Trace Legend: Hero of the modern era and one of the few "superhumans" still in existence. But when a teleportation spell goes comically awry one evening and Trace wakes to find himself surrounded by talking ponies, things get a little more strange than the mage is used to. What will Legend do, and what chaos can he cause in a world where anything is possible?
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I have a good feeling about this one
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Your first paragraph is all telling. Don't tell us the character's age, weight, height, etc... It's like the dragon fight you're describing is going on, then your main character stops the action, looks into the camera and says, "Before we get to this awesome fight, let me tell you about myself."
See?
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Hey t works for DeadPool but then again he is a 4th wall breaker.
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Yeah I get where you're coming from with that, but honestly I just wanted it all out of the way. There won't be a lot of exposition save for the romantic bits and a couple of darker moments, so I figured I'd get it out of the way.
Good show
but, but, but I want to know what happens next. Oh I do hate cliff hangers.
DAMN YOU AND YOU'RE CLIFF HANGER'S!!! DAMN YOU!!!
this is catching my interest. continue.
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Oh, you don't like cliff hangers? Well then I guess I'll... THROW IN SOME MORE! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAA!!!!!
887803 NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!
YOU ARE EVIL! EVIL I SAY!! EVIIIIIIIIIIL!!!!!!
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Well them I guess I have to pony up and take it like a Stallion. Come on do your best. LETS. GET. DANGEROUS!
Chaos Lord. Hmm. Besides Discord getting free and probably making friends with Trace (Discord can still learn a thing or 2 [Change is part of the Chaos Cycle]) are there going to be a appearance of Screwball (possible romance or sibling treating behavior)?
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Well I don't want to give away the whole story, but I'll confirm that both Discord and Screwball make appearances in this series.
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and so it begins
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SO MUCH YES.
Wait how does he not know about the ponys because as it states in a later chapter when he met harmony she looked like a pony? SPOILERS! LATE I MIGHT ADD
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That will also be explained, but if you want me to put it bluntly, Harmony wasn't very creative in the beginning. So no rainbow maned, or lavender haired ponies strutting around. Just legitimate, everyday colors.
i say spike finally got big i bet he is happy now that he got... swag? idk just go with the flow of life.
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This is what needs to be done, don't break the story just to describe your character, there are plenty of chances to do that later, like when he gets into Equestria, I mean none of them wear clothes on a daily basis, you could have described what he's wearing with a perspective from Rarity, that's her character, pointing out what looks bad or good on other people/ ponies.
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This makes a lot of sense to me, and I don't see why I didn't think of that myself. See this is actually what was supposed to be a side project, something I worked on in my spare time while I was getting my other story "Dream Weaver" into place. I just sort of woke up one day and decided to finish this first, so the first prologue didn't really have a lot of effort going into it.
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flying on a dragon, round 2, BUCK YEAH!
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... I love you.
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Hurr hurr...
968383 Wait... Why did you cancel this? idungeddit