• Member Since 28th Dec, 2016
  • offline last seen January 15th

AJtheRaven


Appledash shipper. Critical of everything. Except Appledash. Because Appledash.

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Rarity has nowhere to go on Hearth's Warming Eve, so she decides to pay Applejack a visit at Sweet Apple Acres. She should have known that they'd end up arguing.

Together, the two mares must find a way to salvage the evening. And Rarity has to figure out how to keep hiding her crush on Applejack - a task getting harder by the minute.

Or maybe tonight's the night she should finally confess...


Written solely because I needed some fluff in my life. Also, cover art by me. Haha, just kidding. I don't know who drew the art, but it's beautiful, so please let me know if you do!

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Comments ( 16 )

This was a great story! Merry Christmas... or Happy Hearth's Warming!

8618419
Thank you! Merry Christmas to you as well.

You made my day i was looking for a good Heath's Warming Rarijack story, this was a wonderful story, have a fav and Merry Christmas.

For some reason "Cooking By The Book" from "Lazytown" played in my head during the Apple Pie making scene.
Anyway this was such a cute story. Although I'm an AppleDash shipper, I can enjoy stories like this that are well written.

8619397
Haha;) I ship appledash as well, it's my OTP, but wanted to expand my horizons a little since I like rarijack as well. So thank you!:)

There came the raised eyebrow that Applejack was so famous for. “Y’all styled mah mane, didn’t ya.” It wasn't a question.

I'm sorry, but while the rest of this is brilliant, especially along the sensory details, Applejack's use of "y'all" is incorrect. You...can't refer to one person as "y'all"-it's like "youse" or "everybody."

For Big Mac, Applejack had carved a wooden sculpture of Sweetie Belle.

I have to be that pegasister, but...EM....

Other than that, this was...truly beautiful. Both Applejack and Rarity were amazingly in-character, the Apple family traditions were creative and intrinsically (I THINK I'm using that right) charming, and I have to say, Applebloom's shenanigans did make me have to suppress a laugh.

I also really like the idea of Earth Pony magic as described, and Applejack creating heat just really contributed to her character and the atmosphere of the story in an amazingly masterful way. I have to admit I was a little surprised with Applejack being so forward at the end, before realizing that you don't write RariJack like AppleDash at all. That was a nice little designer's craftmanship there...it makes sense, as they're, y'know, a different pairing and wouldn't quite act as awkward as RD and AJ or exchange smack over sports teams.

All in all, this was awesome! Favorite Hearth's Warming story so far! Have a favorite and a happy pony parade! :heart::twilightsmile::pinkiehappy::ajsmug::yay::rainbowwild::raritywink::moustache::trollestia::derpytongue2::heart:
Happy Hearth's Warming! :rainbowwild:

8619581
Thanks so much for the detailed review!!! So actually the use of y'all was intentional, I have a headcanon that AJ knows she's being grammatically incorrect but stubbornly keeps doing it anyway just to get on people's nerves - her version of being mischievous. Secondly, dammit, I meant to write Sugar Belle! Thanks for pointing that out. And finally, I am so touched and flattered!!! Glad you enjoyed my story. Happy Holidays!

¡Me encanto!:heart: solo una cosa, en la parte en que Applejack da su regalo a BigMac dice que es una escultura de Sweetie Belle, no se si leí mal o así lo pusiste, solo se me hace raro 😅, de igual manera me gusto mucho la historia y lo que hiciste con la magia de los ponys terrestres :)

8621030
¡Muchas gracias! Sí, tienes razón, esa parte fue un error, que arreglaré. gracias por contarme sobre eso.

RAVEN THIS WAS SOOOO GOOD IM DYING ??!:!;!?,!,$: THIS IS ONE OF TGE BEST RARIJACK FICS IVE EVER READ??????? HHDHDHFJF 100/10!!!!!!!! (also i recognize the art! it’s by rarijackdaily on tumblr!)

A Rarijack fic in time for Christmas, sign me up!
I haven't read it yet, but I'll check it out over the weekend and give you a real review :D

8621866
Oh wow thank you so much!!! I'm so flattered!!!:)

8622977
Awesome!! I can't wait for your review!

I was just looking for anything AJ/Rarity story to read when I saw this. I didn't even realize that it's V-day today. I have no one to celebrate with and here I was reading, grinning like an idiot the whole time. You've just added some sweetness to my day. Thank you <3

9457200
Awwwwwww, I'm glad :) and happy Valentine's Day XD

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