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HudsonHawk


I'm a brony, Whovian, casual Star Trek fan, and a film geek with a collection of DVDs and Blu-Rays that numbers into the thousands combined. I'm a nerd for all seasons.

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Human Maxwell Frazier winds up in Equestria through a freak occurrence. Adjusting to life with talking, sapient equines is a challenge for anyone, but helping him through it all is his new best friend, the party pony extraordinaire Pinkie Pie.

When Hearts and Hooves Day rolls around, Max is struck by loneliness. When Pinkie decides to set him up with a single mare, she may find her soulmate instead...

A humanXPinkie one-shot.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 85 )

Very nice story! We could always use more Pinkie stories, anyways! :pinkiehappy:

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Thank you very much. I hope I kept Pinkie in character.

'69 Dodge Charger

Nice choice.

My ears were greeted with James Ingram's "Just Once."

Again Nice choice.
This was cute, Well written, Full of feels and pretty adorable. We need more human x Pinkie on this site. Well done :pinkiehappy:
I know you said it was just a one shot but you could really do something with this, Even if its just more one shots of Max and Pinkie.
Anyway I enjoyed it well done

5895275 I couldn't write my way out of a paper bag. Ill leave it to people that know what they are doing lol

Comment posted by Asashi - Dark Fist Inari deleted Apr 30th, 2015

To be honist this was one of the best stories I read in a long time fucking 11/10 great job.:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:



Also That is one off my all time favorite cars the 69 Dodge charger.
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Right in the feels. I can relate to max so much, I was always the nice guy with the sad smile. Hell, the only "Girlfriend" I ever had was just using me to make her real guy jealous enough to propose. The real fucked up thing about it though, Was that I found out at my Grandmom's funeral.

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Little trivia: those romantic failures he listed were my own.

And at your grandma's funeral? Ow. I'm sorry, bud.

(Hugs)

5895832 Yup. I feel ya. 2 year army service and a veteran and I still can't catch a break. I just do what Pinkie does, Try to make other folks happy when I can. Especially kids.

on a less depressing note- 1929 rolls royce is Best Car

5895890
For some reason, after seeing Repo Man, I have a thing for the 1964 Chevy Malibu.

5895379
Thank you for that well thought out, in-depth constructive criticism. :ajbemused:

5895379 What a pathetic useless troll keyboard warrior. Get a grip douche bag.

It was nice story with a happy ending. Golden Slumbers was a bit harsh though.

5898662
Thank you very much! Also, I think her being harsh should be a big hint as to why she's still single. :raritywink:

I love it.

It was good, nice work :)

Awesome work dude!:yay: Golden Slumbers a beach :flutterrage:. You planning to do a sequel for this? :trollestia:

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I'm not sure.

Thanks for the compliment. :pinkiesmile:

Adorable.

Man, Maxie has it rough. I'm just a little glad that at least one of his rejections was mild, or two if you acknowledge the fact that being friendzoned, while hurtful, isn't exactly spiteful.

That mare is incredibly unpleasant though. Though when I think about it, her reaction might not be that weird, though at least in a world with so many sentient species, you'd think they'd be more open to interspecies romance in general.

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When Pinkie is involved, adorability is expected. Thanks for the compliment!

As I posted before, those rejections were my own.

I was actually considering an ending where the reader finds out that Goldie was Cadence in disguise. She had seen how Max and Pinkie interacted and, as the Princess of Love, gave the relationship a push via a Batman Gambit. However, it felt like a cheat or an ass pull, so I scrapped it.

5904553 Man, tough break. Still, I stand by my statements. Hope it got better.

5904602 Well, sounds like we have the same troubles. Though you've had the harsher rejections. Here's to us xD

A little heavy on the swearing, and I am not one for human/pony,
but this is a nice story:pinkiehappy::scootangel:

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I'm glad you liked it despite your misgivings. :pinkiesmile:

Comment posted by Asashi - Dark Fist Inari deleted Apr 30th, 2015
Comment posted by Asashi - Dark Fist Inari deleted Apr 30th, 2015
Comment posted by Asashi - Dark Fist Inari deleted Apr 30th, 2015

to be honest, I am not a big human story fan, it was... alright I guess... is it ok that I am being honest?

5959666
It's always okay that you're honest.

Hey, thanks for reading it.

I like this fic because it's somewhat relatable and kinda cute

This....this needs a sequel...and a sequel for the sequel...

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I'm considering one. Now I just need the motivation to do so.

10/10 would recommend to a friend!

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:moustache: Have one back! Thank you!
6130188
Thank you very much!

This was adorable~ Nice job on it! :D
I lurved it.

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