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loopertooper


Brony, gamer, and I want to design games when I grow up. I have a WILD IMAGINATION and sometimes like to write. If I do write please don't be afraid to criticize me. :) /)

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Pie sure is a wonderful thing. Some of the greatest parts are cutting off the slices. Because each slice is different in their own way. A random story if Pinkie Pie, Pinkamena Diane Pie, and Surprise all lived in the same house.

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Sounds kinky.

1689307
I need to ask you stop. That... First... is making people nervous

Oh God, more. Please.

You the hell is this Surprise I keep hearing about?

1689422
Pinkie Pie's concept
White pegasus, yellow mane.

1689422 surprise was an actual g1 pony on which pinkie is partially based. I had the toy of her back in the day

Edit: http://mylittlewiki.org/wiki/Surprise

So I guess I'm lost as to why the author is crediting kwakerjack for a canon creation

1689570......:twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops::twilightoops: Ummm lets say that i didnt know that it was a g1 pony :rainbowderp::twilightsmile: 1 sec

1689628 Because Knowledge is Power

WHAT THE *:yay:* HAVE YOU DONE?!

i mean sure having.... i mean to have...whoa...

this is new holy crap
please continue

Pinkamena would probabally get along with Surprise. Nopony could get along with G3 Pinkie.

I like where this is going, following

Surprise is in this so I'll give it an upvote by default :twilightsmile:

Dude, this is a great fic! Keep up the good work! //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png

Though I would work on the synopsis...

A random story if Pinkie Pie, Pinkamena Diane Pie, and Surprise all lived in the same house. Some points get dark when Pinkamena is thinking. Also Pinkamena's a unicorn.

could work without

Some points get dark when Pinkamena is thinking.

or

Also Pinkamena's a unicorn.

//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Spitfire_sad.png

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This could use work, but overall I like it.

Too bad I can't put myself into this fic, I'd love to try a four way fourth wall break with Pinkie Pie, Surprise, and Pinkamena. :pinkiehappy:

Oh well this is still going to be awesome, and I take it Surprise is the middle one of the group, she's not as pyscho as Pinkamena or as random as Pinkie Pie. :trixieshiftright:

1690664 thats what im kinda going for:twilightsmile:

This catches my interest... :trixieshiftright:

I shall keep an eye on it and see what happens. Because really, who wouldn't want to see all three variants of Pinkie live together?

My God....What have you done!!! The forth, it will break.

Also, faved and upvoted

1689422 That's Who the hell, not You the hell!

Pinkamena is certainly intresting, at times she's actively thinking of ways to kill her roommates and other times she's actually helping them out. She's certainly an intresting one. :pinkiesmile:

Since when is Pinkamena a unicorn?

Only I'm guessing their Anthro's and Pinkamena's a Unicorn.

immediately i just saw that Pinkamena said that she was a unicorn my head was like INFORMATION DOES NOT COMPUTE WITH EVERYTHING. i was like what what what what what for like 5 mins:derpytongue2: lol and wait since all of them are like the SAME PONY isn't their birthday on the same date? why is the party only for pinkamena?
and also thank goodness that was only a daydream about killing them:pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:
and thank u for suprise getting her present right so pinkamena wont have another longing look at that knife:pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2:

aaw pinkamena was nice:pinkiesad2::pinkiesad2::pinkiesmile:
can't wait for the next chapter!!!!:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

“Oh, just Celestia’s old roommate at college, who happens to control shadows. He made copies of us that were all dark and creepy. Funny thing is, the dark me looked like Pinkameany. So we turned him to stone. Bye Bye.” Pinkie went off to the library.
Lol:pinkiehappy::pinkiesmile::pinkiegasp:

Huh. I remember reading a story with this same cover art where Pinkimena and Suprise were Pinkie's alternate personalities. Anyone know what that was called?

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