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"I haven't seen a bigger waste of talent since Dan Marino." -Lucky Seven; Want to support me?

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Spike feels like a Dragon without purpose and without anything to offer his friends. He leaves Ponyville without warning his friends, in an attempt to find his purpose on his own.
Princess Luna finds Spike and shows him the nightmares that his friends have been having in his absence, in an attempt to convince him to return to Ponyville of his own free will. Spike learns that dreams are the quickest road to the heart.
EDIT: 1000+ views! Thank you all so much. I consider this work to be my magnum opus, and I'm glad to see that it received some attention!

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Comments ( 59 )

This was awesome, well done.:twilightsmile:

Beautifully written, brilliantly executed. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Gotta say i loved this story, though personally i would love to see celestia's rant to spike.

Most of the dreams didn't really do anything for me emotionally, except Twilight. Even Raritys was too weird and abstract.
Though I couldn't do better myself...

Wow, this was fantastic. I really like the advice Luna gives Spike about helping others of his own free will. That sounds like something wise she would say. Great job!:twilightsmile:

This needs a sequel focusing on Spike's and Rarity's relationship.

Lucid dream?

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A lucid dream is where you're dreaming, but you know it; so you are able to influence what happens in your dream.

7302306 Oh.

Are you going to write a owner and pet fic later?

7302313 I may, but I would have to come up with a solid idea for the story first...
My inspiration simply comes to me for these stories.:twilightsmile:

I personally thought Luna was full of bullshit from start to finish.

What right does she, or anyone else, have to ask that Spike forever put the wants and needs of others ahead of his own? To have no destiny but to help others in their own? To just accept that he'll have no worth apart from what others place on him? Seriously, fuck her.

Bullshit, bullshit, and more bullshit. It's not enough that Luna convinces Spike to just accept being a tautological slave, but convincing him to be happy about it? No thank you, I'm not buying any Stockholm Syndrome today.

Still not interested in this type so nope.

Well that was a great story. This need some sort sequel, but still fits perfectly fine on it's own.

7477197 Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I consider this my magnum opus.

7477450 It's well deserved of that. I actually had this save on my read later for at least a month before I finally read it. Now I'm like 'Why I didn't read it sooner'. This was really good.

Just... screw Luna.

Beautiful. Just beautiful. :fluttercry: Although I don't like how everypony wouldn't let Spike find out his purpose. But either way I still love this story. :twilightsmile:

7568854 Thanks a lot! I'm glad you enjoyed!

This was a amazing story. :raritywink: It would be nice for a sequel. I will definitely fave this story. :pinkiesmile: Also you got another follower. :twilightsmile: Thanks for this beautifully heartwarming story. :pinkiesad2:

I enjoyed the story. Spike thought he was useless and yet thanks to Luna's help he saw how important he really was...well almost. He thinks he is sacrificing his needs yet one's destiny can be found anywhere. One thing is certain, he needs to have a serious talk with Rarity upon his return. Good story I enjoyed it and keep writing. Not necessarily this story but as a whole. Thank you for the fic.

7606070 You're welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed!

Thank you for writing this gem. Magnum Opus indeed. :moustache::twilightsmile::raritywink::yay::ajsmug::rainbowdetermined2::pinkiehappy:

“To be forced to work for the sake of others is slavery. To live only for yourself makes you naught but a bitter hermit. But to dedicate yourself to helping others, especially those you care about, of your own free will and desire…that is a lasting happiness, and a great purpose.”

Still great the 5th time around!:twilightblush:

So uh...

I'm also playing around with a pseudo-SpikeDash story in my head

Is this still a thing? Cause I'd be super happy if this was a thing!

7819121 Thanks for the compliment...As far as the Spike Dash idea...It's been puttering around in the back of my head but I'm having trouble getting to it. I'm going to continue the storyline of "Seraphic Snuggles" as a series which will include Dashie though :)

7819194 can't wait. Expect a gift for your participation in the sparity comp. Soonish! Hope youre having a wonderful christmas!

7819218 Ooooh, a gift! Sounds interesting. Thanks for the nice words :scootangel:

7819218 And Merry Christmas to you too!

8020872 I know Luna means well for attempting to force Spike to return back but she probably doesn't their were other reason why he left as well. For starters, the times he was always left behind whenever the girls go on adventures or attending parties, meeting each others family members, not to mention he's rarely thank for all he's done for them, they seem to constantly tease & use him for their pranks, they're own selfish needs to make their lives easier, & because he's not like other dragons(not like that's a bad thing & it isn't) but to him that hurts deep down & Spike himself knows that. None the less Rarity doesn't take how he really feels for seriously as well.

8020990 Spike chooses to come back of his own free will- Luna only teaches him the power of being happy in enriching the lives of his friends. It's self-actualization, in a way.

8021053 Hmm, you got me there with that one. In addition, some who read this thought Luna was being mainly OOC. What do you think?

8021280 She acts warmly with Spike toward the end, but I bought I had her nailed down pretty good otherwise :(

8021539 Hmm, true. IN addition, someone also said "Bullshit, bullshit, and more bullshit. It's not enough that Luna convinces Spike to just accept being a tautological slave, but convincing him to be happy about it? No thank you, I'm not buying any Stockholm Syndrome today."

And This:

"I personally thought Luna was full of bullshit from start to finish.
What right does she, or anyone else, have to ask that Spike forever put the wants and needs of others ahead of his own? To have no destiny but to help others in their own? To just accept that he'll have no worth apart from what others place on him? Seriously, fuck her."

What do you think?

8023028 These are disagreements with the worldview that I promote in the story, not the story itself. These people have irreconcilable differences with my worldview.

8023125 Ah, that makes much sense. If only we could see more stories like this often in the show then I'd watch it again.

8023132 I'm really glad you enjoyed- or at least found them stimulating!

8023203 Actually I really did enjoyed this one.

8023957 I'm glad- I consider this to be my finest work. :)
I don't write many serious stories, so there's a different vibe coming from this one.

can you do what he did for the rest please?? Also this story was fluteiful! (fluffy cute beautiful) ...and wait. you're finishing the snuggle conspiracy?

8036634 The snuggle conspiracy has been done for quite a while!
I'm really glad you enjoyed this story- I consider it my best work. I'm also super pleased that you like my work as a whole- I love interacting with you in the comments :) Feel free to drop me a message anytime.

8039708 Thanks! I'llbe waiting for more stories in the future!

one of my favorites!
instant follow, the part where twilight needs to validate that spike is truly back really made me feel like i was there and actually had me so engrossed in that part i had forgotten to check my ramen that was boiling and evidently had just begun to boil over!
wonderful writing

8185784 Thank you so much! I'm really glad you liked it. I'll probably never be able to write anything as exceptional ever again.

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