This story is a sequel to What Will Make You Happy
Chrysalis plans to revive King Sombra so that they may rule all of Equestria together, but to bring him back she needs pieces of an ancient artifact scattered all across the farthest confines of Equestria.
However, to make sure there's no interference from the Elements of Harmony, Sombra gives Chrysalis some of his magic, which she uses to use the Princesses to stone, and capture both Twilight and Cadence, both pregnant with their respective husbands' babies. Chrysalis also kidnaps the Mane Six and and separates them into different parts of Equestria so that they won't rise up against her.
So it's up to Shining Armor, Discord, Screwball and Spike to rescue their wives, the Elements of Harmony, defeat both Chrysalis and Sombra, and change the princesses back to normal. However, Discord is haunted by nightmares and visions of Twilight dying at childbirth, and this stirs his worst fears of losing her, something of which Chrysalis and Sombra decide to take advantage of.
Will they get to the Elements in time?
Thanks for showing off most of the story in the description, I'll know what to expect now.
Some spelling and gramatical errors, I would recommend a pre reader.
2003677how?
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How what? How to get a pre-reader? If that's the case, there are a few groups where you can inquire into having someone read your stories and edit them. Or you could have someone you know edit it for you.
20036grou>>2003687 which groups?
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http://www.fimfiction.net/group/801/proofreading-prereading-and-editing
2003711thanks
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Glad to help
Yes! This is intense! More! *favs*
~Raxel~
If the name ends in 'S' you simply need an apostrophe at the end of the name to get your point of possession across.
Just saying. Good luck on your story!
that description.
Wall-o-text! Add extra space between paragraphs and hit enter. Hit the button at the top of the edit/wrighting page to add an indent. Might actually be able to read it then.
2006946which button
2006946which button
2007625 There's a group of buttons going across the top of the writing section for stories just like the ones for comments. One of them, on the left, says indent paragraphs when you scroll over it.
2008090 thanks
Discord better die in this fanfic because I fuckin hate that son of a bitch
2092447sorry to say it but no he doesn't die I love him too much to do that
Man fuck screwball and discord those nigga could eat a dick
Are you saying twilight is the step mommy Okay I wanna die now
That changeling is so scared it will probably tell them anything
TO APPLE JACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Really? Why would he die? 
He's like, one of the main hero's of the two in this story if you were able to read the last one with Discord in it, you can read this one. 
i don't particularly care for how you coppied "Luna's Cutiemark",
but sweet chapter all the same... 
I always hated discord and I always will
Sad and so touching
I like the story of Stormfly. I was touching and now I want more.
Like, right now.
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I'm working of it
Now I'm singing in my head
I can't get the Marilyn Manson cover of this song out if my head
2092447 ya do realized Discord was reformed right? Not to mention even before he was reformed he never killed anyone, sure he was his own kind of evil, but not the kind of evil that is Chryssy
it's raping time...
damn, she a stone cold bitch and dat guy *points to sombra* is a stone colded mo fo
2093248 well, someone be hating on the god of chaos... but why Screwball?
oh boy, Screw Ball x Stormfly. Should be interesting.
better than peanut butter and jelly. this is some good stuff right here.
rawr... I demand more of this!?!
... pretty please
Well, speak of the devil and the devil shall appear
There should be a Screwball tag.
2304015 I thought it was kinda cute! Just imagining a little Screwball making a cotton candy cloud while Discord is wrapped around her.
This is great! PLEASE CONTINUE!
Weird, I'm writing a fic that has Chrysalis trying to raise Sombra from the dead.
I'm now waiting for more. This is good.
DAMMIT DISCORD!
Maybe Pinkie resembles someone Fukkuteru would rather forget?
this is so flipping awsome I've love this story and it seems to continue this one story on Fanfiction.com
3238952 i completely totally agree!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awsome... just Awsome I love this story its so good.
