Applejack and Sunset Shimmer have been spending a lot of time together recently, so why do they suddenly seem so distant? And why does Sunset seem to have abandoned her new-found friends?
Set between the events of Equestria Girls and Rainbow Rocks, this story may contain mild contradictions with Rainbow Rocks, but probably not enough to warrant an alternative universe tag. Although the story is marked complete, I'm not ruling out further chapters being added in the future, if I think of a way to continue it.
This story is a birthday present for one of the most amazing individuals on the planet. Some bits of it were pre-read by Infinity Shade. (Thanks, sis!)
Chapters (3)
OMG you didn't have to write me a story!'
Just Kidding. I hope it does well.
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Thanks. It's already had exactly the result I'd hoped for.
daaaawww this was really cute.
Awesome. Just one little error in the first chapter.
A complete tag? Whaaaaaaaaaaaat...
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Yes, that's the story. Unsatisfying? Yeah, life's fucking like that.
I might add other chapters later, but don't don't count on it. Add it to a tracking bookshelf just in case.
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Yeah, the shelf I added it to will keep an eye on it.
Just to be clear, that downvote on your comment is not mine; I guess somebody was even more unhappy about the complete tag than I was,
INCEPTION! They were talking about inception! I loved that movie!!!!!
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I disliked Inception, but yeah, it's a very divisive film, which is why I chose it.
I... I...
Th-that's it? It's... Beautiful...
You took the "two girls crushing on each other, not allowed to meet" and put a spin on it, and added a "Julie Anne Peters" air to it. I absolutely love it.
Aw, come on, Big Mac.
Argh! So close and still so far!
Applejack crying because Big Mac said 'nope?' Not buying it. Still reading on.
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I think I wrote that chapter before "Applejack cries on the inside".
6549223 That sounds so much like the Amourshipping couple from pokemon.
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Eh, it wasn't worth crying for, AJ.
Meh, still gonna read this, though.
How mean of Big Mac to upset his sister