The Laugh's Of Children Make A Home

Pinkie Pie and Rainbow Dash have been together for a while now, but now they face their biggest problem yet, Pinkie in labor.

Equestria is so bucked.

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base4

base4 #1 · Nov 5th, 2016 · 3 · · Oh Celestia . . ·

"We were thinking Storm Warning. Storm Blitzen Warning."

Storm Warning.
That's an EPIC name!

Also, the story word total is only a little more than 100. I think you can solve that by unpublishing and publishing your chapter.

Czar_Yoshi

Czar_Yoshi #2 · Nov 5th, 2016 · · · Oh Celestia . . ·

108 words? Buh?

virgoknight

virgoknight #3 · Nov 5th, 2016 · · · Oh Celestia . . ·

Loved it. This was a powerfully compact story that hit all the necessary notes to make your heart go twang! great job writer

RoyalBardofCanterlot

RoyalBardofCanterlot #4 · Nov 5th, 2016 · · 1 · Oh Celestia . . ·

I haven't read it yet and I already think its the greatest idea ever.
Edit: This was the best idea ever! Wonderfully executed. One spelling error though. "she was the blood" should be "she has the blood." Also, you might consider adding the romance tag and adding this to the RainbowPie group. We need some fresh blood.

Imperfect Perfectionist