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IKR, n i seriously see pinkie being a tease.............which im not against in the least!:pinkiehappy:

For some hilarious reason, the voices in my head were switching between Morgan Freeman and that guy in the dos equis commercials. All in all a fine clopfic with a hilarious premise and wonderful delivery.:twilightsheepish:

161183 As soon as I saw the name Morgan Freeman, I started laughing so hard. I'm gonna have to try that sometime. Thanks for reading.

I'm loving this!!! Really good writing! Hoping for RD soon!:rainbowdetermined2:

It's definitely possible. It has crossed my mind a few times, just not to the point of "Oh god I HAVE to write this to get some sleep!"

:pinkiesick:...with a human? I would never do that...
:pinkiecrazy:...or would I?
:pinkiesick:NO, I wouldn't
:ajbemused: yes you would, i did.

:rainbowderp:...i need an adult?
:facehoof: just RUN, you're next
:rainbowderp:... (runs for the hills)
:ajbemused: Twilight's next.
:twilightoops: ...

Anyway, somehow, i can see this playing out in my mind, except for the human part, which makes no sense whatsoever. Also, seeing as RD has run as far as possible away from you, does that mean Twilight is next?

:twilightoops: Oh god no...
:pinkiecrazy: you're going to love it (laughs hysterically)

185990 subtlechaos.files.wordpress.com/2011/02/durarara-gif1.gif NEED MOAR CHAPTERS :flutterrage:

but no pressure, take your time...

...still trying to find your home address :trixieshiftleft: ...

I honestly feel like this story would've been better without the cloppy part, derpy could use some more d'awww

I see where you're coming from. I probably could have just made the story about Twilight talking with Derpy, and just having a tender moment about telling her to come back home.
Eh, could of, would have, should have. Can't take it back now.:pinkiehappy:


Take it back ? ofcourse not! make another story! :rainbowlaugh:

yes we need derpy love she deserves it.............:derpytongue2:..................got plenty to give....:derpyderp2:

I assume that these are different humans (or at least share no continuity with each other).
I like how this story was resolved. It was like the clop was just part of the story and not the point of it. I like that.

Hmmmmmmmm. Well, that was interesting. I had no idea that AJ was into THAT kind of... Roleplay? Game? What?

Pretty good, short, but alright.

380987 Great, glad to hear it. Hope to hear from you again. :twilightsmile:

Oh god the cupcakes... ehhhhhhhhhh :pinkiesick:
Maybe its just me...
ANYWAYS good none the less! ONWARD TO DERP. :derpytongue2:


Well, I've talked with a well-known gay pony artist, and he says that it doesn't taste bad, that it's rather tasteless. That is of course unless you eat a lot of citrus, and then it supposedly tastes sweet. So I thought I'd incorporate that. :pinkiesmile:

464047 Huh...
Well I'm open to new ideas.. *shrug* I guess it doesn't really bother me that much. So go for it. Not that I have any say on what you write in your own fics of course, but yeah.. :applejackunsure:

Can't wait for more stories.:twilightsmile:


I'm interested in seeing this fic continued. :pinkiehappy:

We'll see. I've actually begun construction on my first non-clop story, so I'm trying to work on that a little bit.

Did your sanity finally catch up with ya? Yeah, hate it when that happens, may i recommend a bannana and marajuana muffin to cheer you up? >:3

I'll just take a banana muffin. I think I'd be one of those who curl up in the corner because they're tripping way too hard.

I like this. Seriously, there needs to be more clop like this. It was sweet and sexy, and Rainbow was more in character here than I've seen her in some other fanfics. I could almost actually see Rainbow saying these things.

With her giving up on the Wonderbolts... excellent for her. If anything, she's too good for them. I mean, it kind of stinks that Rainbow's not going to be a one of them, but she's got it prime at Ponyville. Still, maybe she could get sub for Wonderbolts. She is a national hero.


I've been spending a lot of time on Ponychan lately, and something I've noticed come up in discussion often is how little Dash has talked about the Wonderbolts this season. The only time I can think of off the top of my head is when they came to try and stop Spike from destroying the town, and failed miserably. I still think she idolizes Spitfire and Soarin, but not in a way that she wants to join their ranks anymore. Maybe meet them and get some autographs or a chance to fly with them, but that's all.

Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :rainbowdetermined2:

571188 Yeah, those were my thoughts, too.

I like this series you got over here as a whole. You really got some good characterization going on in these stories.

As much as I like clopfics:rainbowlaugh:....I feel that this was maybe rushed a bit too much. As a Dash fan myself, I can see apparent that there may be some minimal events missing. Also, yeah, kind of a text wall as times, maybe break it up a little?

Well, anyway, still great job on this story, and of the previous chapters too of this.:twilightsmile:

Comment posted by heavymetalcat1 deleted Aug 30th, 2019
Comment posted by heavymetalcat1 deleted Aug 30th, 2019

Good writing. Glad that Dash gets the love too.
Who's next?


Hard to say, honestly. I've been kicking around a story with Rarity for a while, but I never got around to it and the mood kind of left me. I usually write the stories if I have a particular character bugging me for most of a day, and today just happened to be Rainbow. We'll see what form inspiration takes in the future. :raritywink:

Thanks for reading!

Awesomeness, I can't get enough of Romance w/ Rainbow Dash stories.

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