Zach is your normal teenage Brony and one night, after being rejected by the girl he liked, he is sent to Equestria by unknown means. When he wakes up, Princess Luna is there to help him along the way in order to keep him from turning evil by an entity living in his mind. Will he be able to stop Ark from destroying the world as well as keep the romance between him and Princess Luna?
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This story has progressed faster than most would think possible. There isn't much explanation why Luna fell in love with him so fast. This takes away from the intended dramatic effect, but this story is still really good. Keep up the good work!
:O You put my name in the story. I tracked it's awesome.
Wow nice story. I really like it!
This looks promising, let's see the rest
Yay for Kirby,
Wow. Just...wow. I love this story, and I can honestly say it brought me to manly tears. If there was a follow up story I think it might even be better then the first........... FORESHADOWING!!!!!
That…was…AWESOME
That actually brought a tear to my eye
Very well done
It was good but the ending was...
(I just would have liked a different ending.)
DUDE YOU DIDN'T FUCKING WRITE THIS STORY FUCKING COPYRIGHT, THIS RIGHTFULLY BELONGS TO A AUTHOR ON FANFICTION
609975.....................................................................................shit
LOL Is there anyway to fix a broken heart, love that song.
Runaway next to Papercut? Two chapters later: One Step Closer? Do you listen to Linkin Park?
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Nope, just things that I feel are depressing things that happen in my life.
Here's your sign.
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'Tis a good song
SHIT JUST GOT REAL!!!!!
BADABOOM!!!
for some reason. i feel some sort of trouble from that comment coming
LOOK OUT!! HERE COMES TOM!!!
I...LOVED...THAT...ENDING!!!!! FRIEKN AMAZING! congradulations Ark125
I've had those nights before they suck
I love it
ooooooo hes so lucky
KIRBY FUCK YEAH
That ending hit me right in the feels
DUN DUUN DDDDDDDDDUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNN
I like the way ark is turning pure against Luna and Celestia
that bastard
WAKE UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP
*Dosent move*
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU
Oh no
To much D'aaaaawwwww heart attack
ITS OVER 9000
"Applejack! I see the light! I think it's time for me to go home!"
"Na Granny Smith, it's just a life altering transformation."
"Ah poo."
HA
1138104 how can you love....this me just reading this chapter make me want to bang my head on the wall.
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hey im fucked up leave me alone
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Hey now. No need to give yourself dain bramage. That's my job!
1139967 love and tolerate... I will keep reading.
And lay off the haterade please, your setting a bad example.
Wait what?
umm ok ughh yeah, Kirby... Yaaaay...
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Indeed. This part was probably one of the most random of my thoughts when writing my story.
Remember, this was early on and so I really had no idea where I was going with this story.
I know this story has been done for a while now, but I just wanted to say one thing. I'm Alive is my favorite song by Disturbed and I'm happy to see you share an affinity for the band as well
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I'm glad to see I am not the only Brony who has an affinity for Disturbed as well.
read over the second to last line, you'll see it.
R-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-r-RUSHED!
3:39AM right now. tired, but THERE IS MORE TO BE READ!!!
this is good
Quote from "we bought a zoo"
incase anyone wanted to know.
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Indeed it was. I saw the movie like a week before I started writing.
The link is no longer available also Fuck Tia I had gone only a month and I was doing gooddl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Fluttershy.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Fluttershy.png
Now then I bet your wondering what I'm doing here. Well I decided to read this again and get a better 'memory' of it... short term memory all the feels. Though now I'm starting to regret it (the game)
Also BANANASdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png
Where is everypony getting these awesome emoticons!
And which link?