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Sometimes I wrestle with my demons. Other times we just cuddle.
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Nice story.
Title reminds me of a song I think. I forget what song name it is.
Well hey. Not half bad, certainly has more effort put into it than your typical "Character A has wild, intense sex with Character B" story. Color me impressed.
4937770 My thoughts exactly!
Pretty damn good. Never thought I would enjoy clop including Lightning Dust since I wasn't exactly a fan of her when all that stuff went down at the Wonderbolt Academy, but this was very enjoyable. Thank you very much.
Welcome to the dark side!
We have cookies!
4938299 Only problem is you don't know where those cookies have been...
...Seriously?
~Skeeter The Lurker
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And the same source was also the inspiration for the title as well.
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...
Alright then. Seems legit.
Still damn good.
~Skeeter The Lurker
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The cookies have been nowhere untoward, I can promise you that.
I cannot promise you that I did not lick one or more of them, but that's the chance you take hwen you join the dark side.
Can't wait to see the morning after chapter after that raunchy sex scene. Hopefully Thunderlane has pounded the arrogance out of her. There is always a second chance and hopefully Lightning Dust will capitalize on it.
I'll keep an eye out for the morning after.
Thank me later.
Was that a TF2 reference?
I... I think I found my new fetish, for once I was aroused by the reactions of the couple, other than the discription of the flesh. Lightning Dust is like Rainbow and Sunset Shimmer mixed into one and I love it!
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You've done me proud, pony
I'm not into anything featured in this story and I was still able to enjoy it. Well done!
Epicneeeeeesss !!!
I can see this as a really nice Intro to a long story....
...but I wanna read the morning-after first~
That being said, you have my approval, sir. I urge you to consider taking this further, but that's entirely up to you.
Now we need more of this pairing... I'm sad it's over...
Wow, I really never thought I would have enjoyed the story aspect of this as much as I did.
I originally found it just looking for something to get off to, but now I actually want more... Great story, would really like to see a sequel where more stuff between them happens. 
Oh my god, my sides!
I have mixed feelings about the ending. On one hoof, Rumble is hilarious. On the other hoof it is really sad what happened after the kiss.
I would like to see this story continued. Coming off of the second chapter there is clearly substance that can be explored. You've already set up Lightning Dust as a complex character, but only scratched the surface. That and Lightning Dust is one of my favorite characters, and I'm a sucker for redemption stories. Plus that ending was kinda depressing, but I can also see the desired effect you were going for, even as you teased the possibility of more as Thunderlane continued to mull on the situation.
All up to you of course.
I rather enjoyed this, as the characters are well portrayed, and that's about all I have to say. If you nail characterization then you have a good story in my mind.
One problem that might just be a typo: bared and barred are two different things. To bare your skin is to be nude. To bar somepony's path is to be a dutiful guard.
She is preventing an objective being reached, not baring something often concealed. Should be "barring that was the mare…" etc.
Otherwise I would very much enjoy another few chapters to bring this further out of one-shot territory.
A week or so later and Lightning realizes she hasn't suffered her estrus!
I didn't enjoy this story so much in the erotic sense. But the comedy and romance and drama all hit home quite well. The erotic parts were probably better than I give them credit, too. Just personal kinks and preferences,etc. But yeah. I gotta say it was really well written, overall.
I kinda feel like there should be a sequel to this
Thunderlane, being a gentlecolt, did the first thing that came to mind.
He burst into uncontrolled laughter. That is me in the 90s
Thunder and Lightning, huh? I sense great potential in this pairing.
Kul'as my villain OC in the bar:
Slurred"You shoulda hit that- wait was it the fat one with the purple locks?"
at thunderlane's house
stroking his Cobra Commander calming it.
"Easy boy. Wait til he tags us in that go all out.
3 rounds of sex? I detect a pregnant lighting dust. Do make a sequel on this please
ROCK YOU LIKE A HURRICANE *AWSOME GUITAR SOLO* NA NA NAAAAAAAA BUH BUH BUH NA NA NAAAAAA
....I've got to be honest: for two characters that I had no reasons to think should be stuck together, this pairing works...oddly well. The ship name is catchy too. The dynamic between them is complex, allowing for a lot of (surmountable) conflict to overcome that makes any romance story interesting.
...I want more.
Thunderlane talks about wanting a family, Lightning Dust seems lonely and wants support. A sequel basically demanded itself when the story was written. I am invested in these characters and their lives... I want a continuation, maybe a series.
You know, I don't know what I expected when I sat down to read this. What I GOT, however, was one of the most adorable, drunken, sexy and cute stories I've ever read. The jokes were funny, Thunderlane's stupid sense of humour is right in line with my own, and it was easy to believe that the entire thing was a vicious cycle of mixed, drunken attraction. And then this chapter, I wanted so badly for him to fly out and talk to her. To my mind, this could become one of my favourite pairings in this entire setting. You, sir, have my rapt attention regardless of whether or not you plan to do anything further with it.
First thing that came to mind
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5352363 Finally! Someone got the reference!
SEQUEL!!!!!
i'd love to read more of this ship :)
Wow, this was really good! A perfect mix of humor and erotic moments, along with great characterization. Not to mention Thunderlane and Lightning Dust would make a perfect couple; there needs to be more fics with them. Definitely one of my new favorites stories.
I really enjoyed reading this, it was well written. Good job! But honestly I really think this needs a sequel. That ending totally left me hanging there, NEED A SEQUEL! PLEASE!!!
Wow, that is a terrible ending. After (technically) 2 rounds, i have a glimmer of hope a sequel is either here, or will be here. If not, I be very dissappoint...
...I am dissappoint.
Other than that.... Very well written, good development with few words, and most of all..... Ha! Haha! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Oh Rumble, you so silly.
i dig this ship
That was one hell of a authors note! It was amazing. So was the story loved it
This is one of the very few stories that left me dazed and speechless for hours. Nice werk!
From a fellow clopthor, well done. I look forward to whatever you have next.
That ending though
This was fantastic, although I'm sad the author is ded. This definitely needs to be continued.
The references, THE REFERENCES!!!!!!