After a mistaken identity case, Fluttershy is wrongly accused of a murder attempt on one of the High Blood houses, and sentenced to twenty years of incarceration in the Brokenfang Maximum Security Prison, where the most dangerous and unpredictable Krussian criminals are sent. As her friends do what they can to prove her innocence and secure her release, Fluttershy must learn to survive in the hostile environment of Brokenfang, making both new friends and enemies, as well as to learn that not everypony is what it seems…
Chapters (13)
This looks pretty interesting. I'll follow it.
Also, she'll either need to learn how to defend herself or get a bodyguard. Otherwise, she'll most likely be stabbed, raped or worse.
I always liked these types of stories. Good job mate. Followed.
It's kind of like seeing Toby Mason, Fluttershy's son, being locked up in the Maximum Security Detention Center.
Hm, this reminds me of a movie I watched recently. What was it called? Oh yeah, "The Count of Monte Cristo". Great movie,I suggest you see it.
Oh boy! Been a while since I've seen a prison story. At least this won't just be a gag.
+1: Let's see where it goes.
First chapter and I feel like this should become an audio drama when finished! I get a Bride of Discord vibe when I read this!
So far we met two characters on the cover. Can't wait for the next chapter!
It's like seeing Toby Mason behind bars again.
This seems more and more like a good story
Seems like a nice story interresting concept too
This story is awesome . . . I need more!
Any updates on the next chapter?
Can't think of anything to say here. This was a great chapter!!!
Two questions. Will there be an update schedule for this story? I'm really getting into it. And have you thought of making this an audio drama or reading as well as some of your others?
uh oh. Fluttershy is gonna get raped!
P.S. great chapter!
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Nop, I haven't considered the possibility yet, but it might happen.
More. More. More. More. MOAH!
Please?
If I were to imagine a Tenmokt's accent in real life, would it sound russian?
7251061 Eyup. I based their culture on Russia.
Those bastards!
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Now,
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Edit: This story is great, have a like, a mustache
, and possibly a fav! 
I wasn't aware of this update!
Hmm... Who could that be?
please continue this is best story.
please continue this is best story.
please continue this is best story.
Krussians must be Russians. So some of them must be slavs. Really hope some are slavs so we can have the entertainment of slavs.
Hope this song is heard if there are slavs.
Also hope to hear,
"А ну чики брики и в дамки!"
Translated: "A nuu cheeki breeki i v damke!"
Sorry but, who are the triplets? I don't think they've been mentioned as of yet.
I need moar!!!
7612886 Don't you hate it when your comments don't get a response?
Fluttershy will be badass in this story eventually, right?
7776220 Yeah. Not as much baddass, but she will have to defend herself at some point, right? she's not THAT helpless.
Can't wait for the next chapter. This is a pretty entertaining story, but it could stand a few cliffhangers here and there. My number one problem is that when a new chapter comes out, I don't feel the urge to hop on it immediately. When a story leaves the audience wondering what will happen next, it makes them hop on as soon as possible. I suggest leaving a little more mystery, or at least a few cliffhangers. Just a thought.
At last! I am always so happy to see a new chapter of such an amazing story! You don't know how long I've waited for this! So glad to see this updated! I was worried since it's April Fools Day it was all a joke and I would've gone nuts, but I'm glad that wasn't the case! I'll always keep my eyes open for this! Please let the new chapter be sooner.
Interesting concept for a story, oh btw:
You're missing a verb: Scoffed would do nicely here!
Two months since this chapter came out and I had no idea! And this is the story I keep close eye on!
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Yeah, it didn't show up as updated for me either.
Loved Twilight's reaction.
Who are the triplets?
Discord should be by her side
Can we get another chapter please.
I will give you a cookie🍪🍪
Its been close to 4 years since the last chapter. i hope you get to come back to it!