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‘Twas the midmost of winter and into the town was a place where laughter, and cheer could be found. Ponies roamed through the streets with smiles on their faces, seeing bakeries, toy stores and other neat places.
But this is the part where the story gets weird, for this year's Hearth's Warming turns out worse than they feared. When Ponyville is introduced to its newest invader, a man dressed in black whose name is Darth Vader.

Written for the Hearth's Warming Eve Hearth's Warming Contest! (2nd Place :D)

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Comments ( 292 )
Spacecowboy
Story Approver

Yes.

*dies laughing*

Wanderer D
Moderator

I approve.

whatisthisidonteven

“I find your lack of sorrow and gloom quite disturbing!

I LOVE YOU! You even did it in rhyme!

but not a pony was harmed for their shots had all missed.

So true.

for he felt something inside that he had never felt before.

Well I wouldn't say never, he wasn't always Darth Vader after all.

and he knelt down beside her with an expression so silly.

What expression? He's got a mask.:trollestia:

I love this. This should win, for sure.

If I could make more Darth Approves in the favorites category, I would add this to all of them.

5405588 XD XD Thanks Europa!

5405595 XD Thanks! I had a feeling you'd like it :D

I read the poem with this playing. It's so damn fitting. XD You earned a fave, like, and follow.

5405601 it mentions Star Destroyers. Of course I'll like it. :rainbowlaugh:

5405603 XD That really does fit!


5405606 XD XD XD

5405608 Darth Vader after all. I'm dying...

And then the filly ended up hurting herself because if you're not a Force user, there's no way you'll be able to handle the weight.

Loved it! Faved!

5405650 XD XD Thanks a bundle :D

This is simply beyond wonderful.

5405707 :D Thanks! And also thanks for the follow :D

5405720 Bwahaha! XD XD Thank :D

5405751 :D :D :D I Freakin' love this video :D

5405751 reminds me of Dance off with the Star Wars Stars

5405763 XD I love all of those too XD

5405766 Vader and his boys always seem to win

How, how could you have written a story so Fine,
But there were some out-of-character mistakes, that you had Defined
But I had loved It;
It had warmed my heart, I'll Admit

The story felt more like How The Grinch Stole Christmas,
But the hilarity made the lake of originalness not worth the fuss

I loved your Fanfiction,
And the rhymes, of which I have an Audition
So,
Now I must Go
So for now, I shall say to you, without Warning;
Happy Hearths Warming!!!

~Forever Faithful
Author Styles

5405850
Oh how my heart leaps to hear such approval
your words to me are self-doubt removal
perhaps the characters were a bit out of key
it's a problem with the tale, I have to agree
it could have been better, this I will admit,
but writing in rhyme is just hard as shit!

XD Thanks again mate :D

5405950 Shit man. Are you a poet rhymer or what? I mean seriously it would've taken me a year to come up something anywhere near this!

5405950
I am reading your text with the narrator from the grinch...

5405987 It took quite a few hours that's for sure... Some friends of mine told me about the Hearth's Warming contest two days before the deadline so I scrambled to put this together XD

5405992 XD Great choice :D

5405995 Wait... You put this thing together in two freaking days!!???

5406006 it was a late night XD

5406013 Well it paid off so you don't have to worry. This story is already in my favorites.

5406013 Suddenly your avatar pic makes a lot more sense:twilightoops:

This was definitely a great story to read. I love how the whole story's a poem, has clever rhymes, and contains a great message about Hearth's Warming. :scootangel:

5406027 Bwahaha! XD yeah.

5406028 Thanks man :D

Steeling the holidays brought him less joy then expected.

by steeling these gifts and spreading nothing but terror.

This is a splendid story, I must say,
but the correct term is 'stealing', with the letter 'a'.

This seems like MLP met Star Wars and the Grinch and made this ridiculously weird fic.

Have an audio reading!
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Hopefully it wasn't flubbed up too many times...:twilightsheepish:

They dashed store to store as quick as could be
in search for some gifts to put under the tree.

Creative rhyming: check.

The key to happiness he had learned this day
was to love all your neighbors in the old pony way.

Adorable moral: check (also, am I the only one who caught the pun in there?) 28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_llj233vCD71qc89r5o1_500.jpg
5406043
5405588 I agree. I spotted ALL dem errors( as well, DONT SASS YOUR UNCLE![im sorry I had to. :rainbowlaugh:])

This is insane.

I loved it. :pinkiecrazy:

Ummmmmm................

Already trolling my anti-brony, pro-starwars friend with this... great job!

umm... after reading this again, isnt it dangerous to be giving a filly a lightsaber?

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