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Zeroxdoom


Impossible is just a word people use to make themselves feel better when they quit.

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Meet Zero Gravity, a delinquent with grades to prove it and little appreciation for his education who moves into a new town with his family to start a new life to escape the dump he grew up in. But once his grades come back to haunt him, its gonna take some new friends, a Great and Powerful rival, and certain egghead of a tutor to help him stay in Canterlot High.


Shout out to my friend Chiweee for the awesome artwork and another shout out to one of my best buddies KillerRobotQuote for proof reading/editing my story, You guys are amazing!

Inspired by these great stories and their awesome authors.

The Sun of My Heart by BlueSun52

The Pie of my Eye by Azure_Shadow

Amor Fati by BRyeMC

Come Out of Your Shell by CogWing

and Chasing a Dream by KillerRobotQuote

Their OCs are part of the story and belong to their awesome creators, so go give their stories a look when you have the time.

Chapters (18)
Comments ( 178 )

Pheonix wright, fu from Naruto, natsu dragneel from fairy tail, and Eragon from the book/movie eragon. your ability to fit in so many jokes and refrencnes amazes me zero. this looks like its gonna be fun. "The Guys" should really like this one.

Great story. I'll put it in favorites.

XD :rainbowlaugh: This made me laugh all the way through. You did a great job on your first chapter! I eagerly await for more.:pinkiehappy:

Aw, man. Already an animal shelter scene? Now it'll look like mine will be copying off of yours.

Ah, well. This is pretty neat. Now we've got a guy in our universe who's totally out there. Can't wait to see how this affects the group dynamic.

10 likes in under a day. its offical zero i hate you

6063143 What can I say, people like their romantic comedy :rainbowlaugh:

6063157 you mean people like their anime referneces and over the top antics.

that...was...AWSOME!
I love this character. I love how is constantly "laying the smack down on a bitch" and quick on the draw

exhibit A:

“Oh you can do magic,” he replied sarcastically “Show me.”
“I would but…I...uh“
“Let me guess, you’re don’t want to blind me with your mysterious powers and you want to focus on the lesson,” he mocked
“What does be the 'light in the deepest darkness' make you psychic or something.”
“No, but it does help me see bullshit.”
Trixie gritted her teeth then gave huff, “Well I don’t have to be great and powerful to help me see you’re nothing but a delinquent,”
“Pretty big talk coming from a phony,”
“For someone like you I’m surprised you know what the word phony means.”
“Oh it was easy; I’m looking at the definition right now.

exhibit B:

“Hey, do you think she’s ok?” asked Wind as she pointed her finger to the girl.
“No, she must be wonderful,” Zero said sarcastically while rolling his eyes.
“Do me a favor and lose the sense of humor for once,” said Wind.
“Do us both a favor and buy one,” replied Zero

and lastly exhibit C:

“I….fell down some stairs,” he lied.

“No you didn’t,” objected Solar Wind, “Weren’t you-“

“Shut up before I throw you down a flight,” he retorted

Finally got around to this. Heh, this is a very entertaining story, I'm liking it so far.:rainbowlaugh:

That's quite a few references. Make sure you're using enough original content to not make it look like you're just using too much anime references :rainbowwild: Though I did appreciate the Phoenix Wright reference, one of my favorite game series.

Also, you could use an editor. The grammar and punctuation is a bit rough and could use some work. It just takes a bit of practice.

All that said, I enjoyed it pretty well. I'll keep an eye on this one, I think

6072230 Thanks for the advice :rainbowdetermined2:, Its been a while since I wrote something so I do plan on working on my grammar and punctuation.

6072329

Hey, it's no problem. I edit for people all the time, so I'm just better attuned to it is all :derpytongue2:

I'm still a fledgling writer myself, so I'm busy trying to make cool ideas as well

6062517 Thanks man, sorry that I beat you to the punch :rainbowlaugh:

6079799 Thanks for the...kitty...I guess :rainbowhuh: :rainbowlaugh:

Cant wait for the next chapter!!!!!!:pinkiehappy:

Whens the next chapter

6138261 it will be out before the end of the month :twilightsmile:

I really liked this chapter, especially the end of it:rainbowlaugh:

Poor Sunny, but at least Zero made things right with her:pinkiehappy:

not gonna lie.... zero is a dick

6160837 I know you and i know his reasons are based off you and your weird ways

6160840 Nope, I have my reasons, he has his.

6160847 *has not have* and true......btw still a good chapter

this was my imidiate thought

when I read this

Inside the Canterlot High gym a friendly game and safe game of dodgeball was being played.
*Bonk*
“My leg!”

and that ending
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also great chapter can't wait to see what happens next

6164866 oh that's understatement. I actually started reading it this at like 8am(e.s.t.) morning and I had gotten maybe 3-4 paragraphs in and I had to leave for work and I didn't get back till about an hour ago and was thinking about it all day. so the suspense was killing me and it just made it even better for me

6252253 Don't mention it. Also, are you going to lose your lunch if you have to watch one more stupid sit com. Feel like Reality Television doesn't have enough reality in it?
Well then it's time for some real action. IT'S TIME TO BLOW S**T UP!!!

I don't know why I posted that, anyway, What's your thought on my new story Idea.
The Octagon
An underdog story revolving around a young man by the name of Thai Clinch. This small town underdog is goanna fight his way, literally, to the top of Equestria' Mixed Martial Arts Circuit. One fight at a time, Inside the Octagon.

6252321 That actually sounds like a really cool idea, you should go for it

6252468 Writing first chapter now.

6252498 Awesome, let me know when your done so I can take a look

6252506 I trashed The street outlaws Crossover until further notice. But, I do have an idea for a story in Zero's Universe.

6261421 oh really, that sucks :ajsleepy:. but what's your idea

.....damn you for knowing how to keep me wrapped up in this.

Nice to see another chapter. Can't wait to see more.

Excellent chapter. Like Zero's interaction with his fellow students and Wind's friendship with the CMC.

Is uh... There gonna be an update soon...? No pressure.:twilightsheepish:

6457864 I'm taking a little break right now. but I do plan on updating after the friendship games so be patient :raritywink:

6457886 OH ok I gotcha! I was just wondering but I understand now. :eeyup:

Neato! Also, kind of amazing how this is the world Twilight, and it almost played out like she was from the movie. With the part where they talked about her and she questioned why they were talking about her. So awesome!

I knew it was empty. Discord you clever manipulative jerk you are awesome.

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