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RarityFigma


An Eccentric Toy collecting, Anime Loving Student who discovered MLP one night in the summer of 2011 and has loved it ever since.

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A lone changeling begins to question the invasion of Canterlot. However only by meeting a certain pony will the monster make an important discovery.

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Comments ( 17 )

This gets really depessing if you think about it too much. I wanna see a sequel, so Blink can be happy...

BlackBelt is right... :fluttercry:
It feels so displeasurable... only one option, stop thinking brain!
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I like this, I really do. I can really see Derpy doing this kind of thing:derpyderp1:, and you really got the tone just right. Plus I really liked the idea of a changeling who would stop and see the MANY holes in his queen's plan, not just blindly following orders. I did see a few grammical errors but they're pretty easy to over look. Over all, I think this is pretty well done and I hope to see a sequel in the near future.:heart:

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Of course the plan had holes in it! It was made by changelings!
Everything about changelings has holes in it. :ajsmug:

So sad... Chrysalis really wasn't in her right mind when she made the plan and called the attack. She was mad, and crazy. Good plot that this changeling would be the one to see that, and that it would be Derpy pointing it out.

Aww this was so well done! And SO sad!:applecry: You MUST continue this!! :fluttercry:

this is an amazing story, My one complaint is that it ended so soon. I can so see Blink's epic quest to re-unite with his one friend!

PERFECT epilogue, now where's the rest of the story? :raritywink:

:derpytongue2: This story made me smile, need more!

I hope you continue on with this. The Changeling didn't get to tell Derby his name yet!:fluttershysad:

SO GOOD! WANT SEQUEL PLEASE!!!!!!:fluttercry::heart:

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I know! Of all the changeling fics on this site; this is one of my favs. It has so much potential to continue. Even if the other changelings don't believe Blink he should be reunited with Derpy. :raritycry::raritydespair:

Are you really really sure this has to be complete? I would very much enjoy seeing more of Blink. He's exceedingly nice and clear headed.

Maybe in the future you could continue this with another awesome chapter worthy of this story. Or give an alternate ending, maybe Derpy's love prevents Blink from getting tossed away, since the spell was used with love between Armor and Cadence.

What i like about these stories is hiw they end up predicting Thorax in a way.
And not only that but the changelings rebellion against Crystalis

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