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SecretAgentPlotTwist


Wait, am I now just the one who wrote Mortem? 'Cause I think I'm okay with that.

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Twilight Sparkle and Pinkie Pie are going out. On a Trip to Canterlot high Twilight realizes that having two Pinkies is a lot weirder when you're dating one of them. But what is the reason she is dating one but not the other? what separates them?

A little Story set in the early days of Pinkies and Twilight relationship. Focuses on why their relationship works and the differences between the two Pinkies.

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Comments ( 9 )

This had some good ideas but I think it ends way too soon. You don't get into the implied conflict of Twilight feelings getting confused by the two Pinkies. That could have made a good conflict IMO.

6089833 Thanks for the comment. The reason i made it so short was simply because i didn't have the time to turn this into anything big so, it was just a little idea i had. I hope you enjoyed it anyway :twilightsmile:

Yay another Twinkie story! You have no idea how long I've been waiting for one. I think that the story is adorable, but a bit confusing at times. But I still like it, and it deserves a thumbs up! :twilightsmile:

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thank you very much i'm glad you enjoyed it :pinkiehappy:
there really isn't enough Twinkie but then again i don't think i'll ever be happy. just too darn adorable

walking in from Pinkies on-suite

en suite. 'S French.

yay...but human pinkie already knows and was just pretending not to

Cute little story, I really like it :twilightsmile:

Pinkies vision latched on to an outside block on the same column that Sunset had took hers from. Her thumb and middle finger latched onto the edges of the block and with one precise movement it was removed. The tower stood tall with only one outside block holding a lower column.

Sunset looked intensely at the column and squinted “How does that even work?” She asked with sense of distrust.

“Physics.” Pinkie responded with a grin as she twizzled the block between her fingers.

And that part made me laugh so hard I fell of my chair :pinkiehappy:

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