• Member Since 8th Dec, 2014
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One word: BWA HA HA. Oh, darn, that's three.

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Water.

It was all Pinkie had felt for such a long time. For such an exhaustingly long time, unable to see or hear or breathe...

What was it that led to this? So hard to remember...it was a contest, designed to find who the "real" Pinkie was. The real Pinkie...was that her? She couldn't remember anymore. All she could was hang on the last shreds of that golden life she used to enjoy...


Cover art from Posey on Derpibooru.

Also, we now have two fantastic readings done by Shadowlaw010 (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NFiGo6JMXNo) and TheDizzyDan (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_ocU-BfXLDI)

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Comments ( 16 )

This...is amazing. It's beautifully written, and it's the concept of story I have been searching for for as long as I've been looking at MLP fanfics.
You executed it incredibly well.

Absolutely amazing work right here ^_^

Wow, this is really well written.
Anyway, sorry for breaking the sad, tragic mood, but...that last line...

SHHHHEEEE LEEEET GOOOOOOOO!!!

Comment posted by ShadowKirby deleted May 12th, 2015

This is so beautiful.

5969411 Thanks! I wrote it in one hour with minimal editing. Awesome, right?

Why is this not ranked higher with a billion more likes? I keep checking it and it's not getting much more attention, like it should!

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Yes! I agree!

I think I can only go ahead and agree with what has been said before. This was an overwhelmingly well planned-out and executed short story, and quite frankly the kind of thing I'd like to see on this site more often.

And yes, it does deserve more attention. Looking at the description, I realized your story is featured in two groups only. You may consider adding a few to the list. That way, there should be at least some more people reading it.

I recommend you put a cover image for this story. It'll look nicer, and might draw attention to people who are skimming.

Plus, I just think it would look even nicer ^_^

That is an AWESOME picture!
Perfectly fitting! ^_^

Wow. That was amazing! Wonderfully written, this deserves way more attention.

i can imagine what happened at the end of the contest:
Twilight: okay pinkie, you can look away now
Pinkie: yay! now for some fun:pinkiehappy:
everyone::twilightoops: oh shi-

As much as I admittedly dislike Antony C and his reviews, I loved this story. Like everyone else said, it was well-written and the concept is great. :twilightsmile: Now if only we could get this featured.....you know, instead of the incest porno that got featured awhile back. :ajbemused:

I...I don't know what to say. :raritycry:

Wow this is amazing! You get a 👍 and a from :pinkiehappy: me!

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