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Zach is your normal teenage Brony and one night, after being rejected by the girl he liked, he is sent to Equestria by unknown means. When he wakes up, Princess Luna is there to help him along the way in order to keep him from turning evil by an entity living in his mind. Will he be able to stop Ark from destroying the world as well as keep the romance between him and Princess Luna?

Chapters (36)
Comments ( 102 )

This story has progressed faster than most would think possible. There isn't much explanation why Luna fell in love with him so fast. This takes away from the intended dramatic effect, but this story is still really good. Keep up the good work!

:O You put my name in the story. I tracked it's awesome.

1. Kirby!
2. That prophesy sounded like a beautifully written poem.
3. Kirby!

Wow nice story. I really like it!:twilightsmile:

Ark? What an interesting plot, Twist.:twistnerd:

This looks promising, let's see the rest

Pure can swing his sword sword, sword his diamond sword.

Its over 9000!
Nice one.

Man, do I love this ship.

Wow. Just...wow. I love this story, and I can honestly say it brought me to manly tears. If there was a follow up story I think it might even be better then the first........... FORESHADOWING!!!!!

That…was…AWESOME
That actually brought a tear to my eye
Very well done:fluttercry::pinkiehappy::rainbowlaugh:

It was good but the ending was...
(I just would have liked a different ending.)

DUDE YOU DIDN'T FUCKING WRITE THIS STORY FUCKING COPYRIGHT, THIS RIGHTFULLY BELONGS TO A AUTHOR ON FANFICTION:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage:

582969 Aren't they the same person?
Also, why is it marked incomplete?

609975.....................................................................................shit

Sho be do, sho sho be do!

:trollestia: So let me get this straight, you are a mmmm'bitch that doesn't like mmmm'bananas? Well guess where you aren't going to find any bananas? ON THE MOOOOOOOOOOONNNNAH!!!!:trollestia:

LOL Is there anyway to fix a broken heart, love that song.

:ajbemused:....:rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss: That about sums up my feelings for this chapter also didn't he get Teleported not transfered by the doctor? Oh and are the two Whoovians as well?

Runaway next to Papercut? Two chapters later: One Step Closer? Do you listen to Linkin Park?

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Nope, just things that I feel are depressing things that happen in my life. :facehoof:

Here's your sign.:rainbowlaugh:

SHIT JUST GOT REAL!!!!!
BADABOOM!!!

for some reason. i feel some sort of trouble from that comment coming

LOOK OUT!! HERE COMES TOM!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

I...LOVED...THAT...ENDING!!!!! FRIEKN AMAZING! congradulations Ark125 :applecry::applecry::applecry::pinkiehappy::fluttercry::fluttershbad:

I've had those nights before they suck

ooooooo hes so lucky

That ending hit me right in the feels

DUN DUUN DDDDDDDDDUUUUUUUUNNNNNNNNN:pinkiegasp:

I like the way ark is turning pure against Luna and Celestia

WAKE UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP
*Dosent move*
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

To much D'aaaaawwwww heart attack

ITS OVER 9000

"Applejack! I see the light! I think it's time for me to go home!"
"Na Granny Smith, it's just a life altering transformation."
"Ah poo."
HA:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

1138104 how can you love....this me just reading this chapter make me want to bang my head on the wall.

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hey im fucked up leave me alone:pinkiecrazy:

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Hey now. No need to give yourself dain bramage. That's my job!:pinkiehappy:

1139967 love and tolerate... I will keep reading.:eeyup: And lay off the haterade please, your setting a bad example.:applecry:

Wait what?:applejackconfused: umm ok ughh yeah, Kirby... Yaaaay...:twilightblush:

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Indeed. This part was probably one of the most random of my thoughts when writing my story. :facehoof: Remember, this was early on and so I really had no idea where I was going with this story.:pinkiehappy:

:pinkiehappy: they are gonna be the bestest friends evar!!!!!!:pinkiegasp::pinkiecrazy::pinkiehappy:

I know this story has been done for a while now, but I just wanted to say one thing. I'm Alive is my favorite song by Disturbed and I'm happy to see you share an affinity for the band as well

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I'm glad to see I am not the only Brony who has an affinity for Disturbed as well.

read over the second to last line, you'll see it.

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