, the the same comedic vein that says that on the Internet common sense is a superpower.
7421354 It adds a smile to my face whenever I read it or write it that way; as though it's a part of those sort of old running jokes like Juicy and Mosely have, and it just takes a little bit to set the giggles off again.
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You're one of my new favorite writers.
...
I think because, and this will sound strange, because I can trust you. I can take your word on writing and expect it to be "pure" in some sense. I don't have to apologize for the things you make when I mention you to others, defend my own love of your stories or say "I'm a fan of them but their work can be rough..." You make beautiful things without twisting them, or imposing some kind of required darkness or trick. You're sincere. More than anything else you are sincere, and sincerity is the true rarity.
7421554 Given how amazing your work is, I don't really know what to say except two things: Thank you very much, and I will try to be worthy of your trust.
> Loving, straight, consensual sex between a married couple
You *sicko*, I can't believe the filth that gets popular here.
(But seriously, this is fantastic!
)
7423672 I'm so sorry... My muse drives me, it's terrible! (Thank you. :) )
Yet another hot chapter! Keep up the good work.
7424551 Glad you enjoyed! One more to go tomorrow, and then perhaps the other two days planned a bit further down the road as separate stories. :)
7420814 I hope her words of warding were not too disappointing. Simple "magic" works best. :)
For some reason it warms my heart to see this couple so fucking (literally) madly in love with each other.
Begin reading 12:15 pm, est. Story quotes mark 'session' timing.
Beginning 1, 12:33 pm, est.
Ending 1, 12:40 pm, est.
Pause for recovery, while double-checking math and timing. Reading resumed at stop point, 1:00 pm, est.
Beginning 2, 1:08 pm, est.
Ending 2, 1:18 pm, est.
pause for second afterglow, resume reading at 1:23 pm, est.
Finish read at 1:36 pm, est.
Phwah! That was sooo hot! Great read!
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Quite so, but it cannot ward against nosey, panicking teens, I'm afraid!
7427016 You're going to enjoy Chapter 4 even more, though alas, panicky but otherwise decent Apple interns do not figure. Juicy smirking about her social prominence rivals and then probably the most sloshy thing I've written yet, barring the one point in late Chapter 35-36? Somewhere in there of Hunting Season where the spooge backwash out of the sub becomes several feet deep in their room, of course.
7426884 I have to admit, being happily married and kinky I maaaay have a slight bias there. But I find the Oranges individually fascinating. We see them as background elements in both Apple socialization (They're in the reunion Applejack organizes) and Manehattan (Aunt Orange is shown walking in Manehattan with Babs Seed but the showrunners don't connect them as mother/daughter; if they had, I think AO would have been local branch directly under AJ for me, rather than her own closely related tree) being pretty decent people. I got the impression before Mr. Ghostman made his impression that they were supposed to represent parental-figures who just didn't understand AJ without breaking the absent-parent vibe, but on closer consideration, they seem to be much more than that.
They accept AJ in with open arms and no apparent prior request or communication (though you could presume there was some). They take it upon themselves to teach her what she's asking for, and apparently do so in a way that both works very swiftly for AJ (though I assume she's also very smart, like the rest of the Six, yes, even Dash in her way) and leaves AJ with no later resentment of them. They're frankly portrayed as kind and generous people of apparent wealth and means-- that apartment, in New York-equivalent? With that kind of society? Yeesh, heck yeah, that's upper class something!
So between my personal belief that good people should have good sex (not 'good' as in 'morally puritanical' but as in 'they have fun with it because they've got positive socialization), and that kindness, generosity, and strong family empathy/ties are pretty good signs of the sort of people who have good relationships with each other, too, it wasn't hard to see them as being not just happily in love the way Mr. G requested, but madly thus. Everything else kind of snowballed from when I finally had them 'click' in my head (after whining to poor Mr. G in PMs for a bit) and then pushed that into my fanon.
I'll admit, the serendipitous fact that Mosely looks like he's got big leaves on his head more than makes up for the fact that his canon name is Mosely. Which has to be one of the most obscure MLP references I've _ever_ seen. I'm not even sure that I've got it right, but "sounds like weird upper class name" plus one dude partially responsible for a particular cultivar of orange. I'm just boggled, and I seriously applaud it if it is the case.
...Impregnation by swimming? that's all up in my zone, as it were!
Hotter & hotter!
7427152 Oh, no impregnation there yet... Twilight is the Alicorn of Magic and she's taking precautions. Actually, they're all taking precautions but there's going to be some... events because goodness, do I love preg kink >.>
7427399 Hope you like the finisher, then! Thank you much!
The ending of this chapter. I like it. ANOTHER!
7427460 Like a goof, I forgot to mark this complete, which it is. I do have plans for the anniversary dinner, and if you think Juicy won't be groping Mosely up during dinner, I may ask you to re-read. And for the day after. They're backburner right now for a few other projects, but in a few days a very squooshy sloshy Hunting Season page will be up, and a loving relationship moment between a different power imbalance: Luna and her high priestess/archmage/submissive lover. So there will be things of a kind, but our view into the Oranges specifically shall need to wait for a bit to reopen.
Also thank you very much. I'm extremely proud of this one, and very glad of the help so many people gave me in making it worthwhile.
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The pleasure was all mine. This story is now one of my top ten romantic-clop fics. Juicy and Mosely are simply precious together. I shall wait for your updates eagerly. I will be watching you.
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I meant this, right here. Bittersweet though it is, if Juicy's wish is granted, I happily remove this work from my TDF shelf, signifying a happy ending!
7427957 It's not a bittersweet ending, though, or at least it isn't intended to be. Juicy won't feel unfulfilled if she doesn't have more kids, she'll just be happy if she does get them. She's insanely happy with the way her life is, but she's open to more. It's part of her CEO/type-A personality drive. They can afford kids, the kids would be healthy, and she adores a big family. She'll find other things to do (Mosely and corporate conquest, mainly) in the absence, and never find it a lack. :)
7427556 Thank you! I really appreciate that. Other than my non-hyper/non-clop secret project, in the next few days, a few Hunting Season things should be coming out-- the next chapter of the main line, and a little branch as what Luna's doing with (and to) her archmage to set up for Luna's non-Hunt related activities. The latter's going to be a bit odd; some of it will be dealing with what it is like for a goddess to have erotic relationships with mortals, like her archmage, hoofmaidens, and her thestrals; some of it will be sex-magic training for poor Hopper, whom I still haven't decided whether or not I'm going to actually try to write out the threatened scene where he's bridging below and she's making a U with her body above, just to torment the boy. :) I hope you enjoy the less-esoteric stuff at least!
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Not the ending itself, no. But the thrill of having a story-in-progress to look forward to, that is what I have lost here. And that is, most assuredly, bittersweet! To be honest, though, impregnation is one of my favorites, so I'll hold on to that fantasy, until explicitly denied by you.
7428073 *laughs* Well, I won't say either way about THIS instance, but pregnancy will DEFINITELY be a theme in Hunting Season down the road, including some places where I'll be showing timeskip just because I have a story I like there. If I remember to do it in time, Nurse Appreciation Every Day may get a sequel next year (not set a year apart, obviously) but set on and around Redheart being pregnant, either the impregnation or sex while she's pregnant, or both. And I'm more than cool with doing a story ABOUT someone who is specifically pregnant, once I get the rest of my increasing load cleared.
That said, some of the pregnancy-esque conditions will be showing up much sooner. Because slosh.
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...Woah, just had a flashback to when I first read Trouble's Tales off the now-defunct VCL. Glad I've got them saved to a flash drive!
7428936 Well, this isn't a kinky thing yet, let alone slavery, but. Yeah, the rituals will get weird. :)
To clarify, I'm the one tormenting Hopper. Luna's just doing it because that's how the magic works.
7428962
And now you know why long chapters/stories don't phase me...
I'l not really sure... but was there a nipplefuck in this chapter?
7433663 Not... precisely? If you mean when he was nursing from her, Juicy has a huge rack. It's mostly still perky, but there's a lot of padding, so she was able to literally squeeze the one breast around even Mosely's oversized dick to masturbate it while she sucked him off. Honestly, given the proportions, I may be stretching things a bit but then again... so do they. :)
7433673 Ah, like that. Thanks, I suppose that the coverart got me confused.
So, just be be clear.... for comparison, what is as big as triple Z-breasts then?
7434895 http://aryion.com/g4/view/306925 is a beautiful little app, though it's limited on the band size; Juicy technically is a bit bigger in the band. The 'normal' end, call it A through E, is also a bit over-coarse on the grain, edging to highball, but it provides a decent overall scale, and I can just shrug and say approximation easily enough. I do wish that they had the 'doubles' like DD or GG, etc. To scale for her and come up with comparisons, went with 60Z+3, at 6'. Each boob is about 53#, a little more than what their numbers would imply, with a diameter of about 1.53 feet and a volume of 1615.73 cu in (26.48 liters). For those keeping track, that's bigger than a toddler, each. They do tend to expand and compact a bit around that because of the lactation enchantment, but not overmuch.
And yeah, I just figured it was the best I'm going to find. No spare dinero for commissions. ^^;; And it IS beautiful!
I haven't been able to comment on this yet, but just let me say Beast, you knocked this one out of the park.
Like, just a great job. Seriously.
Fuckin hot through and through.
Another story of this quality and you've earned a follow.
7449663 Wow! Thank you very much! It was a culminating effort, and I really have to thank my editors, especially my spouse and Megapone, who both found some pretty significant patterns that have changed my work for the better overall. I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and I hope you'll enjoy the next independent story when it surfaces. :)
SO HOT!
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^^;; I'm very glad you enjoyed! It was an interesting writing process-- imagining people with hyper sexual characteristics but not size or musculature, and how that would alter how they had sex.