This story is a sequel to The Princess on the Rebound
After Flash sentry so callously dumps Princess Twilight Sparkle, He and his pony counterpart will learn first hand that Tartarus has no fury than a princess scorned.
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Ouch!
That...
Ouch.
Okay, Twilight, that's not even funny, that's outright cruel.
I expect better from the Princess of Friendship.
I'm just glad this is not completed, because I want to see poor Pony Flash get out of this nasty mess. I mean, this is an analogy for what the pony fandom does to him because of Human flash in a microcosm and I feel sorry for the poor guy. And here - for freaking ince - the guy is actually geniunely blameless, which just makes it even worse.
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I want something bad to happen to Twilight.
Like Celestia coming down from Ponyville and giving her a nice dressing down for abusing her power and being a horrible friend. Or maybe Discord praising her for being such a cruel and petty b*tch.
And Silky Shores can get lost as well. He has to cancel one date because his boss is being irrational and she blames him? He's better of without her.
You're right about this being an analogy for how many fans react to him. Poor guy.
5950336 hey, I don't even like Flash Sentry at all. I think he's a bit of a dick. The human flash in this universe even more so. So what Twilight is taking her anger out on Flash Sentry's pony counterpart. Sure he may not have deserved it compared to his human counterpart, but in stories like this, where the girl is a powerful being but gets dumped for being different, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned, especially one like Twilight Sparkle.
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So... are you saying it's alright for Twilight to be abusing her power because she's a girl?
5976313 that's not exactly what I'm saying. What I'm saying is you don't go dumping people for bullshit reasons like the one the human Flash Sentry in this universe did. If it was something like they wanted to just be friends or if Flash caught her cheating on him or vice versa , those are more legitimate reasons to break up with someone, though more violently if the reason was the latter. I have never been on a date before, so I don't even know what I'm talking about dating in real life. Dating in fiction, especiallyfanfiction, though is a little more different given all the fiction I have read. Anyways, back topic. Flash Sentry gave a really bs reason to break up with Twilight, and that is obviously coming back to bite him in the ass. As for what is happening to pony Sentry, what would you have if somewhat broke up with you for whatever bs reason and you somehow travelled to another dimension and the first thing you see is the dimensional counterpart one who dumped you?
I'm not trying to be sexist or anything, nor does this have anything to do with my dislike for Sentry.
When are you going to finish this story, I want to know more? I also want this story to be complete.
I hope the next chapter you are making will be about the Human Flash Sentry who should be punish for hurting Twilight Sparkle, Big Time?
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It's in progress. I've been helping smx with editing it. It's quite entertaining so far!
6151665 Okay, I'm glad that you're helping the author of this story to finish this story, you're very helpful, I hope this story can be finished soon. Good luck!!
I helped write this! Yaaays!
Why is this... why 12 up and 12 down? Are people even reading the second chapter? What happened?!
So Awesome, finally the next chapter has arrived, so Awesome!!!
I am still waiting for the ending by the way, hopefully it will come soon.
6215718 You did an Awesome job!!!
When will the ending come, I am just wondering?
6216689 Hey, Man, Cool it. Let people read at their own pace.
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Honestly dunno. It'll come when it comes. XD
6216957 Okay.
6216974 Okay.
When will the next chapter come?
6217199 When it comes
In this Fic Flash is punched? I mean, he es a dick xD
If it so, I'm gonna read this, damn, I really dislike Sentry xD DX
6217245 Flash does indeed get punched. Anime Style
This is just sad,
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Well, it is in "weeping and laughing: the "Sad Comedy"
6218138 Not what I meant.
Actual, you know what? No. I'm not doing this. I already said you lot have become dull. I see no reason to go though this BS again.
There is nothing new anyone can bring to the table regarding Flash. It's tiresome and played out. So, no. I'm not going down this road again. You wanna make this trash? Go right ahead.
I am done with you all.
Okay, so, Princess Twilight is using innocent pony Flash as a cheap punching bag for her frustration and everybody goes along because Alicorn, while human Flash is a bit of an ass but mostly nice and actually had some legit reasons for breaking it off with Twilight and is hated to a far greater extent than the girl who tried to make the entire student body her mind-slave army.
Twilight? Go sit on your horn and spin.
Canterlot High? You're the worst school this side of Dimmsdale.
Human Flash? Move. Seriously, just move. That town is a lost cause.
Pony Flash? Try to appeal to a higher princess. If that doesn't work, become a villain. Twilight is pretty much contractually obligated to treat you nicer if you tell her you want to "reform", quote unquote.
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'taint over yet. No spoilers about how it ends though. XD
6218145 Oh puh-leaze.
You with your high-and-mighty opinion can suck it up. If you can't show me a better story or ship, then you have no right to claim it's bad or awful. Ok, so you're done. MAKE IT CLEAR THE FIRST TIME! You know what I'm done with? People like you.
i mean i'm not all for flash but damn twilight he didn't do anything the other 1 did he can't help that his human counterpart made a big mistake and broke up with you but to still attack him anyway... also I can't wait to see what happens next
hesitates slowly gets up
drops back to the ground if I didn't know any better I'd think she didn't really wanna help flash
also good job at getting readers to sympathize with flash or me at least
Oh so now he gets it.
can you PLLLEEEAAASSEE [eventually] TRY to update WE ALL would like to know how the end go's, please and thank you!