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Spike feels neglected. Nopony respects what he does and he hears others complaining all the time. When he begins to be influenced by an old foe, Princess Luna helps him fight these feelings to try and return things to the way they were. As this continues, the princess and dragon start to see each other in a different way.

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Luna x Spike = only time will tell.Good so far

1130003 Well somepony had to do it. :moustache:

Hmmm... go on :moustache:

hm this should be interesting

sorry for kinda derping :derpytongue2:
but I'm very confused about the last sentence of the first section: "Rounding the corner, there were five ponies waiting for him at the entrance. All he could see was small white lights and a dozen sets of glowing golden eyes."

those numbers just don't add up to me...

1130378 ah, thanks. did a quick number change and didnt notice that :P

LunaxSpike it has been a long time since I have seen this ship

I have seen Spike and the CMC

Spike and Celestia and Spike with Rarity(My fav) and the rest of the gang but LUNA. It has been a while lets see if it works out. I have high hopes for this story.

Spike is best drake:pinkiehappy:
Luna is best Princess! deal wit it. :pinkiehappy:

awesome fic tho. keep it up. :pinkiehappy:

1131024 Luna is best PONY.
Deal with it.:pinkiehappy:

1131032 thats what i meant i spelled it that way to make it sound funny. :pinkiecrazy:

Hey, are you going to continue this history?, pleaso do :fluttercry:

1465818 Sorry abot the wait. I do plan on continuing, but I am having trouble. I wasn’t motivated to write often and when I am I can’t get the chapter right (not even close to what I want it) I have been trying to get it. This story is not dead; I will update it.....eventually......

Please continue this story. I wanna find out what happens next.

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Name: A Dragon of The Night

Grammar: 7

Pros:
- An interesting idea for a pairing.
- Nice portrayal of angsty Spike.
- Well placed subtle hints for the future, not too clunky and obvious.

Cons:
- Not sure about some of the capital letters and other small punctuation errors. Then again I am terrible at grammar so this might be ok. :twilightsheepish:
- I feel that moving it from Spikes perspective to the Princessess is a bit of a sudden leap. I am left wondering about what the mane 6 are doing. Then again this might be addressed in a later chapter.
- I am very confused as to what the last thought of Spikes is. It feels a little glued in.

Notes: I am rather interested in where this one is going. To me it seems as though Luna may have to combat Nightmare moon through Spike, the process of showing him how good ponies are strengthening their bond. Then again I may be way off the mark, but I am interested regardless :rainbowlaugh:

If you could read and rewiew Winter Solstice I would be very grateful.

1954827 Thanks for the review. i'll take what you said into consideration and read your story soon (i'm really behind on my reading and don't have much spare time lately so i don't know when.)

When are you going to continue.

2202589 I Wish i knew. I now have a job school, chores, homework and just general stuff. I HAVE been working on it but i have just been so tired most of the time. I really want to update this and keep it going. Also, how did you find this lol?

2205792 what the story. Just looking for a Luna x spike fix.
Luna is favorite pony!!!:heart::heart::pinkiehappy:

This story is a lot better than my story. My first story is the definition of random.

2205821 I'll take a look at that. I need some random once in a while

Hey man, said I'd read your fic when I finally finished my darfathon, and I kinda lied, don't wanna finish the darfathon so I'm reading your fic ;)

Got a couple of things to mention, only nitpicky things tbh, but I'll PM you those so I don't waste peoples comment space :)

Still waiting for chapter 2 or a cancellation notification.

Sorry to be a bother.


~~Flutter-Shy~~

I'm going to assume that this is canceled, it's been dead for 4 years now

2205821 then Pinkie and Discord will love then :pinkiehappy:

Wished this story got to continue.
Pretty interested in it.

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