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Mustard Is Best Pony


MUSTARD IS BEST PONY. MUSTARD GOES WELL WITH ANYTHING. MUSTARD IS TART AND DISGUSTING ON ITS OWN.

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God damn it! You did it! :moustache::moustache::moustache::eeyup:

So many things went right and wrong in my head after reading this :pinkiecrazy:

Mustard is Worst Pony. Sombra is better than Mustard. HONEY MUSTARD IS BEST MUSTARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That's.... Just wow... Oh yeah nice ending

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Mind blown.

Don't feel too bad. Pinkie is seriously tough to write for. It almost feels like a miracle when someone can actually get the right mix of zany, hyperactive, random, and 4th wall tricks to pull her off without going overboard.

I think with the sex party, while it's a neat idea for a CheesePie fic, you bit off too much to do with your style. You specialize in quick fics of around 5k and it's pretty much impossible to get the level of detail necessary for a good sensual scene when you also are trying to fit in a basic plot and as many different sex acts as you did with this one. There were certainly some extremely inventive acts that felt perfect for some wacky Pinkie hijinks, but the large scope hurt the detail too much.

dat was hot in every way with pinkie :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

The purpose of this request was not in the expectation of the greatest fanfic in the fandom, or even of *a* great fanfic. Rather, I sensed a need for you to challenge yourself as a writer, to test your boundaries as it were. One grows by meeting and learning from one's challenges; so, having met this challenge, if you have learned from it, I consider it a success. If you have not learned, then I fear it is I who has failed you.

As for the story itself, let me call upon the immortal words of the great philosopher, Rainbow Dash:

'A' for effort and everything, you gave it your best shot, maybe I've got a gold star sticker around here somewhere you can have...

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THE WORD SACCHARINE COMES TO MIND.
BUT THANK YOU NEVERTHELESS.

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I really can't believe that I actually read it! It was... obscene and quite ridiculous. The whole chapter was a mess. It didn't even have any plot. For me it was like some common scenes from a cheap porn mixed together into a story. Sorry but it's my opinion :pinkiesick:

Cheese had only had sex a few times before this? Wow...:rainbowhuh:

that ending tho lol i give it a ten thousand out of ten good job i loved it!!

OH MY GOD! I DIED WHEN CHEESE SAID โ€œDo you want me to take the chicken out of your ass so you can sleep?โ€ :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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