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Cloperella


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Just finished the story, and I have admit: I only came for the cover art... nah, just joking. But seriously though, could I get a link to the full picture? :D

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Yeah, I was going to put that picture in, but I completely forgot. It's in there now.
http://derpibooru.org/294818?scope=scpe9158e2abedcd1730075405cb7ca822ee4edb36d7

Look who finally posted a new fic :raritystarry:

Now keep em comming :rainbowlaugh:

part 2 with her roommate maybe?

A new Cloperella fic? :3 Instafav \o/

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I will certainly try!

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I wouldn't mind using her again, she's fun to talk about.

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:3

2624585 As much as I despice this genre there's something about your writing that makes it impossible to not like your stories :rainbowlaugh:
Hm, might be because it's not just ponlies banging the brains out of eachother (figuratively speaking), but also contains a good storyline.

I'd love to see more. And do try out different genres. You can have a lot of fun mixing genres you know :raritywink:
And it'd be fun to see you try your hoof/hand on a full lenght multi chapter romance fiction. Please make it happen :yay:

2624180, your stories and OC are absolutely...
HOT!

Fucking awesome on so many levels :)

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Hm, a multi-chapter story... not sure about that one right now. It's already hard enough for me to get a story like this out. We'll see.
But I'm really happy you enjoy what I have to offer, especially since it's not your favorite genre.

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Thank you! I should have said who the artist responsible for drawing it was, it's RatofDrawn, he's a very talented clop-artist.

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:twilightsheepish:

2626723 They should have you in PLAYPONY. You're damn sexy!

Anypony else agree with me?

Kudos mate! Great story! And a pretty mare to boot! Now we just need to get her into some sexy clothing and have her have a sexy encounter with the stallion that 'caught her in the act' so to speak. Keep it up! (In more ways then one. :ajsmug:)

I want your pictures, where dost thee keep thy deviations

You should write out the story she clopped to. I'd read that. :eeyup:
Slightly shakey start, but a good read. Think we'll get to see more of her?

“Hey, it’s me.” Shade’s voice rang out from behind. “You left you knapsack down here, I left it by your door.” Rella stayed silent, out of breath and not entirely sure if she wanted him to hear her at the moment. “By the way, loved what I heard, very arousing, but the ending was a little soft for me. Eight out of ten, very cloppable.”

Like a bro!

2634948 That pic is from ratofponi.

Also, while I'm here. I'll be giving this a read, because any lesbian sex is typically good lesbian sex, but don't force pictures into the story like that. It breaks immersion and kills it for the people that actually want to imagine the stuff. Use hyperlinks like this.

unlinked: [ url=http://derpicdn.net/thumbs/1300/600/2013/04/11/19_50_52_418_294818__UNOPT__oc_explicit_artist_ratofdrawn.png]like this[/url ]

Are you going to continue this story? :twilightblush:

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I don't plan to do anything else with this particular story no. I just wanted to make something to give a little insight as to what my OC's mentality and behavior was like. I am however collaborating with a friend about using her in a story he has in mind, so you might get to see her again later on.

I might also offhandedly have her appear as a background pony from time to time in other stories if I can make it fit.

Oh Celestial that was amazing! I beer knew how she got her name, and now I love it! You out so much power into your stories. I try to hold back from rubbing myself as Rella did, but you just write so erotic. I love every little bit of this story!

The funny thing about my experience with this story is that I actually thought that I was reading another one, but my tabs switched. So throughout the whole story I was wondering, "Where's Pinkie?" I eventually settled on that it's Pinkie Pie, so it doesn't have to have her in it. ...Then I saw the title.

This is a really heart- (and other area) warming little tale. :twilightsmile: :heart:

Also, this:

the very same princess who had spurned Rella to explore her body in the first place?

... is the best possible kind of typo (you want "spurred"), because it completely reverses the meaning of the sentence (is there a word for that?). :rainbowlaugh:

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Huh. Did not know there was another word. Thanks for pointing that out, it has been fixed.

6225071 At least, I assumed you meant "spurred" (as in, "encouraged"). "Spurned" means "rejected" or "shunned". :twilightsmile:

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