Summery of the rest of the Story
Summery of the rest of the story…
Shepherd, ends up breaking down from all the stress of his new life. Its fun but apparently there was just so much happening all at once and he hides in his… “Gold Closet.” which just happens to be the stairs down into his basement. You see, they got all the gold out of his house but, well. They forgot about the basement. Now the entrance into it is still filled with gold up to floor level.
His daughter finds him and is worried and goes to find Twilight. Bringing her to him they talk though the door for a while, and his daughter goes back to the hive.
After a while a Buggy comes in on orders from the Queen, apparently Shepherds daughter has been pony-napped. It appears some ponies had highered a Minotour to help them still from Shepherd. And his daughter happened to be hiding in some of the old rare pots in his vaults in the hive… Well when she went missing everyone in the hive flipped out. And the Queen ordered a scout to find “The Shepherd”
(I cant remember if the pony’s I used as robbers were already in the story or not.) Anyway they go down into the Hive. They find the ponies that are stealing and something happens, and explosion or maybe they just get separated from one another. Shepherd is a bit leery around the Hive, not having traveled into it before and happens to stumble upon a pony trapped inside of a cocoon! Which causes him to freak out for a moment before seeing that it was just Prince Blue Blood…. You see apparently the Hive has, replace the prince. This also explains the massive amount of Casinos and other things that were flying over head several chapters before this one.
He leaves him there… Buck that guy, He has a daughter to find! And off he goes to find his daughter. He catches up with the thieves, and the ponys order the minotour to ‘get rid of him’ but shepherd is not taking dung from anyone and just straight up kicks the minotour in his grapefruits incapacitating him.
The Changelings then show up and capture the thieves. They know nothing about his daughter and he ends up finding her sleeping in one of the rare vases. Apparently it reminded her of a cocoon and was quite comfortable.
After capturing them he tells the changelings to interrogate them and find out what they know. Apparently the minotour is just a mercenary trying to get money for his family to find a nice labyrinth to live in… apparently labyrinths are very high end places only the best of the best live in. And most Minotour family's live in only a tiny portion of a floor, which with around 50 or more Minotours per grouping does not leave a lot of space.
Shepherd thinks about this and with his vast wealth has twilight begin to build a labyrinth within his Territory. Construction is underway and he highers the merc to help in building it. As a way to repay him for kidnapping his daughter. He agrees. Shepherd ends up giving the Minotour and his family one of the more fancy floors of the labyrinth. Which makes him very grateful.
One year later everything is at piece. All of the races have come together on this new land. And is very happy. Its almost like a theme park, there are massive magical stones for unicorns and many other things all around. Life is wonderful…. Until Discord shows up and asks where his place is! Shepherd mentally breaks and just throws a rock at him. “Here this is yours place. Have fun with it!” Discord ends up making a tiny floating planet out of it and sits it above a very chaotic looking pedestal.
In the end Shepherd does start going out with Spitfire, they apparently hit it off nicely. And she is also quite fond of his Changeling daughter, who just so happens to just be so adorable!
And they all lived happily ever after
~The End~
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Its short but I made a small summery of the rest of the story for you to check out. only about 600 or so words but it pretty much explains the rest of the story and what was going to happen in it... I hope you enjoy. I'm glad I did something with the story after all this time. But this will most likely be the final chapter. I've moved on, I keep up with a couple of stories on here but I've fallen back into Harry Potter Fiction and sometimes DBZ, but mostly HP. Among other stories on Royalroad and other sites around the web. Thank you for commenting on my story and I'm so very happy that you enjoyed it!
To all the fans of the story. I'm so sorry for taking so long to put anything out. But this might be my last post on this story or any of my others. I'm really fond of this story though. It was super enjoyable to write and it makes me happy to see so many others still enjoying it even today! Until the next time, and until the next fandom!
With love,
~Pinkie Pie Fox
at least you gave us an ending with your plans, most people just leave it on incomplete and bounce.
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This is true, I hate when that happens myself... And As I seen someone posted a comment on the story I figured I should at the very leave give a summery of events that were supposed to come... It would have only been about three more chapters either way. But it was nice to put what was going to happen out there.
Thank you for the comments as always!
Closure is nice, thanks!
It's still been fun, may you also continue to enjoy your future ventures. 😘
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Huh... Neat... You forget the complet tag on the story from incomplet.
Thank you for coming back to give us the message what’s been happening. I understand many of us have… fallen out of the fandom over the years due to burnout or the show ending in not a good way.
I kind of remember some of the story like I really loved just seeing the nature of what this world acts like since everyone is basically animals to the human.
Thank you for the story!
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Thank you!
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Yes, it was very fun diving into some of the 'fake' lore behind some of the spices and how they like to live.
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Thank you for reminding me.
Thank you so much for doing this! It's extremely rare to see an author tell us what was going to happen in a cancelled story. You gave it and ending, and for that you gave my gratitude. I hope your next journeys are fruitful and your stories long
Shame would of been a good ending but I understand (currently going through something similar) so I can't say I'm surprised
What do you write under at Royal Road?
no es el final que me hubiera gusta, pero es un final después de todo y quiero darte las gracias por haberlo escrito
Thanks for the summary ending this tale, and I wish you the best in where you go and write.
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You are welcome, I wanted to atleast finish it, because I know how it ended, but also I know for a fact that I hate when stories just kind of sit there and never continue or end. The ending might not be the best. But atleast I give this wonderful story some closure and that is better then not.
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Yes, Thank you for reading the story and the finial chapter. I'm sorry it could not have been better. Well I guess it could have... If I was not so lazy.
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"Heart of Dorkness by Ravens Dagger, Beware Of Chicken by Casualfarmer." Just to name a couple of stories that I found entertaining...
"I" sadly do not write anything on that site, I do however read sevreal stories from over there. I forget the names of them
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True, Things come and then when they go we must move forward. Thank you for enjoying my story however. It has been fun writing and dreaming it up. It was also nice to see all the interactions from all the fans of the story and the story name itself even came from the ideas of the fans. I enjoyed the adventure.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I hope I will write more in the future. It always did make me feel good writing and having others read my work. To have positive feedback from everyone really helped. I'm glad I could give this story some closure, it has been one of my favorite works that I have made.
Okay, I was worried for a moment, but everything appears to be in order.
Aww...
Sounds like a good ending to me.
As others had said before, I'm glad you chose give us a summary of the ending instead of having it hanging in hiatus for the rest of eternity.
Good work!
I enjoyed reading it.
Also, I think I have found the answer to my earlier question (8327513):
Yes, I should I order me a birdbath pegasusbath.
Oh yea poor Blueblood
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The journey is better then the destination
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Yes, Order all of the baths! Be Free!!!!
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Pfft! He deserved it...
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Twilight will get you Chrissy run RUUUN!!!
Oof!
Aww.
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Sometimes that’s how the cookie crumbles.
he forgot to invest in the fund "search for a voluntary-compulsory way to turn into an alicorn"
Well at least thanks for how you planned it out
Thank you for at least giving us fans closure! ^.^
Nice to see a wrap up of the story, thanks for the read!
At least you gave us an ending rather than leaving us high and dry. Thanks.
ah, the author must of watched this vid https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H7BjUUv10ko
and felt bad then decided to post this summery xD
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All of you and all of the readers of my story are very welcome. *gives all of you hugs*
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This is fantastic, I've never seen this before. But it is wonderful! Thank you for posting it!
another story to add in my collection!
MUWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
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YAY COLLECTIONS!!!
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.....English Por Favor.
I dont even know what I just read but it brings me much joy. XD
Story was good and th ending at least gave me closure.
I just hope , that one day, RapeTrainExpress gives us a ending to his fanfic.