Sunset never mentioned it to anyone, but there was someone she'd have rather dated then Flash Sentry. A few might have guessed she was into some rich kid, or the high school quarterback, someone who....for lack of a better term....was someone.
Nobody would have guessed she'd pick a nobody like Norman.
"Normal" Norman to the few people who bothered to remember his name is a generally unassuming and overlooked student at Canterlot High, most known for being "that guy I met one time, I think, or maybe it was that other guy" ,as well as formerly being Sunset Shimmers (as well as the universe at large) punching bag .
Needless to say, it won't exactly be easy to convince him her feelings are genuine. Can Sunset win the heart of her crush? or at least manage a decent first date?
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I love it!
Not bad. But you need to go back and edit some. You constantly forget to capitalize your "I"s. Like Berry Punch's second sentence. Will follow to see where this leads.
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is caps locking the i in "i'll" always a thing? it always looked weird to me caps locked on computer, regardless if you say so I will try to correct those.
And, yes a once over, or an editor is probably called for.
5687619 Yeah. When used in this context, referring to oneself, the "I" is capitalized. Always.
That a lot of space...
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Gah, I knew I would mess up somewhere, thanks for catching it for me.
Another good chapter! I really like how this is going so far.
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Thanks! This was more of an "exposition chapter" admittedly, so i'm glad it's pointing in a direction that you enjoy. Just for curiosities' sake, is there any particular place you see this going/want this to go?
I've admittedly planned out much of this story, but a fresh perspective is always welcome.
6151148 Well, I guess I am curious about the random Jabberwocky, but beyond that I'm content to sit back and enjoy the ride for now.
I hope this continues cause i like it
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It's continuing, don't worry. I'm just sadly really slow. I thought about putting out a preview in a blog, but I'd rather just try and get it done then show I'm working on it.
yay new chapter love this fic glad to see more
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Cool, I'm glad to see you're glad, it's always good to know someone is looking forward to these.
Sunset x Adagio is my OTP for life, but if I had to choose a straight pairing for her to be a part of, this would be it.
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Awww, thank you for those kind words, May your OTP prosper and yield many fanfics!
Dude. When is the sequel!?