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Cloperella


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Read this somewhere before. Can't remember where though. It was a decent read a still is for a Clopfic.

Your name gives this story away :trollestia:

154774 I have this story on DA, the Clopfic Directory, and also the Explicit Pony Fiction Archive, so probably one of those. Glad you enjoyed it more than once.

"Mm, I love the smell of pony musk." I loled :rainbowlaugh:

i have QUITE a few things to say about this fir-
*POMF*
«...»
nevermind that sums it up

Two shots! congats, its a clop fic:derpytongue2:

the pic almost killed me the story killed me:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::scootangel:

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I know where you're coming from on describing past episode events, but my belief is that the author should include some descriptions just in the off chance that the reader isn't a fan of the show. Some of my friends who aren't bronies look up random fics sometimes, so they would need information like this to help with the story.

wow, that was actually pretty good, maybe not as "molestia" as i thought it woudl be. nice job, could use a sequal~

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Even if it's a minuscule amount of readers, they're still worth considering to me. :twilightsmile:

Well done! This was a great read. Kudo's on good gramar. Kinda surprised me at the end, not so Molestia. Don't get me wrong I love how it ended. Definitely started out full on Molestia tho. One of the better Clopfics out there in that it actually has some heart to it, which is always good. And as far as recounting past events I didn't feel intellectually insulted. I've seen it in plenty of other works. JK Rowling did it with the Harry Potter series until.. what, the 5th book?
Anyways good read, I'll be watchin' you...:ajsmug:

Any chance Chapter 2 will ever see the light of day?

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Well, to be honest with you, I have finished a first draft of another Molestia fic, but I put it on hold to create a Derpy fic for the whole "Save Derpy" campaign. Hopefully Molestia 2 will be out before the end of March.

I'm not seeing any other comments about it.
Is that scene where Twilight loses it just your rendition of the canon Twilight-loses-control scene, or is it a reference to Avatar: The Last Airbender? I mean, it sounded a lot like when Aang loses control of his powers after finding Monk Giatso and Katara brings him back from his rage.
Could just be a coincident, though.

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Coincidence. I've never seen a full episode of Avatar, but it looks like a good series from what little I've seen.

324431 Never really noticed how much I abuse "as she" before. :facehoof:
God I love the Edit button. I think some of those sentences sound fancier now that I had to sit there and think of how to rework them.

Basically same points as above; just some streamlining and the hyphens.

As for content though, scissor me timbers!

“Now bend over. It’s my turn to do the molesting.”
Oh you sassy gal, you.:twilightsmile:

Licking up magical shining jizz ejaculated from the giant kick ass facial horn of an alicorn? I believe that deserves applause. :heart:

first, i although you do have paragraphs; you separate them with indents (i think that was the english word for it, although im not certain), it would be a tad easier to read if you used the' block paragraph' method instead. although; its nearly the same thing, so it might just be me.

one thing that kept creeping back into my thought is the problem of guards or staff either directly outside the room or walking past...the princess shouting out twilights name in pure pleasure, that would probably turn a few heads :pinkiehappy: (would actually be quite funny to read a short story from a guard or staff members point of view; both during the times that celestia wasn't with twilight and the time(s) they were in celestias room :twilightsmile:)

EDIT: oh and i forgot to write something! AWESOME I WANT MORE! :raritystarry:

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My view is that the guards are so dutiful to the princess, that they know not to ask questions about what goes on within her royal bed chambers. Since they're usually represented as similar to the British guards, they're probably standing outside motionless while they hear her cries of pleasure. The most reaction you might get out of them is a few drops of sweat, or a possible "standing ovation" from their stallionhood...

Glad you liked it. :trollestia:

Yay, it's up here! Is this an edited version? If so then I guess I'll just have to read it a 5th time! :twilightsheepish:

352196 Oh my gosh, I'm glad you're such an avid reader. It makes Molestia so wet :trollestia:

To answer your question, yes it is, but the story is completely unchanged. I like to make some small edits from time to time if I think of something that might read better. I'll have to update them on the other fic sites as well, to stay consistent. Thanks for being so faithful!

352398 It makes Molestia so wet. Awww I hate you for typing that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :flutterrage:
BECAUSE I checked this reply on mobile. In class. And I almost spurted out everything I had in my mouth :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

Well yeah I almost always tweak my stories a bit too even after they've been published :twilightblush:

Wait...A constellation formed.....As in stars....As in the night...:twilightoops::facehoof: LUNA have you been watching?

I had to stop reading when she, uh... with the stuff... out of her horn. That bit felt a little too silly to me.

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Erogenous zone? Oh totally. Yes.
Stuff coming out of it, however...? Not so much. :unsuresweetie:

For these three parts, it should be Celestia's :trollestia:
"However, on this day, Princess Celestials' usual calm"
"important pony in Princess Celestias' life"
"Twilight’s tongue instinctively began to move in tune with Princess Celestias’, both intertwined"

This sentence = :rainbowhuh:
"It was something that made her every day that she had chosen the right unicorn to become a mentor to."

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:facehoof:
Yeah, my first proofreader isn't very good at finding little mishaps like that. But it's mostly my fault for not catching that.

"The princess breathed hard, rolling herself onto her back. I’m not finished… yet." - Yo dawg, you're missing a quotation mark
"Their vulva’s mashed into each other while" - You do not need an apostrophe here
"each one matching the others speed as they moved" - You do need an apostrophe here :derpytongue2:

Damn. I lost the battle with clopfics. :fluttercry:

Oh well, its been a good run. And now... NO SHAME!:raritystarry: You sir, are a genius.

The only thing sad about these stories is that Twilight dosen't usually become an alicorn or find some way of living forever. Which makes me sad knowing Celestia will have to suffer through her death. :(

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I like to keep the number of existing alicorns limited to canon in my stories. >.>
Of course, it's a very sad thought. But I think it makes Celestia a stronger character to know that she's dealt with this many times before, and after Twilight's passing, she'll deal with it many times again.

Dat picture.

Both o' dos pictures.

467322 What can I say? I'll never have too much solar princess. :trollestia:

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Woop da doop oh yayz yipee hell yeah! :trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:
That's my reaction!
[edit] put it on top favorites on my userpage :heart:

Oh this was funny and exciting, and Lunas last line, loved it!

I was expecting Twilight to be hiding in the cake. Still a rather intresting chapter.

is this related to the princess molestia tumblr blog?

477306 You could say that it's inspired by John Joseco's Ask Princess Molestia tumblr. That's what I envision whenever I write these stories.

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:rainbowhuh:dafuq?:rainbowhuh:

I loved how Celestia, at the end, was like "This really isn't the most embarassing thing you've seen me do".

477370 i noticed the dripping from just a bite, celestia on a diet, and fat flank.

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