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When the Changeling Commander wakes up, he finds himself on a quest for his lost swarm.
But what happens when you get caught yourself? Well the answer to that is that you are pretty much doomed at that point.
Follow this heroic (foolish) changeling as he embarks (stays in a cell all day) on a magnificent (dull) quest to find (plays tricks upon) his lost battalion!
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Well, he's screwed.
Oh my gosh. A story that is well written, and has paragraphs both indented and spaced??? No, it can't be.
brb, checking sanity.
Wow, he couldn't even try to get in character, could he?
Well, can't wait to see how this turns out! Looking forward to more!
+1 Favorite.
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Why doesn't everyone write like this?
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Why aren't you the one who wrote that wonderful story Shadows and Mirrors. I must say your story actually had some inspiration for this one. Thanks for the feedback!
Thanks to everyone who commented or favorited this. You guys just made my day
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545905 I don't think thier keyboards have a tab button *dissapointed impartail face.jpg*
A "comedy" tag attached to a story that made me lol.
Your job is done correctly.
Hmmm...*pulls up a chair and 2 liters of soda* I'm intrigued....WE EAGERLY AWAIT THE NEXT CHAPTER!
ALLONS-Y!!!
cheese spray? srsly? CHEESE SPRAY!? why does a changeling have CHEESE SPRAY?
(I haven't even read this yet LOL)
The ending had me laughing out of my chair... Check Please... javascript:smilie('
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Aww, that's a shame. I liked him too.
"...And nopony heard from our hero again."
*THE END*
Well, nice one-shot ;D
jk can't wait to see more...but...proofread an extra time for the next chapter XD
BUSTEEEEEED
..... I swear you are trolling me right now. I have an e-mail saying you updated and a notice saying I have 1 unread chapter, but there are no new chapters.
What the fuck happened to chapter two?
I finished reading it, refreshed, and then it was gone.
583812 Wait, I missed chapter 2? DAMN IT! NOW WHAT SHALL FILL THE VOID?!?!
Swweetiebot: Sweetie belle!
Doubt many of you are gonna get the reffrence
I think I like this!
Please post more soon!
Damn straight! I love how your portraying the Commander!
A new chapter! I've been waiting for this to update!
I really do like the Commander, and who's this other changeling? Guess we'll find out later, huh?
Update soon, I want to see how this turns out!
ill have to read this later; but ill get to it
Am I a nerd for noticing these things?
i won't spoil it for people who read comments first.
It's getting better, keep it up!
Hey, at least it wasn't snakes*Indiana Jones Reference*! Kingdom of the Crystal Hoof...I see what you did there.
Well, now I'm super excited for the next chapter! I hope to see another update, soon!
I've been waiting for this chapter, and it certainly didn't dissapoint!
I like what you've done with that poor, random changeling from my story, and how you've given him an actual backstory and personality. I can't wait to see what happens next!
Also, I assume that changelings can't recognize each other while in disguise in this story? Since Reflect Fury apparently didn't recognize Mirror or his other friends as changelings?
619435 Are you guys going to somehow intwine plots?
That would be awesome.
And now you all know why you shouldn't give a changeling a cream-filled pastry made by Pinkie Pie
I find it amusing how this story never ceases in its crossovers.
As a commenter had once said, "It's like we're telling a larger story from different perspectives."
And wouldn't that be amazing? For the changelings are a hive mind-structure, but essentially they are composed of sentient beings who are capable of independent thought and personality. Some are shy, some are calculating, some are loyal, some are rebellious, some are pompous, and even some are,as Reflect Fury quotes, queers. But they all make up one family that share in an overlapping story of finding each other as well as finding the hidden truths that even they might not be fully aware of. Who knows, right?
But this is just me rambling because its late...anyhow, enjoy this latest installment. Cheers!
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The changling invasion will come... until then we must read Daring Doo.
Interesting chapter so far. I am extremely entertained at how three different changling stories are colabing together and intertwining their stories. Are y'all actually talking to each other about it or is it just happening?
I like seeing you intertwine my story with your own. I'd say you got General Carbon and High-General Double's personalities down well. By the way, incase you don't realize, General Carbon's name is based off the phrase "carbon copy" for copying documents, so it still fits with the copy theme that all changelings in my story have.
I'm really looking forward to what happens next. What will happen to Reflect? Or to the Commander? What is Double planning? Will Commander ever meet Mirror? I guess we'll find out later!
Keep it up!
679205 I just spent 10 minutes crying at the end,with thisrunning through my head..*sobs* Reflect....*looks up* Be safe. I won't forgive you if you die!
679205 Dumb question: Just WHCH stories are you crossing over with? I know there's Smoke and Mirrors of course but what're the others?
Also, we REALLY need to make a group dedicated to this 'Epic of the Changelings'
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There are few questions that would ever be dumb. This is not one of them. Anyway, I am so far only crossing over with Smoke and Mirrors I believe.
685285 And yet Smoke and Mirrors is crossing over with both your story AND 'A changeling to Remember'....
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We'll all just have to read on when the next chapter comes out
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I believe its a mixture of both. Mostly asking for permission and praying that you actually got their character right.
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Well so far, its just a matter of getting the rights and then figuring out a way to plug it in to the story. But who knows, the references may increase as the story progresses. So far, this is set a couple of days before the recent updates of Smoke And Mirrors
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Still, the three narratives are flowing together nicely, painting a MUCH bigger, beautifully EPIC story.
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Thank you very much, glad to hear it's still interesting
IT HAS BEGUN!
I'm honored my comment inspired you to ramble late into the night.(Assuming you were referring to my comment on TeaPartyCannon's Smoke and Mirrors)
I'm going to have to re-read all these changeling stories, I'm having trouble remembering which events happened in which story 
I hope Reflect is ok, maybe he could ask for the friendship lesson treatment with the commander? Or perhaps he won't even make it to Canterlot and the Princesses had nothing to do with this...
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So that'e where it was. I do believe it was your comment on that fan fic. Anyway, good job on getting me to think about it at least
And so the plot thickens!
Anyway, I would like to thank TeaPartyCannon and Blueheartpegasus for letting me cross-over with their stories.
The dreams and Mirror Match belong to Smoke and Mirrors by TeaPartyCannon
Ditto belongs to "A Changeling to Remember" by Blueheartpegasus
So what's going on now? What is the hierarchy of the swarm up to and what will happen to our bake-failing hero? Okay so he's not really a hero but go figures anyway.
Though number one will always be the one where Daring Do shoots a party cannon in my face.
Who told you about that?!
I never told anyone about that idea!
Anyway, does this mean it's the Commander's fault that oven went off at such an inconvenient moment during Mirror and Ditto's conversation? I can accept that.
The plot is thickening! What happens next? We'll have to wait and see~
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Yes, it was the Commander's fault the oven went off. But if you think about it , Fluttershy knew too.
As for how I knew about that idea
well...ummmm....he he...(Runs off to pack bags and head out of town)
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...I have reason to believe you are a mind reader. Are you a mind reader?
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...errrr...nope