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It has been a week since the Friendship Games, and Twilight Sparkle has been settling into her new position at Canterlot High School.

However, there's something off with the bookish girl.

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So does this me she's holding on to the magic she got from Sunset, or that she plans on using that later?

6625313 Don't tempt me.

6625520 Imagine, Twilight swaggering around like Sunset does. Should definitely turn a few heads

Genuine chuckles have been achieved. You should find some cover art for this, it will help you get noticed.

Great job. Loved it.

She still needs to channel all of them at once. That would be something.

6626697 we already see what happens... in the movie

Twilight Scoffed, “I came here expecting to socialize with my friends! I didn’t expect a Spanish inquisition!”

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I wonder what would have happened if she had some of Sunset's magic. Maybe she would have stolen Sunset's old jacket? :rainbowlaugh:

I knew it... Science Twilight is a member HYDRA :P

6625520 that was a good one I enjoyed it I had a dream where the mane 7 had to do a fundraiser and they did crazy things to come up with the money it was weird but yet funny at the same time ive been wanting to do a short like this for awhile now but I just can't seem to make up my mind on how to do one maybe an early christmas special? :rainbowlaugh:

Twilight Scoffed, “I came here expecting to socialize with my friends! I didn’t expect a Spanish inquisition!”

Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition!!!

6625313 I bet she has it in that necklace so that she can keep a piece of Sunset close to her heart. (The postal service never sleeps, so why should shippers? :rainbowlaugh:)

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*Checks watch.*

...They got here fast. Concord?

Very entertaining indeed:rainbowlaugh:

6628518 NOBODY EXPECTS THE- Oh bugger!

Put in one word: Exceptional!

I'm confused by the seemingly random capitalizing of words. Throughout the whole thing, different words that should not have a capitalized first letter did. Why?

So, noone else terrified beyond the bounds of rational thought of unprepared SciTwi, with even a teeny bit of Pinkies Reality Breaking Abilities? :derpytongue2:

Also, Pinkie was About to say, Nice bird, the Norwegian Blue. :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by Daaberlicious deleted Nov 13th, 2015

This was pretty funny! :rainbowlaugh:

“I think you’d have to be Flash Sentry to not notice something off,” Sunset said with a smirk.

Wow...THAT MADE THE STORY RIGHT THERE!!!:rainbowlaugh: Oh my goodness!

Come ON! We need a Sunset Shimmer emoji now!

6629847 I'd say I'm a tad bit curious to see where that would lead. One minute Princess Twilight is doing her booksortcation and the next thing you know here comes Twilight popping out of one of her books! OR, she nearly gives Discord a heart attack by popping out of one of his 'cleaned' windows!

...I got nothing. I can't decide if I liked this or not. It's a cute little one shot but there's so much potential for more that being a cute little one shot is an insult.

I'd love to see a picture of each Twilight variation.

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Thank you, you reminded me of something from a couple days back.

With Moondancer, we have seen Twilight use De Cart to write herself into a book.

With Sunset Shimmer, we have seen her use a pair of magically entangled books to write in one book and have it appear in the other, in a totally different realm, used to open, guide the portal.

If Pinkie accidentally mentions L Space to Twilight, or PieTwi even thinks of it, would this give her the ability to write herself into a book, that is then linked to another book she had had, knows off, or even infered, then reappear out f that book?

What if she can appear through historical books, before their loss or destruction, so she can save all but the book she appears in? Which, given temporal mechanics, could be the only book to survuve, because it is the one she uses to go back and save the others?

Given Starswirls temporal magic has such restrictions, will PieTwi have the idea of taking the DeLorean through the portal to deal with the Finale? :pinkiecrazy:

6629913 If someone drew that, I would make it the Cover Art.

Dissociative Identity Disorder is Magic? :applejackconfused::fluttershbad::pinkiecrazy::rainbowderp::raritydespair::twilightoops:

At least she didn't do Sunset.

Discovery Requires Experimentation...considering where I heard that last, I was expecting the story to go in a completely different direction. Thank goodness I was wrong...

6630414 I was thinking of a version of this based off of Lash.

Really needs to be edited, but otherwise I enjoyed it. Got a few laughs outta me, and that's the important part. All in all nice, but really, really needs to be fixed up grammar wise. (Missing periods, randomly capped words that shouldn't be, things like that.)

6629919 That is so brilliant! I've always loved time travel and the concept of alt universes. My Megaligo Ranger Powers are based off of that concept and what you said makes a load of sense! Love it!

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I dont like the multiple alternative universes as they are traditionally stated, as in each choice gives rise to a new universe, as this implies infinite runaway energy.

what is vastly simpler, is that all those alternate universes always exist, call them world tramlines, and each choice you are able to make, is a quantum legal selection, switch point. Its been shown that quantum exchanges can occur for zero energy because there is no change in information.

There is a more complex description, but it reads like something the scriptwriters for Doctor Who threw out for being too unrealistic. :twilightoops:

Im still trying to find anyone else who has considered the possibility that the hologaphic universe, as in a projection from a 2D brane, exists as a pair of 2D branes together, arranged in a pair of Klein bottles placed face to face, which need 5 spacial dimentions to occur. It would be a very intresting structure to define properly.

6629423 NOBODY EXPECTS THE-- was I really that late?

Twilight Scoffed, “I came here expecting to socialize with my friends! I didn’t expect a Spanish inquisition!”

(Pinkie Pie enters in a Spanish Inquisition uniform)
"NOPONY EXPECTS THE SPANISH INQUISITION!"

Bwahahahahahahahahahah! :rainbowlaugh: Well wrote! Well worth an addition to my Fave 1-shots shelf!

6629919 Yes, but technically by using HayCart's Principle, Twilight is essentially only entering a lower dimension: the 2nd dimension. In this dimension, words are still words... As for the diary, at best I would see it as an alternate way between the dimensions... And that's IF and only IF the spell is in fact a transfer and not a projection.

“Yeah, Sure,” Rainbow Chuckled, her tone wavering on the edge of sarcasm, “Just don’t expect me to go easy on you.”

The rest of the group Stifled laughter at that not-so-subtle burn against the overbearing principal of Crystal Prep

“No, It’s okay, Applejack, If Twin Princess wants to rile me up, She’ll see where that gets her.”
“See you at lunch” Twilight Grinned and she walked into the school, leaving the six other girls stunned.

I think you can figure out the mistakes.:twilightsmile:

Edit: Never mind, there's too many. I suggest reading over the story to fix capitalization mistakes. Nice story however.:twilightsheepish:

You should have a bonus chapter where some of Sunset seeps into Twilight, and it makes her really mean.

6630850 Look, as long as Sci-Twi isn't upgrading herself with harvested bits of the other Rainbooms, I think we can agree that she hasn't gone off the Whitehall deep end.

6631900 Marevel's Agents of S.H.E.D

Your grammar and punctuation need serious work. The horrible punctuation and poor use of capitalization made it impossible for me to finish reading this.

Please, please, PLEASE get an editor, or at least look over your work before you publish it!! The grammar and punctuation are atrocious!

Other than that, neat concept.

I would make a Monty Python joke, but it seems that several others beat me to the punch XD.

So why exactly is this story named after a line said by a HYDRA member from Marvel's Agents of SHIELD?

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I believe in the case of Eahestria Girls they are parallel universes. Not alternate universes.

I don't get it...is she becoming her friend's personalities?

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The 6 each give off like, their own flavor of magic, whenever they do the thing, and Scitwi was collecting samples of it. So she got curious and started huffing them.

6634461 *sighs* I meant not in a drug like way.

Now all you need to do is write a clopfic version of this with the same title. :trollestia:

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
2:47_11/15/2015

Nobody ever expects the Spanish Inquisition!!!

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