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Warning: Sparity. Spike learns of a phrase, a foolproof phrase that makes everything seem alright after doing anything, no matter how brash his actions were. This phrase helps him become more assertive (in the meantime doing wonders for his love life), but what is the long-term effect of overusing this phrase? The cover photo was taken from the mlp wiki website, searched using Google, like 99% of you writers out there. Google is good.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 13 )

Has promise, tracking

shouldn't this have a "comedy" tag on it?

I knew Rarity enjoy it. Every. Steamy. Second.

I tend to find the whole YOLO thing annoying as a rule, but I shall be watching simply for Shlitz and giggles

Holy shit, that awesome! You know what, I'm about to get real crazy up in here! I'm goin' to hit that greenthumb button! #YOLO

"I've got the contact of your ex-girl. Here's her number," said Spike, holding out a piece of paper to MC DR4K3. When his face craned in to read it, Spike shot the paper up to his face.
"SIKE! That's the wrong number!" cried Spike, holding his claws up while the crowd grew hysterical .

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If Spike is the last of the dragons then they can't arrested him now that he is endangered.

The v in Ponyville isn't capitalized.

Is The Chronicles of Spike part of a series?

Err...
I am sorry I was too fast...
I really liked how the story went in the first chapter ans favourited and liked AND then I read the second chapter which I really did not like... like seriously what was that I just read? How did you let someone publish this? No real story just some very very unlikely happenstances like SUDDEN twerking Dragons no one saw coming like they were just behind the curtain in a neighbours house... In chapter 1 the teenage dragons were at least trying to remain undetected because of a Law or Guards or something in that fashion but in chapter 2 it suddenly does not matter anymore and the antagonist simply says he will take everything Spike owns including his "hoe" meaning Rarity... a pony resident of the town he is assaulting which should make him at least hesitate then again the whole YOLO could have been messing with his head...
The "rap-battle" was funny but then you dropped it by making Spike some murdering Death-mashine that does not really remember what he did because of plot-convenience...
I am sorry for my thrashing review I tried to be constructive
I had to let this out
Because YOLO

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