Cloperella
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As if lingerie is a bad thing now :-P
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It is when that's not what I wanted to write in the story.
Okay. I've read over this whole thing since finding it. I'd say it's a very good work. The part with Rarity nailing Blueblood was quite excellent. Applejack consoling Rarity was done in a way that didn't suggest the two were going to become a couple due to physical comparability, and I like that. Near the end, I thought for sure Rarity was going to go back out to the ball au natural due to the dress not being salvageable, and trying her hardest to make the best of a bad situation. But then again that's just what I would do.
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That would have been a very humorous ending, but it's really difficult for me to go with an unrealistic mentality for most of the main characters (unless they happen to be Pinkie Pie).
Very glad that you enjoyed the story.
6145972 Pinkie is best pony don't talk crap about her
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I didn't talk crap about her.
6149376 she isn't insane or mental
6149738 she is insane...but more of in a fun way (show based)
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That's what I was going for. Just a fun observance, nothing insulting.
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Put a cork in it pal. All the author is saying, is that only Pinkie would believably be able to walk into the gala stark naked, and not give it a second thought. For anyone else to do it, there would need to be a lot of buildup to show how that decision was arrived at, and be believable.
I enjoyed this as a romance but the story feels a bit misadvertised.
The cover image and the description gives the impression the story is going to be another exhibition/humiliation fetish clopfic based on that infamous scene but it doesn't really go that route. It's brought up that Rarity gets a bit of a naughty thrill out of it during the dream and seems to have a sexy vibe to it but it just sort of ends there, while unfortunately giving the impression that your setting the stage for the real scene during the gala to be a sexy event.
This makes it feel off-putting that when we finally do arrive at the scene, its decidedly unsexy. Rarity is just getting kicked while she's down, your focusing on the horror of it, and the sexualization brought up in the dream is just completely absent.
The clop at the end was alright, though it feels very vanilla given the direction I felt the story was going.
Where I think the story did shine was the romance you built with RariJack. You did a good job of leading up to it and fleshing it out and it felt like the real focus of the story to me. Which is a bit of a shame because I don't think fans of RariJack would know to look for it here since your description doesn't mention it at all.
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I'm sorry, could you show me what exactly about the image and the description says "exhibition/humiliation fetish clopfic"? I'm curious to know this, so I can maybe change it to not give that impression.
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I guess what made me presume it was going that way was a few things. On your tumblr you have your story tagged with exhibitionism and humiliation, a few fics have shown up in recent history all featuring cover art showing that one scene that had all gone the route of those fetishes, and the cover art you use was meant to be titillating for those same reasons making me think you were going to follow suit. As I said in my last comment, that you opened up with a dream that teased at those ideas seemed to reinforce the idea you were going in that direction.
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I'll admit fault on mistagging it through tumblr. Everything else, no. I didn't give any notion that the scene where she was stripped was going to be glamorous or enjoyable. I even said in the description that it was going to be a shameful experience, and I had the events in the story all build on each other, in a "things just keep getting worse" fashion. The only other way I could have forewarned people ahead of time was to specifically tell them what was going to happen in the story, which would have been spoilers. Sorry it didn't turn out the way you wanted it to, but I stand by my decisions (except for the tumblr tags).
Such an overreaction, she should have pride in her figure.
That was pretty good, I'm not a fan of rarijack shipping but I liked this story nonetheless, it was cute.
Well done cloperella, always looking forward to more stuff from you c:
Okay this is way different than I thought going in. Amazing surprise though.
This was a very entertaining read and I'm happy to see other authors besides myself "writing clop right" and by that I mean, having the scene provide something to the story other than be smut for the sake of smut.
The stereotype that all clop is just clop with no plot is one that authors like you and me struggle against every time we write one of these kinds of fics.
Needless to say: You've impressed me greatly with this fic.
I seriously enjoyed this story. The sex was tasteful, the characterization was spot-on, and the references to actual events in the episode, while occasionally a tad heavy-handed for my tastes, were at least accurate. Good show old sport
Wish all those ponies laughing at her, Blueblood, and Discord had gotten some karma.
I'm surprised this story isn't more popular -- very well written, excellent character development.
Wish there was more. I am angry about how short it is and in awe about how awesome the writing and character development was handled.
Some clunky and hammy lines aside, it was pretty good.
I'd love a sequel to this!!
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Not sure if you've noticed, but my fic-writing isn't really centered around MLP as of late. It's more on Zootopia.
The most recent MLP story I did was one with Daybreaker and Discord, and I'm kicking around the idea of doing a sequel for that sometime. But even if I made a bg comeback for MLP writing, I can confidently say I wouldn't make a sequel to this. I made it around one scene in an episode that lasted five seconds, so there's not really anything to expand on.
Glad you liked it that much though, very much appreciated.
Loving this story.
I can't believe how long it took me to get around to reading this. Wonderfully done, it was a great story to read. And it had such a wonderful warming moment before, during, and after the steaming segment on the couch.
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I Agree
and as for Prince Blueblood or shod I say Prince Bluedick shod get it more 😈(Dark laugh your)