I will no longer be writing Fimfictions, nor will I continue the unfinished ones. I do apologize. However, my stories will remain on this site.
Pinkie has a very creative mind and she is not afraid to use it. She's glad she got a friend waiting for her at home to share her thoughts with. After all, we all need that special friend that we really connect with, and Pinkie needs it more than anyone else, but this is a very special friend of hers.
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Hah, Pinkie has a tulpa?
Well, it's not bad. Just some commas are missing, and plural for "bee" is "bees" and not "bee's". The beginning, about making up stories, was very cool, something which Pinkie would be able to do, but also something giving her some extra depth. Rest was kinda typical Tragedy tag stuff, which isn't bad :)
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Thank you. I will try and fix the errors. My main language isn't english and I've always been told with commas: "When in doubt, leave them out" so I am very careful with not making too many commas.
The story was just an idea I had, and decided to write it down. Thank you very much for your opinion.
What is this sorcery? I randomly pick a story in the "New Stories" section and it's actually good?
Similar to what the guy two comments ago said, it has minimal spelling mistakes and some improper punctuations (mostly noticeable in the dialogues, where you often left out dots). Also, paragraph 2-4 could've been spaced out a little more. And the jump to RD and Twily should've been somehow separated with some ----'s or something.
But apart from that, the story itself is pretty nice. I don't see what's so dark about it, but I can certainly see the sadness. Kinda twists the pink weirdo we know and love into a new light and unfolds a new facade or her, showing that you can smile all day but still have dissatisfaction in your life. Sometimes you just need a good friend to get over your pain, even when said friend isn't real.
(I can't believe I just supported tulpaes.)
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Thank you very much. I'll go ahead and re-read it and fix the errors I manage to find. Thanks for reading and for the feedback. Have a nice day.
Aww this is sooo sweet!
This is the one of the Best. Stories. Ever.
5452444 Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed it
I thought that you indeed did a good job in writing this story and it was a pleasure to read. I thought you did a good job in portraying Pinkies character.
-frost
How did I read this earlier?
This was great, and I like how you called her friend Diane. It's one of my favorite names.
Saddy but sweet
Good job