• Member Since 9th Jul, 2015
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Vera_the_Pegasister


Hi there! I'm a geeky, nerdy teen with slightly too much time on her hands, loves MLP and Marvel, and that's about all you need to know.

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Rarity and Applejack are on their first casual date, but Rarity has hesitations about swimming in the pond with Applejack. Will she abandon her marefriend or set aside her fears and dive on in? (pun intended) Just short, sweet fluff.

Cover art credit to BronyFang

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Comments ( 13 )

I wish it wasn't a pun because i wish they went to drive in movie in this.

Ohh well cute fic though

Kissing, that much, on a first date? Call me old-fashioned, but that sorta works against suspension of disbelief.

Great fic! Love RariJack and enjoyed this fic a lot! :yay: First fic I read in months actually, I love romantic fluff. :pinkiehappy:

Don't see any particular flaws with it, except things like this:

“Oh, thank you darling,” she said blushing. AJ smirked.
"Takes a lot to get YOU to blush," she said teasingly, leaning in next to Rarity. She swatted the other mare away.

It seems like it should be:

“Oh, thank you darling,” she said blushing.
AJ smirked. "Takes a lot to get YOU to blush," she said teasingly, leaning in next to Rarity, who swatted the other mare away.

There were a couple others like this, and I could be wrong, I'm no genius at writing. :derpytongue2:

cuteeeeee:ajsmug:

Is that a "How to Train Your Dragon reference" at the end there!? :ajsmug:

Amazing for a first-time fanfic! Keep writing! You're gonna be an amazing writer, even better than you are now! (Which is hard to see since you're already soooo good!)
:raritystarry:
:pinkiehappy: :ajsmug:

6450897
Thank you, and thanks so much for the input! Grammar is not my strongest suit. :twilightblush: :pinkiehappy:

6602308
Thank you so much! I'm working on a couple more fluff stories, but I also have a few bigger projects in the works. :pinkiehappy: :rainbowkiss:

6611224
It's no problem, quite a good fic. :rainbowkiss: :yay:

So fluffy that I could use it for a pillow

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