This is the story of Dave as he get teleported into Equestria by an unknown force wich is later revealed to be a powerful being just wanting to have fun. Really random stuff tends to happend around Dave as he has something talking to him is his head.
And before you say anything, the begining is really bad in my opinion and overused as all hay, but i promise that after the first i don't know chapters it changes for the better, I promise. Pinkie promise even: Cross my heart, hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye.
Thanks bye!
Chapters (30)
You have a watcher...
YES!
Sincerely the Doctor
I like it so far, dude. Keep up the good work.
HMM intresting!
First herp
I would really like a story pics to this but i'm not an artist. What to do?
Is there going to be any romance in this story? If so then who will it be between? This is important. Anyway, keep it up.
Yes there will, though there is a problem for meself since i feel i will royally screw up the "adult" scenes if there would ever be some.
oh and btw you have already met the two. "hint hint"
WOO SWEDE!
Good story so far, tracking.
If you guys can be sure to comment because i really want to know what you think :)
I like this story.
thanks! :) 02:22 am herp derp :p
*tapps foot* nice job at copying off "my second life."
the 180 chapter long story. *twitch*
I know it sounds a little bit like it yes but from here on out no second life stuff at all. TRUST ME on this i promise!
just wait for the next chapter!
Who is going to be shipped?
Or have you not decided? I'd guess Rainbow Dash. I hope it's her.
455048 Well i have an idea but thats gonna be a poll for later "hint hint"
455086 Yeah, that sounds fair. Fluttershy is my fav pony and I hate reading shipping about her.
Lol, Dave's brain is a jerk.
Longer chapters please me.
475970 you are like the only one that comment alot and i like that, means i get to know you a bit more :D herp
475976 :D
Good chapter.
476178 I am happy to hear that! :)
If you ship Dave with someone, make it RD please
476206 There will be a poll of some sort.
476212 I already know who I'm voting for! Can you guess? No? Well wait and see!
MHUAHAHAHAHAHA!
Sorry about that.
No I'm not.
Shut up brain.
NOPE.
Forget it...
(Any chance of a normal comment? No. Anyway nice story. Can't wait for more, but don't rush yourself.)
We need moar
Sincerely the Doctor
Dragon ball z eh? Well done...
We need moar
Sincerely the Doctor
Could it mean someone is about to attack him with a sword?
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I think it's the Iron Forge throwing a sword at ' an unknown monster '.
possibility that he is training to become a ninja?
Maybe someone wants to challenge him on a sword fight for the heart of the beautiful mare (Twilight)
"I wake up having a weird sensation. ‘You are just having a boner dude.’ God morning brain."
Made me fucking choke with laughter.
WTF did i just read and i think its going to be both
Fluttershy a close second? Please go with Rainbow... also I am confused, the sword looked like a sword to me.
507978 well the thing is that he dident have the materials for the sword he wanted so he just made a normal one for self-protections sake.
507988 I mean like, they were saying it looked like something and he was getting annoyed at this... and I don't know why.
508002 the brain was being annoying and said it looked like a pe... yeah i think you know what i am talking about
508069 Darn that brain! The brain is a complete douchebag yet I somehow still like him.
508075 well that is the point. me and the other part of this account both love that brain but it was his idea from the beggining and he has a "friend" so to speak whom you have already met. "The 'nice' part of the brain."
Oh how I love that evil voice that isn't his brain and the other voice that wasn't his brain
Sincerely the Doctor
PLZ be Dash!
Longer chapters make Chilly a happy gentleman.
528655 the next will be even longer, HEHE. artificial milestones FTW!
yush longer chapters are comingz
455093 She's my fav and I just like to Imagine that the character is and alternet me then I GET ALL THE FLUTTERSHY!