Applejack, Twilight, and Rarity have always had a sleepover once a month since their first year as friends. But this time Twilight can't make it, and AJ has something on her mind for Rarity. Will this be another crazy night?
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I'm still on vacation so I can't do any editing, but despite what you said to me on the phone, you are already a lot better.
What a shock: The more you write the better it gets. So stop thinking down on yourself! My first version of e e e wasn't very good at all. Time and review. Time and review. Write and read friend. That's how you grow. And you have.
It's great to have you back and loving ponies.
Can't say that i haven't seen better, but your story had made me smile.
It's was a fluffy one-shot. Keep up the good work!!!
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Thanks! I guess actually putting in the time for my writing is making a bit of a difference.
I really like the romantic settings you put in this story.
I totally love this
I don't think my vocabulary can quite justify how much I absolutely loved this! I have been left dumbfounded by the feelings portrayed.
"Esdrcftvyetruytvbfvytfuvgb!"
That should do it.
I absolutely love this story! The way you portray Applejack and Rarity is very well written! I really like the romantic setting and candlelight dinner setting as well. I also like the way the plot is built up for Applejack's relationship with Rarity from a close friend to a full blown marefriend! They are all in character and like I said, very well written story! Great job!
I did a reading of your story! I love the story and it's a masterpiece! It's my favorite story of Rarijack of all time!
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