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I will no longer be writing Fimfictions, nor will I continue the unfinished ones. I do apologize. However, my stories will remain on this site.
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Wall of text!
Also, don't put thought in quotation marks. Most people used italics.
Cute chapter. Good pacing and dialogue
5470990 Thank you. I am not too happy with the general grammatical text I used, as articunos also pointed out, there are a few things I did differently than the norm which may make some of it confusing or less manageable, but I am quite happy with the amount of details and dialogue, since I tend to pay too much attention into details rather than the dialogue, so I tried to even it out. I'm glad it had a positive impact on you.
It has been a while since I added chapters to this story and chapter 3 and 4 is very short, so I may get back to this story soon. Thank you again for the kind words.