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Orion97
Come closer, I don't bite...unless you're into that.
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It's John Joseco's art.
4869750 Ah, thank you, I thought the art style looked familiar.
4870084 glad ya liked!
Do tell me that there will be a threesome between Soarin, Spitfire, and Fleetfoot, because nobody has done it before. Please?
4871847 You're kidding me! I can fix that.
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There had better be more.
It's a sin to leave it hanging like that man.
4872581 I promised more didn't I
4872942 make it soon mate.
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So tell me, humans. What would thou likest to see most when I do another.
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So tell me, humans. What would thou likest to see most when I do another.
4873028 Speaking honestly, more hot clop. Preferably M/F and F/M/F. Sorry if too blunt.
4873031 moar clop.
M/F/F...yeah.
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Can do! And no need to apologize.
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Can do! And no need to apologize.
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Can do! And no need to apologize.
Huh...damn, got top of the popular stories list. Awesome!
4873031 PLEASE do a clip between Applejack and Caramel!
4878960 I'll see what I can do, though I can't promise it right away.
4879007 S'alright, take your time.
John Joseco.
You know...
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4881013 Right, fixed it. It's a shame he can't do that blog anymore, I loved it, it was funny and different, though he got a cease and desist order from hasbro and some people were making it like their life goal to get it taken down.
4881112 While I was looking for that pic, I saw some bullshit feminist post saying that "Rape isn't funny"
Down with Molestia.
fuck em
4881139 Agreed. Rather than actually direct effort towards fixing the real problem or at least helping the victims they just looked for something to whine about and the blog was something that others actually enjoyed.
"Mind if I join?"
Greatest line ever.
Thank you my good sir! Thank you.
4881833 We all know what she was thinking when she found Spitfire in a room full of candles.
An enjoyable and exciting story. That ending was great.
Well done!
Darth Cygnus
5017741 Thanks, sequel on the way.
Erorr:
and laid herself on t, adding more intimacy
5116684 Alrighty, thanks! I'll fix it when I can, right now my computer is practically on its death bed and I'm hoping to be able to get a new one soon so updating might be harder for the near future.
Defiantly needs a sequel
5303356 Don't worry, in progress! I'll try to have it out in a few days here. Nice choice of name btw
that was awesome, when will fleetfoot join?
5314114 Soon, my friend. Soon. Be looking out for the sequel this weekend!
Overall, I really liked this. The mention of there being more makes me rather excited, as I rather like this pairing.
Now onto the minor issues (and not so minor issue) I detected while reading.
I only noticed a few minor typos and improper wording (her instead of she near the end, for example) throughout, a great fewer then i've seen in many other stories. The pacing was also good, an ideal mix of storytelling and sexy, rapid action.
Then the one other thing that really confused me half-way through: who was on top of who during the sex?
Ok, this clearly shows that Soarin' was on top, right? Yet shortly after...
Suddenly Spitfire is on top, riding him.
...and we're back to Soarin' being on top.
....and...Spitfire...
...and finally Soarin'
I'm confused: there's no transition between them switching positions, yet they seem to be doing so constantly. You way wanna fix it so only one remains on top, or so there are a transition/transitions (possibly a power struggle over being on top
?) between their apparent position changes.
Overall - it was simple, to the point, sexy, well written (except the above mentioned) and had a pairing i'm fond of. All and all, you will take my like and favorite, and you will like it!
5479131 Alrighty, thank you! Glad you enjoyed. I'll edit it before long and I'm already well into the sequel, "One Hell of A Night". It'd help a little if I knew what people liked though, like "oh god, imagine if ________ happened."
5479410 My advice is to write what YOU enjoy...unless you have literally no idea what you wanna write. PM me and we can bounce ideas off each other if that's the case.
5479642 It's arlight, I got it and I like writing some things, but I also like writing what I know people will read so it can be a bit of a balancing act
Nice story, but there's some things you may want to edit.
That word's incomplete.
That should be "stallion".
I suggest replacing that use of "she" with "Fleetfoot" since the previous text didn't indicate who was at the door. Also, when Spitfire and Soarin' start having sex, the text says that Soarin' was on top, but all of the text I noticed after that indicated that Spitfire was on top, and there was nothing that said they had switched positions.
5619576 Duly noted, and thanks. I'll make a full edit and make sure all mistakes are cleared up before I post the sequel (which should be ready in a week, if not sooner)
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When will it be out?
5870960 Soon, i'm just waiting on permission for the coverart i wanna use
I have to say that was totally awesome!
6078630 Glad ya liked it. Although I'm busy today I am working on a whole bunch of stories and pushing for a mass update, including a sequel for this.
6079559 Gosh!
a sequel? Don't tell me Fleerfoot will join? I'm definitely anticipating it! 
6081077 ...maaaaaaybeeeee....
Best line EVER! I almost rolled off my desk laughing when I went through this line. So frigging hilarious
(The fact that it's soarin's first time only drives spitfire wilder, I presume....)
Other than that, awesome story,great plot. An easy 4 outta 5. Spitfire enjoyed the ride and Soarin confessed his feelings for her, Soarinfire intensifies! Yay!
Spitfire's in heat and demanded a creampie. Wonder what her and Soarin's baby will look like.
7649463 Thank you, and I thought these two would work well too, they are coworkers after all