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Nalesia


... and the reason is to be with your friends!

Comments ( 66 )

Not bad.

I do wish there was more.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Well, I suppose everyone needs a hobby.

7308402
I enjoy some of your things too!

7308525
Thanks. And me too...

7308907
Tsk. It's her Profession.

Beautifully written. Celestia has fellatio down to a science and an art.

Hm, could be a functional premise :P
See you went with a human gloryhole, those are more popular than the equine though. As well, that's the version most people are familiar with hehe xP Still, might consider giving it a read sometime. Mostly to see how you portrayed Celestia~

What an interestingly serious and straightforward gloryhole fic. Usually there's some kind of gag to be had, someone stumbles on the occupant, through the sound of their voice Celestia realizes she's sucking off someone she knows (this one often coincides with futa and the subject is Twilight/Luna/Cadance), something, but instead it's just a simple bit of gloryhole and cock-worship done well.

Nice job!

I wonder how Luna would take it if she found out about this.

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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it.

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Hope you'll give it a try. :)

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Indeed what I was going for. Good to see that's appreciated. I have to admit, even I was tempted to add some cheap 'twist' or something, as its just too easy and these scenarios basically ask for it. But I managed to resist, probably for the better.

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Me too. Could be interesting.

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There's nothing wrong with it. Some of those fics are really funny! But it definitely makes yours stand out, and since it's a well done fic besides, standing out is good!

Really good and to the point, my only complaint is that there wasn't more, so that's a good sign.

I say!

Jolly good, ol' chap.

Celestia let out a long, throaty, ‘Ahh’, as if she had been severely dehydrated and just had her fill.

Plot twist: It was exactly like that.


Nice story.

Celestia has an interesting (unconventional, but well intended) idea for an leisure activity.

I really like the idea of Celestia moonlighting in all parts of her city from time to time. She can suck a cock, swear like a sailor, play an instrument in the park, fight dirty, win eating contests, crawl through sewers, bake a high quality meal, and so on..

This was very well done! A great peek into how the princess gets a little "stress" relief. Wonder if Luna would partake in the festivities?

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Oh! It's you, from The White Dove. Awesome.

7313100
Yay!

7313257
Thanks. Well, I suppose that's what happens when you're stuck in your prime for the bigger part of eternity.

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I was totally with you and nodding along until, "crawl through sewers." What the hell? :P

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Thank you.

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Adventuring? There's always a sewer level. With monsters. And unlikely treasure. I'll admit that was in the back of my mind.

I adore the concept of Celly moonlighting somewhere within Canterlot's seedier - no pun intended - underside. Whoring, ring-fighting - personal favorite! - , vigilante-ing, y'know, something really un-Princess-y. Hence, this made my day.

I just saw this on youtube narrowated ^_^

I loved it.

7313991 If Celestia as a brawler is your thing, you should check out To Dethrone a Princess by Codex ex Equus.

Simplicity sells. And that's not a slight on the writer, that's me clapping my hands in a "well done".

Oh cool, exactly 3000 views.... Well then, let's start chApter 1....

Whoops, sry

Very tastefully done. It wasn't vulgar in the slightest, which I appreciated.

I liked this, though I was expecting her to get fucked while blowing another stallion. Overall though, I did enjoy this. There were a couple of things I noticed, however.

1: When you're describing things like this: "A white coated" it should be: "A white-coated". I noticed you didn't use hyphens when you should have in most of the situations here, too.

2: You forgot to capitalize Saturday in the first paragraph.

Other than that, I didn't see any grammar mistakes. Tis a rare treat to find stories that aren't full of 'em. :twilightblush:

Also, I know you can benefit a lot by adding this story into more than just six groups, and it seems one of them is someone's read later list.:facehoof: Also, you can also provide a link to this story on Reddit, through the ClopClop subreddit. I get lots of views from there, and it's a resource that every clopfic writer should take advantage of.

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I was surprised he wanted to read this story! I cannot listen to him voicing my dirty mind out loud, though, but I'm glad you enjoyed. :P

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First story, so I didn't want too much on my plate. Very nice to see that's appreciated regardless.

7315031
Cool. :p

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Thanks. Tasteful and 'believable' was something I was going for (as far as that's possible, anyway).

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Thanks for the feedback.
I just looked up the Saturday thing as I was sure you were wrong... but you aren't. It isn't capitalized in my native language, so that probably threw me off. The hyphen thing... Yeah, that makes sense too. Learned something new. =)

Hmm, I haven't added this story to any groups myself, as I don't feel very comfortable promoting my own stuff and am not entirely sure how that works. I'll have a look, though. Thank you.

For what I can only assume is your first clopfic, this is written amazingly well. The descriptions were spot-on; they were the highlight of what I enjoyed.

I would like to see a sequel. My idea for that would be to have Celestia waiting in a pitch-black room for a stallion, whom then proceeds to ravage her. The idea behind the dark room is to keep the guise of anonymity, but allow Celestia to remain unnoticed. Largely the same idea as mentioned in Blindsided.

Very well-written. I usually don't favored stories that centered around cock worship and gloryholes, but damn wasn't that very hot. :twilightsmile:

I probably won't read this, but I really appreciate how straightforward the summary is

Not bad. Little short maybe? In any case I like how one higher up royalty can accept belittling themselves, or otherwise getting messy in order to treat them right.

This brought in mind one other idea I had. One where Queen Chrysalis siguises herself into a common changeling named Xenia, or Xena and proceeds to do similar stuff like Xenios Zeus did in the Greek mythology ((as in he shapeshifted and tested their hospitality)). Anyway... nice I guess?

Why is she doing this... i dont get it

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First thing I've ever written, actually (ignoring the half-finished, abandoned stories). That's why I went for something simple, that I felt confident I could at least finish. Thanks a lot, that's good motivation. :) A lot of that credit goes to my editor, though.

I kinda feel I've exhausted the brothel idea for now, so I probably won't have her return just 'cause she feels like. The intro, the justification and such, were, imo, a big part of the story.

7318508
Nice that it grabbed someone who isn't into this. :)

7319126
Short, yes. But I feel I've written everything there was to write. Anything else would just be bloat. So, thanks. I guess...

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You shouldn't read 18+ stories when you're not 18 yet.

7319508 I guess that's fair.

7319508 But, ive read 20+ syories on this site so far...

I enjoyed this. Thank you for writing this. It's hard to come by well-written cock-worship without it turning ridiculous or slutty. Great job!

Excuse me while I wipe drool from my mouth.

SHL

This is good. Very good.

I really hope to see more of this in the future. You earned a thumbs up, a fav and this:
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Comment posted by Rhombicosidodecahedron deleted Jun 21st, 2016

7321298 he told me not to read 18 or more stories...

7321502 If you don't get what he means, you either live under a particularly cozy rock or you are not of legal age.

7322525 i live in a house guys... cmon now. This is getting ridiculous.

7321298 how do you know your wordcount? Besides, I doubt you've read anywhere NEAR a Billion words. Diaries of a Madman is just about 2million, so you would have to read it in full around 750 times to read 1.5billion and i'm sorry, there isnt nearly enough time in your life for that. Think reading the entire harry potter series +-1500 times

Edit: using some quick (and general, no preciseness BUT will give an accurate enough answer) maths regarding the site's Estimated Reading Time and your wordcount, rounded to 1.5bil, it would take you 12.388825505 straight YEARS without sleeping or eating etc, just straight reading to read that.

Sure you've read that in a 4-5 year old site.

7321502 Well unless you're a second grader, he can go f*ck himself! 8)

7322788 Are you trolling or just don't understand that by 18+, he meant that you should be AGE 18 or higher to read it?

Comment posted by Rhombicosidodecahedron deleted Jun 21st, 2016

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While I'm not sure if s/he really read all of those words, this site has (or at least had at one point recently) a word counter for each story read on this site. I would be willing to believe if he spent the last few years of his life using FIMFiction as his main hobby, he could quite possibly actually read the equivalent of a billion or so words. Especially for the particularly fast readers like myself who can binge read stories like "Fallout: Equestria" or "Background Pony" (two utterly massive stories of rather high quality if I do say so myself) within a day or two. Reading, especially about the many worlds generated here alone, can be one of the most captivating and inspiring past times and a dedicated reader can consume thousands of, if not close to a million, words worth of literature daily.

Sometimes it's the only escape from our reality that we have on hand.

Though in this case, he has only been around for about a year so unless he can provide an impressive alt account, I doubt his count is very accurate.

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When you run a search without anything in it - which is what you are doing - it returns everything. That total word count is for all stories on this site, whether you read them or not. If you don't believe me, check it before you go to bed and then check it in the morning and you'll see that it goes up even if when you didn't read anything. There used to be a words-read-by-user counter, but it was removed back in 21012.

7323523 Well, shit. I learned something.
*jumps off a bridge*

7323248 I have been reading on this site for a few years without an account, so that could explain it.

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