Love sought is good, love unsought is better. Or is it? Spike is going to find out the hard way just how bad love can be.
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PrometheusDark
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Ahh yes here we are again I look forward to this,
Dear Spike: welcome to FEMDOM.
In some parts you should try to transmit the clouded judgment and reactions of Spike instead of just writing "not consciously", but I give that as and advice only, it's a pretty good start after all.
...And then Spike pretty much got raped.
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I see no mature tag, and I made my proof reader the promise I would never subject him to clopfiction. No rape scene.
Spike my friend, you're fucked now
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Yeah, but will he enjoy it? I dunno.
What better way to start a sunday than sleeping in, making some coffee, and reading your new story Pro.
Ohohoho very edgy I must say, this Chrysalis feels completely in character from her self-interest to the way she exerts her dominance over her victim ( in this case an unprepared Spike. )
Her motivations are believable and I sense a small sprinkle of what could be an already slow-growing affection she might have for him ( though purely started from her need to sustain herself on his love, and apparently enjoying the benefits of it's taste, and large supply of course. )
I also like how Spike isn't some witless pawn ( or at least he isn't aware of it ) but just in a "no win" situation. Juiced up on his emotions Chrysalis obviously has a power advantage, and is intelligent enough to keep his spirit low so that there's a smaller chance that he might try something.
A Deadly case of forced affection, that has the potential to go any road you choose. Good work PrometheusDark
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I know a way you could start it that would suck. You could wake up to a sharp pain in your stomach and barely have time to make it out of your bedroom and to the nearest place you can toss your cookies. Yeah, I woke up sick this morning. Enough about that, though...
The way I wrote Chrysalis before was sooo out of character that going back and reading it leaves an unpleasant taste in my mouth. I'm sure, given enough time and a reason to, she would change her ways... But I didn't give her either, so I thought I'd rectify that with this story.
You're far too kind.
Also, while I was writing this chapter, I was so sure that once I got the idea out of my head I could go back and write the rest of Consort of the Sun... But no such luck, every time I go to write that I just sit there and stare at the blank pages for a good 10 to 30 minutes before going off to surf the web. I fear I'm going to get into a habit of canceling fics, which I really don't want to do.
553186 I know how you feel the Ideas keep running from me and its so damn hard to catch em lets hope this story sustains though its lookin juicy
Lol 'The Dragon and The Changeling' was good, and it did a nice job at being the very first SpikexChrysalis story. First steps can be pretty wobbly, so I doubt anyone would blame you for Chrysalis not being how they imagined she would be. Of course thanks to your experience with writing about her ( that few others have ) this story is made that much better.
I like to think I'm kind enough to those who deserve it, and if not than obviously i'm not kind enough lol.
Ugh don't get me started on unfinished works, there isn't enough locks on that door I keep my group of left behind stories on the other side of. At least you're trying and that's good enough. And it's greatly understandable regarding "Consort of the Sun" That story is a more of a fluffy, you can find love from unexpected places, showing Celestia's fun side, and how well she goes with Spike kind of fic. Great in it's own right, but almost a complete coin flip from this darker mood, conflict between affection and dominance, story you have here. I would find it challenging jumping back and forth from one spin on the subject to the other seamlessly.
I'd read either story any day, and be happy for the privilege. And I'm sure your other readers would agree.
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You have a real talent with taking everything I find wrong and turning it into something good.
Just reading your comments makes me feel better.
There is also the fact that, whether I like it or not, I've always been better with the more 'dark' ideas. Just the sheer amount of them I get. But part of being bipolar is that you get sad AND happy thoughts at the drop of a hat, with no real middle ground. So I guess I'll be continuing this until I get more happy ideas to throw into Consort of the Sun.
Take from that what you will.
His scales were purple, purple for goodness sake.
This suddenly, without reason, popped into my mind. Sometimes I wonder if Discord himself hardwired the neurons in my brain.
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I learned a valuable lesson today.
552590 I know I won't... would you?
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Maybe? I'm used too abusive girls.
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little bit too much info bro 
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I'm sure whatever images you've conjured up based on that statement are far from what I meant. I merely mean I've had relationships with women who either aren't the nicest people, or like to beat me up since I'm kinda a big softy. I knew one girl back in high school in my horticulture class who liked to kick shins. Be aware that during that class, work boots were a requirement.
553839 oh, ouch
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Yeah, but shins weren't the worst place she could kick. *Shiver* Anyway, I doubt you want to hear about my school days.
Enjoy the story none the less.~
553863 done, and I did
note to self: wear shin guards when in horticulture class
All I can say here is... HOLY SHIT. I always forget to check the author. I was reading this and was thinking: ''Man, now THIS is how a ChrysalisxSpike fic should be written...'' And then... I saw it was you again, the one who started all this beautiful, glorious madness!
Your writing has improved so much I didn't even recognize it was you. Not to say you we're bad, but this is just on a whole other level. You, my good sir, are now TRACKED 
Eagerly awaiting more!
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Hahah, thanks. I've been trying to improve so people would better enjoy my stories. Good to know it's paying off!
This Is getting entertaining
Been a while and the first chapter wasn't that long.
Is this fic. dead?
Please continue your awesome Spike fics... They are so awesome.
Update, YES IT IS DELICIOUS! Best wishes man.
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Yummy updates are yummy.~ Thank!
997554 Disturbing BUTT FUN messed up BUTT FUN wink wink nudge nudge.
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I don't think they went that far. But, maybe I should add a mature tag, just in case...
im gone 3 hours and come back to this suprise,
its beautiful
998041 Its chrysalis you know what happend
lol.
You finally updated. And it's looking good. Thanks
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Yeah, took a few month long hiatus from writing. I had forced myself to write to much before and burnt myself out real fast, but I'm back in the game again. This time I'm actually pacing myself.~
I guess you could say, Chrysalis wants a...
*glasses*
Bad Romance...
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Perhaps you only need to stop making more and more storys and finish the ones you already have in process. I'm still waiting chapter 5 for "Consort of the sun".
PD: I already left you a review on fanfiction.net for this one.
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Perhaps you should pay attention to the blog posts, since they have some information on them about what my current projects are? Consort of the Sun was canceled because the rewrite turned into something different. I won't be posting more new stories until I've finished the ones I've started, starting with To Kill A Dragon. Also, I wouldn't call telling me that the vegetarian thing was overused a review.
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My bad. I'm not a blog checker. But even so, you are writting 4 stories simultaneously (unless youre gonna let "The power of music" die as well) that's to much work to deal with.
Of course telling you to not recycle ideas from your other stories counts as a review. Compare to people who just write "good chapter" or "I like this story" that is.
Don't get the wrong idea, I really like youre stries, and I think youre pretty good. But to much creativity is worthless if you just keep canceling your stories to begin new ones.
I. Liked it.
Man whats taking so long to update?
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Probably the fact that I'm on what may be a perma-hiatus. Check my blog, it ALWAYS tells what I'm working on at the moment, if I'm working on anything.
ow come on I really like this one.
So this is ... Spikalis? Chrysalike? Either way, it's well-written femdom with Spike as the victim. It's awesome that she establishes and maintains both physical and emotional dominance over him. I'm definitely gonna be enjoying this one.
This should be a clopfic!
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I promised somebody I would never write those. That somebody was myself.
1621060awww oh well.....
- Continue?
Poor Spike, should have did some training when you knew you would live alone.
Might have helped you turn the odds in your favor.
Oh Gods, this is going to be good, Spike falling for an evil Goddess, yeah....this is going to be good