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Twilight needs to leave town for a mission from Princess Celestia, leaving Spike to watch the library while she's gone. Shortly after Twilight leaves, a certain rainbow maned pegasus come over to read the next Daring Do. But as Rainbow spends more time with the little dragon, she starts to have feeling for him. Meanwhile, Spike also has deep feeling for Rainbow. Can these two finally confess there love, or will they forever stay apart.
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675757
No offence, but it pretty much does. It's not the first story I've seen with SpikeyDash.
Spelling mistake here and there nothing that would stop me from reading though. Seems interesting I will watch for more updates.
675806
Well, that's your decision I guess.
I don't want to downvote this, but it seems like everything from the grammar to the spelling to the characterizations was off. I just had this ill feeling as I read on, and I really couldn't finish it.
675806
>Yeah, but Pony+Non-pony=FUCK THE WRITER
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I kinda liked it, The spelling and the pacing were my only issues with the fic.
Lol wut? I've got to check this out
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I'll give it a meh out of ten. Advice: introduce spikes affections towards dash better, that was really the only part that bothered me, also there is literally no excuse for spelling errors like those, there are dozen of free spell checkers on the Internet, hell even if you have word just paste it into a document and fix anything with a squiggly under it
Purty gud. Like said, spelling and grammar, but that doesn't detract from the story,
Only reason i faved is for the spike dash.
only a few grammar errors but all in all pretty good story and i loved to see more spikedash
> have feeling for him. Meanwhile, Spike also has deep feeling for Rainbow.
i have feeling for this fic
> He started to fall in love with he,
lol
> Well that was wearied
I had a very wearied day.
Oh Mah Gawd! Shit is going down!!1 Faving and giving Thumbs up!
Everything goes too fast. You REALLY need to work on your pacing. And use question marks...
Ehh its ok few spelling errors but seems good. I be watching
675806 "Pony+Non-pony=FUCK THE WRITER" oh you naughty girl
that aside like it so far little fast but that was problaly to get the hard part out of the way
introducing feeling is a bitch
Well, i dont give a damn what other people think, I LIKE IT
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Other than the fact that you just need a proof reader, Good ideas. Not fav, but watching.
I love SpikexDash.
nice, just wish more of it was out already
This is actually good. I think this is the first story to be solely based on a SpikeyDash scenario. Like!
Only problem: grammar. Please, work on it a little more. Also, story feels a little rushed. But aside from that, good story.
675781 Wait, what other spikeydash stories? I gotta read those, too.
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Well, the one that immediately springs to mind is April Showers.
725571 Thank you!
I'll be sure to read it.
Alright...other then many spelling and grammer errors, I'm am 100% down for this sotry, I love Spike/Rainbow Dash and I'm honestly hoping to see more, also...I can proof read it for you if you wish, I really do not want to see this awesome pair ad story fail, but it does seemed rushed, so work on that more alright? I'll be tracking.
i read this while listening to Emotion from Pokemon Black and White, When it got to the Part where we learn about Spike liking Rainbow the song sped up, along with when rainbow asked spike to read with her and when Rainbow was blushing and left it sped up. it was really nice to read this while listening to it. Sometime you guys should give it a try. Just make sure you start the song right when you start reading.
Well time to give my two bits about this story. Um well it started out good, but i think you rush the spike getting a crush on rainbow dash that just doesn't happen. If you keep updating i will read, but just work on something like the grammar and such. It's a good idea for a story.
675757 well guess what IT. DID. JUST. HAPPEN.
Yay! I Love this chapter! It was amazing! I think i died from Dawwwwwwwitis!
ME GUSTA MUCHO
Dat dream. I had to read it over and over again lol
I thought it was cute, a little rushed and you have some spelling and grammer errors but I really enjoyed it....also you do know that a filly is a little female horse (or in this case pony) don't you? Rainbow's a mare.
but fluttershy doesn't wear cloth's...... ahhhhhhhhhhhh now i get it
no cloaths
Just from the description I see a few spelling errors. i hope the story will be better.
Like the story, but I think you may need an editor or something for the spelling mistakes. But hey, if spelling mistakes are the only problem that isn't bad.
As others have said, it has a few grammar errors, but is not a bad story at all even if it is kind of rushed. But hey keep the updates coming.
I'm gonna guess you mean Soarin', the Wonderbolt, and Soarin' is a guy, I believe
2248176 Thanks for catching that, It's fixed now.
should probably be "Definitely" might want to add another enter between the paragraphs or a [br/]
Other than that little hiccup good chapter and rarity really should have thought about and acted on that before Twilight found his special somepony that wasn't her.
Damn this needs to be re-edited, like badly, harsh but true. But DAMN, poor Spike, hated how Rarity just bucking jumped him, what a bitch
Can't wait for more
is it a true love triangle when any one of the three parties in question are unrequited?? I ask this because I can see that Rainbow and Spike care for each other, both ways, and that we have discovered that Rarity (about damn time) has feelings for Spike. But there is no relationship between Rainbow and Rarity, and as far as I can see, Spike doesn't have those feeling for Rarity anymore because of Rainbow.
Other than that, come Ms. Twilight Watson
, Det. Pinkie Holmes believes there is drama afoot. 
Pinkie Pie, you're a c-blocker.
Sleep naked.. aw come on! What part of 'ponies don't normally wear clothes' can she understand?
Talk about heat of the moment.
Ponyville is not Ponyvill Ponies don't have Ponyvill only Ponyville
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th07.deviantart.net/fs71/200H/i/2012/288/8/0/seeman_and_seespike_by_rewirken-d5hw8w6.jpg SEE?!
Oder Dan errors Spike is in trouble, not big surprise
Dammit pinkie. Messing up spike's game. Lol
- Good history, but make one revision, please. Working one more too in this chapter three.
I've really enjoyed the drama of him finding someone else and THEN rarity becomes all
and wants to date 
Okay. This is a pretty good story you have here. Though, It is moving a little too fast. I mean, they barely spend time to let the emotions grow. They seem to have them after just one day together. Then, with Rarity, it was so sudden and unexpected. I had to do a double take to make sure I was reading it right. Other than that, it is coming together really well.
I agree with Christs Disciple regarding pacing. Also, spelling needs work.
Though the story that I can dig out from the misspellings is pretty good.
Oh, man.
Then, Twilight return.
And they had sex!