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Krovgor Warhawk


I survived the Warped Void

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It has been four months since the Battle of the Bands took place. Sonata Dusk, now reformed, seeks friendship love, tolerance, maybe even a boyfriend. However, when the Principals of CHS announce that a new High-school musical showcase is going to take place soon, old grudges rekindle. Despite this, hope may yet come to our young siren turned human in the form of a new student named Warhawk.
A remake of my first story and set in the POME Universe

Chapters (10)
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Comments ( 312 )

This looks like it's going to be a nice story:pinkiehappy:

Also, hooray for Soul and Sunset!

Does he like WOW, or is he a character from WOW? However nice first chapter, could be a good story.
However it looks like i can´t vote at the moment.

Heh. Clarity reference in the first paragraph.

Already a good start to a story. :raritywink:

Good start to your story.
Also, there is no tragedy category.

:rainbowlaugh: I loved every word of this! And I loved seeing you use the hand gesture gags XD

The Boo! :raritywink:

Another story in which the Boo running gag is present!

I liked the chapter by the way.

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The Boo joke is a running theme that must be preserved and thank you for the compliment.

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My goal is to make this the best Sonata romance story.

Okay you earned the thumb up, nice thing with him saying Sunset´s plan was stupid, however i somehow thought all of them would be more suprised about the fact, that it was the only thing he was upset about.

6299477 well it is almost at the end, so i guess it would be easy to fix that if you want, it would probably look really funny.

Just giving you and everyone else a few facts about Straight Edge's old Life in Chicago.
His DIY lifestyle led to him catching himself on fire a few times. He let one of his friends tackle him through drywall for a YouTube video during the summer before his junior year, And he was put through a table when he and his friends tried to reenact something they saw on TV the before he came to Canterlot.
He's put his body on the line on several occasions and lived to tell the tale, Right Straight?!
Straight Edge: Yeah, There was also some stuff involving nails, barbed wire, and Mercury filled light bulbs they use in the ceiling lights at schools.

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You just gave me so much comedic gold right now. Thank you.

6301967 Riiight.:twilightsheepish:
Cactus Jack: It may be the darkest day of your life. Cause it's Madison Square Garden, and Misses Foleys baby boy, isfinally home. BANG BANG!!!!
Dude Love: LORD HAVE MERCY!
*Sigh* Why do I hang out with you people?
Straight Edge: Because we're the ones that keep you sane?
Oh, right.

Don't worry Warhawk you're not the only one with Asperger's. :twilightsmile:

When I was younger however; well let's just say I know what it's like to get glares too."

i think you forgot one word.

While i hope it isn´t to short, and not bad how their romance is starting.

Straight Edge is CM Punk! :O But good story! And also, whenever a different character speaks, please put it in a new paragraph. It kinda bothers me. :P But good story so far! Fav and following!

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Be sure to read AC Punks story, he created Straight Edge.

While the story's a little rough around the edges (might want to get one of us to edit for you), this new development that Warhawk has Asperger's elevates this story tremendously. Having interacted with a handful of people with autism in the past, it can be a real challenge talking to them. I'm quite looking forward to seeing how this affects Warhawk, the group, and the school in general.

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His case is not as bad as other people, but it will explain why he might say the occasional rude statement.

You'll really showing Straight Edge's Personality, I like that.
Also, When I told you about some moments from his past, I didn't mean he lives life on the edge; He does it with friends when ever they got a crazy idea.
Love how the story is going, Cant wait to see how Warhawks Autism comes into play for his character.
Also, STAAAAAAAR WAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Let's just say that Straight Edge, Zero Gravity, and Warhawk (unwillingly) will be having lots of "fun" in the future.

6308438 Straight Edge has a life outside of the ang. He attends the martial arts academy in town, so feel free to leave him out a couple of times in the after school parts of your story. Also, he gets to go somewhere around Christmas, but you'll have to see his point of view to find out where.

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Thanks for the update, I can't wait to see what you do with him.

6308475 Well, It has Something to do with Water Guy.
Water Guy: I don't work here.
Oh, right... NEVERMIND!

LOL, I have fun reading this story. I can't believe you reference nostalgia critic. :pinkiegasp: can't wait for more:pinkiehappy:

I see you went with the classic dodgeball chapter.

Pretty good.

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Seriously, it's kind of a tradition now, don't you think? I had to make it.

Oh man, did I enjoy reading this!:rainbowlaugh:

You get a 20/10 on this one!

Not sure about it, but i hope Warhawk doesn´t get to many problems, to the point someone could call him Gary stue, or something like that, i am not sure where it starts, but this is his second, or even his third problem right?, or bad thing he had.

I guess it isn´t actually bad right now, i just say it because the story is still....young?

"Wow, what a sore loser, I mean he couldn't use his great arcane knowledge to come up with a fair way to beat you so he just banishes you? This guy sounds like the s***est wizard ever." said Warhawk

not sure why i like that part, probably because he is one of the things that are mentioned to fast, or kind of the only normal Pony that ever seems to be OP.


Really good chapter, i am glad the night ended with a good chapter.

6351354 Pretty much all of the dodgeball game.:rainbowlaugh:

So much reference to SoHM and it makes me happy:pinkiehappy:

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They aren't problems their limitations that he's learned to deal with, just as I have.

On the other end, glad you approve of my take on Star Swirl, as I really do think that next to Harry Potter, he is the s***est wizard ever.

Comment posted by Texus deleted Aug 24th, 2015

Awesome Chapter, love the whole dodge ball segment of it too. also I reread the other chapters and like some of the changes you made.

Btw, I love that Dragon Ball Z conversation in the beginning :rainbowlaugh:

Keep up the good work. :rainbowdetermined2:

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One of the reasons for the re-writes was to better showcase Zero Gravity.

Glad you approve of the DBZ conversation.

Thrall's balls was the best thing ever :rainbowlaugh:

Also, this big chain of intertwining stories is just gonna take over

Something tells me I'm gonna like Warhawk :rainbowlaugh:

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Reading comments like this always helps me write another chapter in this story.

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On the other end, glad you approve of my take on Star Swirl, as I really do think that next to Harry Potter, he is the s***est wizard ever.

Is that good or bad?

6351361 Where'd you get the icon for your avatar?

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