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Just A Random Pegasus


I'm just a random user who writes a lot of different ideas that pop into my strange mind, and ships almost everything imaginable.

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Applejack was a bit hesitant and confused when the no good conman, Flim, appeared at her front door, asking for advice. Naturally, she turned away from him, still bitter about everything he has done to her family and friends in the past.

As days go by, however, Applejack comes to terms with Flim. And, she quickly realizes that just like ponies can change, hearts can change, too.


This story is a side story to Chosen Love. Consequently, there are some spoilers for that story.

Sex tag is for a few innuendos.

Cover art made by floravola on DeviantArt, commissioned by HolyCross9!

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 49 )

Damn. Thats a lot of writing for me. Too much xD

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It took me a while to finish this, so I agree with you, it is a lot :scootangel:

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That used to be me...

then everything changed when the writers block atracked.

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I used to have the worst writer block. It would take me two months to even come up with something to write, and it was awful. I guess I'm making up for it now :rainbowlaugh:

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I can't think of anything. I started to get over with it but then I stopped writing for an hour and lost it."

For some reason, the thumbs up/down feature isn't working on the story.

So if AJ had a crush on someone before, who was it?

Also, I can imagine that this realization is possibly what caused her additional stress as shown starting in the middle of Maud's story arc.

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Well, when I tried clicking on the thumbs-up icon, nothing happened.

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Huh. Well, I've gotten one more downvote than I had yesterday, so I guess the system's working. It could just be because this story doesn't have enough votes so the ratio isn't shown.

And I mainly leave it to interpretation, since it was a long time ago. And this is exactly what caused her stress :twilightsmile:

👍👍:heart:

:pinkiegasp: AM I ACTUALLY GOING TO FIND OUT WHY AJ WAS TURNING RED?!

AND ITS ONE OF MY FAVORITE SHIPS?!

*faints*

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You'll have to see :trollestia:

And it is? YAY SOMEONE ELSE WHO LOVES IT :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

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Why must I have to waaaait ;-;

And YES! I thought I was alone in shipping it. (Strange, considering how popular Opposites Attract ships are.)

"...What would ya do if ya found 500 bits on the ground?"
"Take them," he said without any hesitation. Applejack shook her head.

...sadly I relate to Flim here, especially with the empathy thing.

And Flam is so mean here! ;-; I never really liked him in the show, but... wow. Not giving money to your dying mom...

Either something's going on here, or Flamsy is a complete demon.

Good chappy though! ^^

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Don't want to spoil anything! :scootangel:

And I guess not many people ship it because they view Flim as irredeemable. I personally love this dynamic and it has always been one of my favorites :derpytongue2:

You know, I could commission an artist on Devianart to make a more decent cover for this story.

I love fuzzy stuff

Awesome! I love sex jokes

I really love this story. I am glad I am not the only person who ship Applejack with Flim. I read this story soooooo many times and I keep loving it. There should be a comic version of this.

That was SUCH a cute story! I love it! Flimjack is TOTALLY my OTP! Awesome story!

Applejack chuckled. "That's because ya have a bit to learn. Y'all will be better than me soon, trust me."

I can’t tell if ‘y’all’ is referring to just Apple Bloom or Apple Bloom and Big Mac, but I have to say this: whenever the writers of MLP use y’all as a plural pronoun, it’s false! I’m a southern. I know a lot of people who use this accent. And every single one I’ve met will tell me that y’all is plural. I’ve even had conversations about it.

But that aside, I’m enjoying this so far! I’m a huge Flimjack fan!! If you’re still on this website, I would love it if you read my Flimjack story!

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There's a lot of technically improper grammer in cowboy speak. Like how they say "She don't" instead of "She doesn't". "Y'all" is used for both single and plural.

...It'll never work out with?
Applejack, my dear, I don't think you've seen the tags.

Flim started laughing again, Applejack tilting her head. "What is it?"

Irony, my dear naive little pony.
Tis irony, in a way.

This was cute! :3

You know a history is really good and pleasant to read when you reach the end and there's nothing else, that's when you realize you didn't stop reading it. I haven't read many Applejack romatic stories, and I find this one quite amazing. You did a wonderful job. Well done.

Well this is a pretty interesting start it looks like Applejack has a client and of all the ponies it has to be flim she got a little suspicious about why he wanted to learn about friendship but she can tell he wasn't lying this time oh this should be very interesting

Applejack thought. "Well, we tried to use Fluttershy's stare. Twilight tried castin' a spell on the apples to deter the bats but failed, turnin' Flutters into one instead. This time, we'll probably have more luck usin' the stare."

Yeah let's not repeat this problem again

Okay so it looks like Applejack is teaching flim about being honesty which that's good for him and I guess he had a pretty good reason why he didn't want to do what his brother did and I got to say that is pretty mean but I wonder how long they're going to keep this up and where the others will find out what she's been up to with flim

With that, Applejack shut the door, trotting towards the woods. She held a bit of excitement for what today would bring. Yesterday, she admittedly had fun teaching Flim honesty. She just loved being a mentor, really. The thought itself filled her with pride. He thought she would be a great teacher, and he doesn't even like her! Applejack's ego swelled as she thought, puffing her chest out as she walked down the pathway. She eventually made it into the woods, stepping over branches and into the clearing. As she expected, Flim was leaning against a tree, smiling.

Just wait until season 8 comes around Applejack

With that, the three walked inside, Applejack feeling on top of the world. Maybe cider season won't be a disaster after all.

Ohhh when you say that something bad is going to happen oh boy

Okay it looks like her methods of studying with flim is working well kind of because he's still a little close but he'll open up sooner or later but I'm glad to see both of them actually getting along after that fluttershy came to the farm and help them with a vampire fruit bats and it looks like it worked then the last time well let's see how the other days are going to go

Applejack chuckled. "Oh, man! Y'all should see Big Mac around spiders! He will not do his work if there's one on his plow." She started to laugh again. "Oh, one time, we had to call Fluttershy over to help shoo a family of spiders away! Mac was just hidin' in a corner and Ah was laughing my flank off!"

I don't blame Big Mac I will freaked out as well

Well it looks like the vampire fruit bats are giving a problem to the Apple family and Applejack is getting more worried than ever but it was nice of flim giving her some comfort that they can still do this like I said he's starting to warm up a little bit

Oh boy that didn't go as planned and now Ponies are very upset and so much stress that she's dealing with she couldn't take it anymore but flim was worried about how applejack is feeling right now and it was nice of him to give her massage despite the stress and everything and it feels like they are getting much closer to each other still I wonder her friends and her family will react to this

Well it's always nice to go out to have fun and getting away from all the stress and it's always nice to see her with her friends having sleepovers but after later that night she developed a crush on flim which she never thought that would happen to her and she is pretty sad that he is going to leave the next day

Well it looks like the day is almost up and flim will be leaving very soon which Applejack is pretty sad about this whole situation so she went to the forest to see him and given him a little bit more lessons before he leaves and something tells me it's not going to be easy for her to say goodbye to him

Awww this chapter is pretty adorable and I do appreciate how much they really care for each other and they finally kiss so that's pretty nice and they are so happy together but still I wonder how long they get to keep a secret because sooner or later somebody will find out

Okay there is something I'm kind of worried about and I know she's been stressed and the lack of sleep because of the business they're having problems with and it's cool and all that Apple Jack is helping flim I just hope it doesn't go too far with this whole lie about what has she been up to lately and I really hope it doesn't go too badly and again it's sweet but I just hope nothing will go wrong like this

Well it looks like flim figure out how to teleport and it looks like it worked pretty well and now Applejack and flim are together in her room let's see if they don't get caught

Applejack chuckled. "Oh, he's not that bad. As long as ya don't make him mad. He's gentle and has a good temper, but if ya do him or his family wrong... watch out."

I mean he pulled a dang house with no problem when he was in the fluence of the love poison

Also... goodness gracious, being around crying foals all day is quite annoying. I mean, why do parents feel the need to keep their kids in the store when they're screaming at the top of their lungs?"

That's always such a good question

...I forgot to lock the door...

That's always the number one rule when you guys are playing a game lock the door

Well then that was very unexpected turn of events so it looks like Applejack and flim are just chatting with each other how they been doing and how his job despite he doesn't like it he's actually pretty good at it and Applejack really wants to sleep with him tonight and he said yes once tonight came around they basically were kissing but a really horrible timing marble just opened the door and saw everything and Applejack has to explain to her about the situation and now she has to explain the whole family and friends about it well hopefully they can take it

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