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Autum Breeze


a home-grown australian who embraced being a member of the fandom 2 days before joining. Willingly delved into the fandom whole-heartedly and has never looked back

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I like the story and concept, good job. Also, I like how you explained the Alicorn Amulet helping Trixie.

P.S. Mind if I use the explanation of the amulet in a later story of mine.

"For an evil Amulet that corrupts whomever wears you, you’re sure sounding like you care about the lives of other ponies.", Trixie thought scathingly.

She could swear it huffed at her for that statement. I only corrupt those who put me on with thoughts of ill intent.

Trixie blinked. Come again?

She heard another sigh. "I am not an evil magic artifact. History has gotten that wrong, though I am honestly not surprised. Every being that has worn me up til now has always put me on with thoughts of defeating their enemies or gaining more power."

"Trixie doesn’t..."

"I amplify the power of whomever places me upon their body, the Amulet cut her off. I do not just corrupt any who wears me. The power I give is depended on the emotions my wearing is feeling when they first put me on. An obvious example: When you put me on, it was with the intent to upstage the very mare you now hold in your arms. Due to those negative thoughts, my powers amplified you own, but began corrupting your thoughts due to what you had been thinking when you placed me on."

"And... this time?" Trixie didn’t quite understand where this was going.

"This time, when you put me on, though your first action was to blast Eris away; your main focus was on saving the pony that means the most to you in this world. That is the first time in too long that a being has put me on with a truly pure intent behind their motives. Due to this, the magic you now have access to will never corrupt you and I will only offer my council, should you ever need it"

WOW!!! headcanon accepted!!

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Mind if I use the explanation of the amulet in a later story of mine.

No objections from me

Looks interesting so far and I like the concept so a fave and upvote!

Is there going to be more this story is quite good. I would like to see more stories with Twilight and Trixie. :heart::pinkiesmile::twilightsmile:

what the about the next chapter of The Great Maternal Trixie?

Comment posted by Galaxy of Equestria deleted Dec 30th, 2015

After some discussion, Trixie had agreed with the Cakes that leaving before anypony else in town got up was the best course, to avoid as many questions as possible about what happened at the castle and who the new young Alicorn was.
In fact, it was why Trixlight was now wearing Trixie’s cloak, to hide her wings. Once they got to the Empire, she could take it off. Cadance and Shining Armour would understand and be able to help smooth things out.

That reminds me of this one theory...

I believe that the reference was to Batman... I remember that there was a group of thugs in one of the Batman: The Dark Night Returns movies that has someone, that I do believe was named Ace, loved flinging around their blade ad talking about slice and dicing people. Please let me know if I got this reference right. :scootangel:

7135630 You are almost completely right there. It was indeed a reference to the Mutant Gang in The Dark Night Returns parts 1 and 2, though it was no one specific member who would talk like that. they all did.

This story is good, are you going to continue it??

The concept of the story is great. But the story itself seems rushed.

Soldier: Looks like this is DED! Hey man.:derpytongue2:

Mind if write a chapter for this story?

Eris has escaped the Element Bearers of her own world and now intends to take over Twilight's Equestria, and, unlike Discord, she's willing to destory her enemy to do it

You know, there's actually several interesting ways that someone with Discord's powers could, in fact, destory someone. I mean, they could rewrite the person's history so that important events in their lives never happen, which would make it so that they become totally different people, they could create entirely new important events in their lives so that they become totally different people, etc.

i lick this story can you put out a anther chapter

Gets defibrillators *

CLEAR! Don't die on me yet!

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