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This story is a sequel to A Collection of Moments


Rarity and Fluttershy start dating, but Rarity is still closeted. Can they make their relationship work under these conditions? Can Rarity get over her fears?

This story is a sequel, but reading the first one is not necessary to understand or enjoy this one.

Chapters (8)
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Comments ( 10 )

what a great and heart warming story! you did a fine job of conveying both fluttershy and rarity feelings and emotions! well done well done , thank you for such a sweet and wonderful story!!

Well, this is a pretty cute fanfic. I always thought Rarity and Fluttershy were really good friends having quite a lot in common. But as far as romantic relationships go, it's not something I usually support, preferring Rarity and Spike. However, given the circumstances of the human world, I'll make an exception.

Comment posted by wingedalpha deleted Oct 16th, 2015

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I'm glad my story is the exception. :twilightsmile:

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Thank you for your kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :yay:

Honestly, I am such a sucker for RariShy, they don't make enough fanfics about them. And this was just so adorable. You deserve a like.

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I'm glad you liked it! I agree that there need to be more RariShy fics.

Aww, really sweet! Chapters were a bit short and really probably could have boiled down to to, maybe three chapters. But I liked it.

You know I'm a sucker for Flarity fics. It's really difficult to dislike a story with those two darlings in them! :yay::raritywink:

The beginning was somewhat clunky, but I love the setup it provided for the rest of the story. You brushed through what happens in most romance stories on this site in the first few paragraphs and left the aftermath to comprise the rest of the story. Stories like that are precious few around here.

Despite how brief this story was (my notes on the prequel here still stand), I love how realistically you convey Flutter's and Rarity's relationship. Problems this deep-set and significant aren't solved overnight. But Rarity has Fluttershy by her side now; surely, she and their mutual friends will help Rarity continue to work through her anxiety.

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