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Zanem-Ji


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Comments ( 17 )

I enjoyed this actually. It had some very nice parts and was an overall sweet story.
The ending was sad, though... :ajsleepy::raritycry:

As the huge Rarijack fan I am, I got to say that I am happy when this ship get some love.
Good job there! <3

I didnt even realize it was a poem until WAY later in the story :twilightblush:because I was reading it so fast:rainbowlaugh:
That was AMAZING!!!:pinkiehappy:

Thank you both! I always appreciate the positive comments :)

Comment posted by teEga deleted Mar 12th, 2014

Oooooh my goddess!!! I almost cry!!! That final it was... I just.... Why celestia!?!? WHY!?!?

4069606 i know exactly what you mean, half way through i was like hang on a second, went back and read it all again then was like, ok i'm seeing it now

To sum up my feelings about this in two words i'd say absolutly brilliant

aCB

The lack of consistent rhythm really threw me off. It lacked a sense of flow that iambic pentameter or a similar scheme would convey. It just felt like a story that happened to rhyme.

Hehehe, Rarity's parents always knew she was gay.
Sweet little poem.
Can you do one about rocks that Maud Pie would approve of?

I knew this was going to end up making me cry, it was beautiful, im really not much for poetry its not my thing but this was a sweet piece that tore my heart strings a bit, it flowed amazingly and because of it that made it seem like i was reading a short story and not a poem precisely. Great job! And poor Applejack :'( :fluttercry:

All of my feels!

This was beautiful. You earned this favorite and upvote. Never stop.

5334156 Thank you for the compliment! :twilightsmile: They are always appreciated!

I am one satisfied reader! It feels like reading life. Not part of a life or someone's life in particular; just life. Like you went into the ionosphere, cast a net over humanity, pulled a small part of us, and made it about ponies.

Now clearly my explanations of things makes no sense, but this piece really is a very nice little read.

5334851 I'm so sorry I'm so late in thanking you, but...

Thank you! I appreciate your comment! :pinkiehappy:

To be honest when I started reading it I was quite confused and then the rest of it came and I finally understood it better.
This is the first poem/story I've read and to be honest, it was beautiful.

I feel the need to write some poetry now.

Beautiful piece of art, beautiful indeed.

Oh my goodness it was so awesome it almost made me cry!!!! I was smiling the whole time I read this!!! Great job, author! Keep up the good work!

They too, had no problem with it,
They were actually filled with elation.
Praise Ditka! We don't have to worry about her getting pregnant anymore!

fuck u for making me SOB

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