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Aceman67


36 year old Brony who loves all things Sci-Fi

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This story is a sequel to Star Trek: You Won't Go Home Again...


A Star Trek Crossover

Story is on Hiatus until further notice, see link for reason: CLICK HERE

Zoe is an extremely bright, talented, inquisitive and fiercely loyal unicorn. With her father, a former Starfleet Officer, working closely with the government's dealings with societies outside of the veil as its Foreign Affairs Minister, she has grown up witnessing wonders no other generation before had seen.

With Equus on the cusp of a golden age where nearly every need is met, many of the world's inhabitants are looking to the stars and the vast universe beyond it, with Zoe among them, choosing to follow in her father's hoofsteps.

Now all she has to do is break the news to her parents...

Characters in Cover Art by KarmaDash

Original Cover with art by: Wadusher0

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 84 )

Yay a sequel...:twilightsmile: Now lets see what is happening in the Federation that will drag the ponies into it.

Awesome man hey if you don't mind checking out my story even though it's a bit behind its based of season ten of STO and during the middle of season five on the show its up to you but you don't have to

Loving this so far

6663040 Well I am still waiting to see the Cutie Mark Crusaders Away Team show up.

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To be honest, the only CMC I'm going to feature is Sweetie Belle, she is just the easiest to write for. The other Crusaders will make an appearance, but Sweetie Belle will be a main character.

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I put it on my reading queue, will take a gander.

Twilight in glasses hnnnnnnggggg... *chestclutch* :twilightblush:

Just a thought, but Flutter's romance novel has a lot of 'as' chains in its writing. :twilightsmile:

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Its bad airport trash romance novel, I wrote it like that intentionally. :moustache:

Hmmm. Interesting...This is obviously at least partially Star Trek Online based, however... What about the Undine and the Iconian influence behind the scenes? Equestria obviously changes a good deal, however it's likely to say the Iconians aren't going to give up their plans to destabilize the galaxy and make it ripe for conquest that easily...

You had my curiosity, but now you have my attention.

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I'm actually not following the STO timeline, while I am incorporating things introduced in STO, like Admiral Quinn and the Venture Galaxy-Class variant, I'm following the timeline set forth in the Star Trek novels (which I've now bypassed timeline wise, making this story an Alternate universe from the Books as well), which is drastically different.

The Undine/8472, Iconians etc. will not be appearing. To be honest, I found the Iconian/Undine story arc (the later Delta Rising/Iconian War stories) to be lackluster.

6663040 Okay, I know you have plans of your own, but I can't help but make a suggestion, Zoe should become friends with an exocomp.
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These little guys deserve some love, and I may be weird but I find them kinda cute.

Wow! Holy cliffhanger Batmare!. Lol. Keep up the good work. I too struggle to work regularly on my own story.

6863565 If she doesn't get her Cutie Mark from this, or at least Sapphire's friendship, I will be quite cross with you.

7110575 Yes, yes I am.

So, more please? And I hope you take my suggestion about a exocomp character under consideration.

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Unfortunately, what I have in mind doesn't allow for that, but what I do have in mind should be enough to satisfy you ;)

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I know, I had to rewrite parts of it, must have missed some. If only I had an editor that could proof read chapters before they go up......

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yeah, I was busy with schooling during February and March, but I got my Basic Security ticket and looking for work again, been unemployed since August.

Next chapter should come along nicely.

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Issues should be fixed, but I don't think 4 instances out of a 3000+ word story is really 'severe'. But if you know an editor or proofreader (or would like to do so yourself), let me know.

This is most ominous. I have a feeling James is going to be killing Rocky very soon. :moustache:

Sorry for the short, rushed chapter, but I wanted to get this arc started. Next chapter will finish it then we can get to Space Stuff. Everyone loves space stuff.

The different sections read well, it's when you put them together that I'm like: "Why are we rushing?" Of course, if this gets us to space stuff quicker, I understand completely. At some point you should probably come back to this and flesh it out some more. Not now though, I want space stuff.

7167334 Teleporter set to maximum dispersal, no evidence.

By the way, anybody else think it's not Rocky Sapphire's interested in?

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Teleporter set to maximum dispersal, no evidence.

Exactly. Everyone knows you can't just fire a phaser without it being detected.

By the way, anybody else think it's not Rocky Sapphire's interested in?

:raritywink:

“You enjoyed that,” The other guard pointed out.

“You’re damn right I did.”

:rainbowlaugh:

Good story. I hope you are not planning to kill Rainbow in this story that would suck.

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Go read my story Seventh Sense, that should answer your question.

7239016 Well damn, Should I start the wake then. Honestly, I am surprised that Twilight couldn't just teleport up their and save her.

Right in the feels.
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I killed off Dashie, go ready your pitchforks and torches already :p

Time to go to the Pitchfork and Torch store. It's next to Quills and Sofas, in case you're wondering.

Damn, I have to wonder did Rainbow Dash's uniform have a red shirt. I assume you have some greater plan for this as though it is dramatic what is the connection to all of this as far as the main characters go?

Heresy this chapter is heresy

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I'll be expanding on it greatly in the next chapter, but I will tell you this, I have explicitly said in the final chapter of the last story that the Relationship between Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash is an extremely close one, with Fluttershy being an orphan living in the Cloudsdale Orphanage and her spending a lot of time with Dash's family. As such, Dash would have been a constant presence and influence in Zoe's upbringing, as Rainbow Dash, along with the other Mane6, being surrogate aunts since Fluttershy doesn't have an extended family on her side.

As for her uniform, it would have been similar to the Wonderbolt's non-performance uniform.

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lol Glad you liked it :moustache:

7257030 Ensign Ricky is the only Expendable Red Shirt I know of. You know what brings dead main characters back to life? Cash money. Maybe upvotes. Get enough upvotes we could suddenly have Star Trek The Search for Rainbow Dash. :trollestia:

7257008 I thought it was out in Appleloosa, or did they move after the rodeo?

7258026 And I guess doubly so if it contains a castle with a scientist! :pinkiehappy:

Gore tag added for very minor gore.

And I just know the Griffions will get what they deserve....and that the truth will get out.... Right?

While I can understand the most likely why, as in going to war over the assassination of an Avatar of Harmony* would have enough of Celestia's rage in it, in all ponies, to be a near or total Extinction event for the Griffs, it does beg the question of what Celestia WILL be doing behind the scenes for payback? She can afford to take the long road to revenge, after all.
It also brings a more immediate problem of one of the primary defenses of Equestria being down until a new Bearer or Avatar is found...

*Since it was glossed over in a quick Starfleet Kangaroo Court covering The Hero's involvement against Tirek and "the Greys", I can only assume The Mane 6 still managed to graduate from Bearing the Elements to BECOMING living Elements of Harmony; I.E. Avatars of the Elements.

7257812 I just worry now that the pony's have lost one of their best defense weapons in the form of the elements/rainbow power. Unless we can replace Rainbow or pull a search for Spock.

7257839 That would be awesome and funny at the same time.

Also, it's common knowledge that the stick is standard issue and surgically implanted upon attaining the rank of Sergeant

Yeah, and they let you keep it after you leave.

“You didn’t tell me/her?!” Sapphire/Fluttershy asked Zoe/James in annoyance.

Heh... oops. Also, swap me and her, since Sapphire would say her and Fluttershy would say me. Either that or swap Sapphire with Fluttershy and Zoe with James.

“Rainbow Dash was known by many things. Daughter, mother, Wonderblot, Commander, friend. To me, though, she was just Aunt Dashie.

Wonderblot :rainbowlaugh:

Rainbow Dash was my mother’s closest friend. Growing up in the Cloudsdale Home for Children, my mother didn’t have many friends. The coming and going of other children as they aged out of the home or through adoption, along with her shy nature didn’t afford her many opportunities.

The episode on Saturday is probably going to break this particular fact.

She told my mom that I was the most awesome thing she had ever seen, then promptly asked where she could get one of her own. Those of you who know my mother, you can guess how deep a shade of pink her face turned at that question.

D'aww!

“I’m not in your chain of command cadet, Commander will be just fine.”

*cough* Yet *cough*

Great chapter, can't wait for the next one!

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I'll fix the errors later, as for the next episode, thats what the AU tag is for. Headcanon is a wonderful thing.

*edit*
aaaaand... Fixed.

I killed off Dashie, go ready your pitchforks and torches already :p

That you did.

Good luck with your story, I'm out.

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Your loss, because you're really missing out.

The Mane 6 are supporting characters in this story, serving to give the main characters support going forward. As this story goes forward, they'll become less and less important.

Did the Station have no shields? Or did Starfleet not give them that tech yet?

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Starfleet isn't in the habit of giving defensive and offensive tech away, even to their allies, so, no it didn't have shields.

“What does somepony who’s from a non-federation world have to do to apply to Starfleet?”

There's the $64 question. Now, I wonder what's gonna happen when she drops that bomb on her parents and Sapphire.

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