• Member Since 3rd Nov, 2014
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HudsonHawk


I'm a brony, Whovian, casual Star Trek fan, and a film geek with a collection of DVDs and Blu-Rays that numbers into the thousands combined. I'm a nerd for all seasons.

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James J. Quinn is an ordinary guy living in the town of Carney, Wisconsin. He's got ordinary parents, an ordinary sister and brother-in-law, and an ordinary nephew. As you can tell, he leads an ordinary life.

Then, one night, he meets a strange, disoriented woman in the woods. A woman with purple hair and sapphire eyes. A woman with three blue gems tattooed on her hips. A woman who claims to be a unicorn from a land called Equestria. A woman who calls herself Rarity.

This woman is also in possession of an medallion that has brought a pursuing evil to our world. Over the course of the next week, James and Rarity will develop a deep bond, heal a few wounds, and, joined by a few other Equestrian visitors, battle a madman for the fate of two universes.

Chapters (10)
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Comments ( 44 )

>Humanized ponies

that shit is fucking disgusting get it away from the face

Wouldnt that be 'hoofball'? As the horrible puns may go...

5229979
Thank you for that incredibly deep, insightful piece of constructive criticism. The world is truly missing out on its next great critic.

5231759
D'oh! Have summarily gone and edited. Thanks for the comment.

Just want to tell you that this isn't much of a prologue. :twilightblush:

"I can't complain, at least it's not 4Real, like a classmate of mine in high school. God, I pitied that kid." wow. that's great.

this story is f***ing fantastic

That was a wonderful story.
I wish I could give you more than one thumbs up...

5287712
For a first story, that's truly high praise. Thank you. :pinkiehappy:

Another thing: you are not worthless. I've met a lot of people- er, ponies, in my life, and I've never known one who's not important.

I see that Doctor Who reference there.25.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_m3xqrbH5XE1rw00z7o1_500.jpg

she'll still always be a part of you because she was your first."

~Because you were the first. The first face this face saw. And you were seared onto my hearts, Amelia Pond. You always will be. -The Doctor

DOCTOR WHO REFRENCES EVERYWHERE!!

5314028
Definitely. I figured it's a nice thing to say to comfort someone in their darkest hour, so I used it.:twilightsmile:

He had created two talismans: one to travel through time, and one to travel through space.

YOU ARE KILLING ME WITH THESE DOCTOR WHO REFERENCES:rainbowlaugh:

Matt shook their hands. Matt was a scrawny guy with brown hair and glasses, about as thin as the Tenth Doctor,

:pinkiecrazy:
*Laughes like the Master*

Living mannequins?" I asked

:pinkiehappy:
im done with the Doctor Who stuff I tired

That was absolutely amazing, that would make the perfect movie. If you write a sequel, I'll be on it faster than Rainbow Dash can say "10 seconds flat":rainbowderp:. Yes, it was that good, the perfect balance between action and emotion. This, my good sir, is 40% cooler :rainbowwild:. Plz tell me you would try and make another story like that, if you don't then I give you this: :ajbemused: :fluttercry: :rainbowdetermined2: :applecry: :raritydespair: :moustache:. That last one is funny is it not, plz take thin into consideration

5318091
Manly tears were shed at that praise. I'm glad to see that people are truly enjoying what I write. Just gotta keep that ego in check...

I'm actually working with another writer on here to take the core premise and revamp it as a comedy. You can read the first installment here.

This is one fantastic story!
Least to say I Loved it!
I do hope there might be a sequel to it someday.
But Thank You for such an entertaining story.

I just finished chapter 2 and I just have to say that this story is freaking amazing so far. I'm definitely fadding this to my favorites and will definitely read more in the future.

Needs some review in how you're trading off with characters speaking. Some are a bit out of order, as well as needing some additional cues of who is speaking for the longer chains of quotations.

5332922
I'll take a look and try to rectify that. Thanks for pointing it out.

5335502
Thank you. It's nice to know I entertained someone.

Thumbs up for someone knowing gilligan's island

*slow clap* Very well done, my good sir. My favorite part would have to be where it was not an end, but rather, a new beginning. Not a "goodbye", but a "We will meet again." Excellent work.

5340144
Thank you. I'm glad you were entertained. I always liked the "good journey" line from Masters of the Universe, and I loved being able to use it here.

“You... eat... chickens?” Rarity asked.
“Yeah. Chickens, cows, and other animals.” Then it dawned on me that, as a pony, she may be just a little averse to eating animals.
“Do you eat... ponies?”

You should remove that. I don't think ponies would react like that to others eating meat. I mean, Rarity owns a carnivore as a pet.

I would like this story 100 times if I could. BTW: GO GHOST BUSTERS!!!
See, that's why I like James. He's VERY, and I mean VERY relatable, or however you say that word.
Another great story from one of my favorite great authors. Back to reading.

you are one of the first authors to ACTUALLY explain stuff. You didn't just say "It's magic!:trollestia: Ta-da!"
You explained everything. And for that I bow down to you.

This not only entertains your readers, but also sends out a valuable message. Wonderful story. Just... beautiful.
I wish I could follow more than one time.

Jen is so definitely totally dead

Room 237

Please let there be dead little girls!

9/10 needs more Evil Dead references

Wow, Jimmy sure can move for being 300 pounds

This story was brief but enjoyable. Not bad for your first story.

My only complaint? Needed more cowbell.

That is all.

Ok buddy, you made TOO AMAZING of a story just to let it die like that.

:raritystarry::raritystarry:

There must be a sequel for this amazing story this year!!! 😁😁😁

If you don’t plan on making the sequel yourself; then perhaps we can focus on a collaboration to properly continue this masterpiece.

Keep Loving, Keep Edifying, Keep LoveandEdifying.

--LoveandEdify

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